This was my first ever fanfic of MLP featuring my ponysona, Night Frizz!! A hybrid bat gppony, pony with the distinct features of a bat! Fur, ears, tail, wings attached to the forearms~ It will never be continued because I am too lazy to finish any stories xD
The Power of Friendship: A Start in Magic
Chapter 1
It was a bright cheery siku in ponyville and a lot of hard working ponies were doing their jobs. A pink Earth gppony, pony with balloons as her cutie mark jumped in and out of Sugarcube Corner and a blue upinde wa mvua pegasus flying in great speed, controlling the weather. Meanwhile on the opposite side of the town resided the Everfree Forest which was dark and dangerous. Deeper into the forest, on a mti branch, a bat like gppony, pony slept upside down just like bats do. Her grey fur, manyoya was neatly brushed and her long black mane covered her face. In a few sekunde she started to sneeze then fell off the branch doing so. She shook her head and stood up, stretching out her wings that were attached to her front hooves. She gazed around the part of the forest she lived in and began to wander off, wondering what was beyond the forest. Back in Ponyville, a purple Alicorn was kusoma a book, outside of her mti library. A purple dragon was beside her, messing around with butterflies. “H-hey Twilight, I feel something strange getting close.” Twilight picked up her head and stared at the baby dragon. “I’m sure it’s nothing Spike really.” Twilight began kusoma again, while Spike shrugged and went back to messing around with the colorful bugs. But Spike was right, there was something getting close, it was the bat pony, she was soaring through the sky, then she spotted the juu of Ponyville. She was curious about the town so she dashed mbele before losing her balance and crashing into Twilight. She was soon greeted kwa the gppony, pony who sat on her back. The bat gppony, pony looked around, not noticing Twilight and got off, staring at the colorful town. Twilight shook her head and spoke angrily. “Rainbow Dash, how many times must I…..” Instead of upinde wa mvua Dash who would always crash into her, stood instead a weird bat pony. “Um hello there.” Twilight went toward the pony, eyeing her. “Well you’re an interesting pony….” The bat gppony, pony smiled and nodded. Twilight looked at the bat gppony, pony flank, seeing a cutie mark which looked like a muziki note on juu of a pencil. Twilight began to swali the pony. “So wewe draw? What’s the muziki note for?” Twilight asked curiously, the bat gppony, pony was shy, clamping her hooves together. “U-u-um well….I-I like to…...listen to….to music…..” Twilight smiled at the voice of the bat pony, nodding. “Oh alright, so what’s your name?” The bat gppony, pony hesitated at first before taking a deep sigh. “My name is….Night Frizz. I’m a bat pony.” She smiled. Twilight nodded again. “Oh, well you’re a bat gppony, pony I’ve never seen before.” Night smiled nervously. “I’m...I’m the last of my kind.” Twilight soon looked sad. “Oh I’m terribly sorry.” Night Frizz sighed. “It’s alright I guess. It’s really not a big deal. I like being rare….I’m sorry if that sounds a bit harsh.” Twilight laid back down, smiling. “It’s okay. Where are wewe from?” Night Frizz looked way back at the Everfree forest, then glancing back at Twilight. “Well I’m from the Everfree Forest.” Spike soon came over, gulping at the sound. “The E-E-Everfree F-Forest?” He heard the whole conversation Twilight and Night Frizz had. “Yes, but now I guess I wanna start living here, this seems like a great place!” Spike nodded. “It is, there’s so much to do!” Twilight chuckled before getting up. “You should probably be introduced to some ponies, let’s get wewe to meet my friends.” Night Frizz smiled excitedly, before nodding. “Sounds great!” Twilight trotted off with Night Frizz behind her. They came across a small cottage where Night Frizz heard a gentle voice. “Now now Angel, wewe need to eat, it’ll help wewe get stronger!” Twilight heard the voice as well, looking over at Night Frizz. “That’s Fluttershy, she’s super kind.” Night Frizz looked around. “So many animals…..” Twilight giggled. “Yeah, she’s great with them!”
The Power of Friendship: A Start in Magic
Chapter 1
It was a bright cheery siku in ponyville and a lot of hard working ponies were doing their jobs. A pink Earth gppony, pony with balloons as her cutie mark jumped in and out of Sugarcube Corner and a blue upinde wa mvua pegasus flying in great speed, controlling the weather. Meanwhile on the opposite side of the town resided the Everfree Forest which was dark and dangerous. Deeper into the forest, on a mti branch, a bat like gppony, pony slept upside down just like bats do. Her grey fur, manyoya was neatly brushed and her long black mane covered her face. In a few sekunde she started to sneeze then fell off the branch doing so. She shook her head and stood up, stretching out her wings that were attached to her front hooves. She gazed around the part of the forest she lived in and began to wander off, wondering what was beyond the forest. Back in Ponyville, a purple Alicorn was kusoma a book, outside of her mti library. A purple dragon was beside her, messing around with butterflies. “H-hey Twilight, I feel something strange getting close.” Twilight picked up her head and stared at the baby dragon. “I’m sure it’s nothing Spike really.” Twilight began kusoma again, while Spike shrugged and went back to messing around with the colorful bugs. But Spike was right, there was something getting close, it was the bat pony, she was soaring through the sky, then she spotted the juu of Ponyville. She was curious about the town so she dashed mbele before losing her balance and crashing into Twilight. She was soon greeted kwa the gppony, pony who sat on her back. The bat gppony, pony looked around, not noticing Twilight and got off, staring at the colorful town. Twilight shook her head and spoke angrily. “Rainbow Dash, how many times must I…..” Instead of upinde wa mvua Dash who would always crash into her, stood instead a weird bat pony. “Um hello there.” Twilight went toward the pony, eyeing her. “Well you’re an interesting pony….” The bat gppony, pony smiled and nodded. Twilight looked at the bat gppony, pony flank, seeing a cutie mark which looked like a muziki note on juu of a pencil. Twilight began to swali the pony. “So wewe draw? What’s the muziki note for?” Twilight asked curiously, the bat gppony, pony was shy, clamping her hooves together. “U-u-um well….I-I like to…...listen to….to music…..” Twilight smiled at the voice of the bat pony, nodding. “Oh alright, so what’s your name?” The bat gppony, pony hesitated at first before taking a deep sigh. “My name is….Night Frizz. I’m a bat pony.” She smiled. Twilight nodded again. “Oh, well you’re a bat gppony, pony I’ve never seen before.” Night smiled nervously. “I’m...I’m the last of my kind.” Twilight soon looked sad. “Oh I’m terribly sorry.” Night Frizz sighed. “It’s alright I guess. It’s really not a big deal. I like being rare….I’m sorry if that sounds a bit harsh.” Twilight laid back down, smiling. “It’s okay. Where are wewe from?” Night Frizz looked way back at the Everfree forest, then glancing back at Twilight. “Well I’m from the Everfree Forest.” Spike soon came over, gulping at the sound. “The E-E-Everfree F-Forest?” He heard the whole conversation Twilight and Night Frizz had. “Yes, but now I guess I wanna start living here, this seems like a great place!” Spike nodded. “It is, there’s so much to do!” Twilight chuckled before getting up. “You should probably be introduced to some ponies, let’s get wewe to meet my friends.” Night Frizz smiled excitedly, before nodding. “Sounds great!” Twilight trotted off with Night Frizz behind her. They came across a small cottage where Night Frizz heard a gentle voice. “Now now Angel, wewe need to eat, it’ll help wewe get stronger!” Twilight heard the voice as well, looking over at Night Frizz. “That’s Fluttershy, she’s super kind.” Night Frizz looked around. “So many animals…..” Twilight giggled. “Yeah, she’s great with them!”
Has anyone ever read CHEERLIEES GARDEN.
It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.
Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).
But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw sinema (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).
She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her zaidi like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.
Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.
Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.
And stay tuned for zaidi of my latest story..
It's probably one of the 'better' creepypastas.
But I still dislike it.
Not only is Cheerlees complete irrational in thi story. (killing children, when simply quitting your job could of worked just as well).
But there's all the fact, she acts like she watches WAY too many Saw sinema (I would know, I watch them quite a lot).
She acts exactly like Jigsaw.
Using clever traps to kill them in unique fashion.
But unlike Jigsaw.
She dosen't give them a chance to escape, making her zaidi like the Mark Hoffmen and Amanda Young.
Where the victims, where ONLY victims, they would of died, regardless of doing what they needed to do.
And there was no 'point' behind it.
Besides I LIKE Jigsaw, he's different then other villains.
He's still 'human' in some way.
Anyway.
Now that I got that off my chest.
I can relax now.
And stay tuned for zaidi of my latest story..
The warden of the prison camp on Devil's Island.
Max (At the time I created him, I had no clue he was an alicorn. Don't hate me.)
