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Name: Master Sword
Personality: Easily annoyed, Humerous, Honest with opinions
Bio: A well knowed critic in Equestria that is alisema to be both well scripted and worth a read if wewe don't have anything better to do. He has a sister name Cookie Crumb and a brother named Chimney Sweep. He lives in an apartment building with his pet parrot, kasuku named Longshot. He enjoys hearing about legendary heroes, yet he is unaware that he comes from a long bloodline of heroes

Name: Harmony Charmer
Personality: quiet but energetic
Backstory: when she was born, her parents abandoned her and left her inside a cardboard box to provide "shelter" after a few years, she came out of the box to see the world for the first time. But it is difficult for her to get used to it because she hardly knows anything...

Name: Echo
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: half Unicorn half Changeling. so Half Breed
Bio: Born half Changeling he fled the ranks of Chrysalis and went to the ngome guards trained their and eventually became a general in the Crystal empire
Other Things: he only wares hoof guards and spiked knee guards his Cute mark is twin swords crossing each other has a mgawanyiko, baidisha personality the other half is evil and that is his Changeling half he controls moto and earth magic but knows a little of other magic because of his dark half

Name: Snowstar
Gender: Female
Age: Not known... but she's old.... like really old! :P
Race: Alicorn
Personality: She always very serious... but is kind!
Cutiemark: A sparkling nyota au Snowflake.... I don't know yet...
Timeframe: long before Celestia and Luna existed...
Appearance: she is made of snow and ice... but want to know more? Look at my drawing!
Background: She is the Element of snow and ice, she and the other element build the world of pony’s many millions of years ago… The Element’s got in war, and Snowstar and some of the other Elements died… she did not have any children a husband, nor parents….

Name: Geomancy
Gender: Mare
Species: Pegasus
Personality: Optimistic and impressionable. Unafraid of a challenge, and loves adventure. Doesn't go out of her way to brag (in fact she's kind of the opposite of boastful) but loves to do something right and have a hand (or hoof, in her case) in a major success.
Bio: Geomancy lives with her mother and her sister a little ways outside of the kingdom of Equestria. Although she's not a unicorn and can't use magic, she has a knack for making magic talismans. These talismans usually have simple effects, such as summoning chakula au basic tools. However, Geo's work may have much zaidi potential than she realizes.

Name: Blazin' Blue

Race: Unicorn

Bio: When he was young, his parents discovered he had the ability to launch moto from his horn as well as from his hooves. Upon learning it as he got older, he made an attempt to make friends. Since he and his parents lived in Manehattan, most viewed him as a menace because of his abilities. He was shy and not very assertive, until one of the other colts smashed his glasses on purpose. Filling with rage, he let out a stream of moto that was five feet wide, roasting the mean colt-and landing him in the hospital with third-degree burns. Furious, he resorted to drawing and playing games, earning him his cutie mark. Fearing their son would put many other ponies' lives in danger, they packed up their belongings and relocated with him to Ponyville- a much nicer community. That's where he made another attempt to make friends. He became Marafiki with Applejack, Fluttershy, and upinde wa mvua Dash (because she found his moto powers cool). As he got older, he got his own house, which is inayofuata door to Fluttershy's, and they visit each other as often as they wanted to. He is also close Marafiki with Princess Luna.