Yeah I read it too but it didn't really scare me au give me the shivers. I was kind of... Indifferent. I think it should have been longer and zaidi descriptive though. I guess some people have to build up a "stomach" to it ;) lol but to me, it wasn't very scary. I suppose, it could be scary to younger viewers but not to me. I'm 14 and I guess I can stand it. It only took me 3 dakika to read it (yeah I'm a fast reader) and think that it should be zaidi descriptive to be really vomit worthy. If I could rewrite it, I would. But other than that, it was a pretty good fanfic. Not the best but still good. I wouldn't recommend it to anyone under 13, really, but it's RL Stine worthy, lol ^w^zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
