Sonic shabiki Characters Article: AN EXAMPLE OF A MARY-SUE

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posted by gyrothehedgehog

NAME: machungwa, chungwa the Hedgehog
GENDER: Male
POWERS: He can control fire, he can control ice, he can control electricity, he can control earth, he has super-speed, he can fly, he is super-strong and he is invincible
GIRLFRIENDS: Every girl in the series
LOOKS: An machungwa, chungwa hedgehog with black eyes
BACKSTORY: His hometown was destroyed kwa Eggman so now he wants revenge on him
SUPER FORM: His super form is darker machungwa, chungwa and he still has black eyes and ALL THE POWERS IN THE WORLD!!!OMG!!
HYPER FORM: His hyper form is exactly like his Super Form except he is neon orange
DARKSPINE FORM: His super form with white stripes and no pupils
DARK FORM: The same as his Darkspine form
WEREHOG FORM: He is exactly like Sonics’ except orange

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BlazeFan9 u meen gary stu

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Prolouge for my story [repost]

posted by Caloria

My moyo rate was untellable. All I can say is, it was fast. And I don't mean just as if wewe finished a suspenseful movie au anything like that. My moyo was racing as if I just ran 10 heart-throbbing, unforgivable miles.
The man jerked his hand forward, palm up, inches away from my face. But it was fuzzy, considering he was standing on the shattered glass that was my glasses.
"I'm not gonna tell wewe again," he growled at me angrily, panting between each word, "Give me that BOX. wewe don't want to know what happens if wewe don't put it in my hands this very minute!" His voice raised louder, word-by-word,...

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The Conflicts Arcane (Reboot) Chapter 3

posted by TakTheFox

Chapter Three:

“Talon? Alloooooooooooooooooo?” Rin called out. She was walking through the city junk, taka Yard. Some employees were about and heard her. She quickly turned around a bit so that she could change her face to her cat-apparel, then looked back at the worker.

“You’re looking for someone?” The worker asked with a slightly worn out sigh.

“Um yeah,” Rin answered, “a friend of mine wanted to meet me here… is it okay if I look around? I- I won’t touch anything!”

“Um... well alright,” kwa the quick reply, Rin guessed the man was busy and eager to finish up, “just make...

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How I draw- Digitally.

posted by MephilesTheDark

hujambo guys, I super-bored and don't really know what to do, so I decided to make a digital drawing article. I would make a video but I don't have any software one would use for that, so... I'll just do it like this.

Before we get started, I'd like to introduce the reader to the preferable programs, although I'm sure one could improvise this tutorial into their own program.

The first one I'll use is called paint.net.

Paint.net is pretty much your typical XP MS Paint, but with a few extra features, such as layers, transparency, and some fancy effects. For this, we'll keep it pretty simple and only...

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Sonic bedroom

added by Taylortails

Me and my Marafiki as Furries

added by Magmashift

Source: Chriserony.Deviantart.com

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Asty Rose- Warm Darkness

added by DarkShades879

Source: Art(c): AnastasiaTH

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DARK/HERO Lil the Cat

added by Milesprowerfan

Source: Me.

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Marc Hedgehog

added by Emo-Bunny

Source: Emo-bunny

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(AT) ~Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star~ Dia The Seedrain

added by seuris

Source: (c) Seuris

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Dark drum

added by Emo-Bunny

Source: Emo-bunny

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GIANT FLAMING CHICKEN WITH LAZER BEAMS COMING OUT OF IT'S EYES! 8D

added by MephilesTheDark

Source: Chicken on google, shitty stuff kwa me. xD

Lia the Fox!

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Miguel,Rex&Blu

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Yxari AKA AcidMonster-- Character Sheet

posted by SierraDawnV2

Character Chart-- Acid
Character's full name: Yxari (Ee-zar-ee) Sadaris
Reason au meaning of name: None
Character's nickname: Acid
Reason for nickname: she is an Acid Monster
Birth date: 1st November.
Gender: Female
Theme: Headstrong-- TRAPT

Physical appearance
Age: 19
How old does he/she appear: 12
Weight: 25 lbs.
Height: 2"7
Body build: Quite skinny to a point where it's sickening. Her ribs even poke out when she takes off her hoodie.
Shape of face: n/a.
Eye colour: Glowing green-yellow, color of toxic waste.
Glasses au contacts: Tinted sunglasses to hide her eyes.
Skin tone: Quite pale, since she hadn't...

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My turn I guess? XDD A gift to 5 Extremely Fuckin Awesome People.

posted by sierradawn9

Don't rant, troll, bitch, au moan because I did one too. XD

1.) At first, wewe were mean to me. Then I read something of yours, wewe read something of mine, and we kinda got along. We respected each other... And wewe probably forgot that already. XD Now I see wewe are an epic win.

2.) You. Holy shit. You. wewe is EPIC. Your art is beautiful, yet complicated. Your literature is quite adorable and nose-bleed worthy. wewe are a very sweet person, and I hope we can talk zaidi in the future.

3.) wewe used to have a Mary-Sue as your fancharacter... Well, wewe still do, but I don't care. I upendo our countless...

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Gary-Stu and Mary-Sue: Let's not have our characters as gods, hmm?

posted by MephilesTheDark

Rules:

If you're doing this chemsha bongo because wewe want to proove your character is not a Gary-Stu/ Mary-Sue, then don't bother; they are.

If wewe don't like your results, don't blame me; it's your character, not mine.

Please be honest: There's no point doing this if you're not.

Each 'yes' is worth one point. Each 'no' is worth nothing. Tally the score to get the end result.

So, get you're pen and calculator out; time to see how bad your character really is!

PART 1: They have my nose.

*Name here* is my name - au my inayopendelewa nickname, my pet name, my Internet chat handle, my initials, my last name, my middle...

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Sonic High School, Part 1, The beginning

posted by Dethklokrox90

On September 3, Cynthia woke up seeing the beautiful siku outside when she walked out the door.
"Im gonna upendo this school year!!!" she told herself as she walked to school.

5 dakika later of walking to school, Cynthia met up with her boyfriend Mars.
"Mars, are wewe ok? wewe look pale." Cynthia admitted putting her hand on Mars' forehead.
It was warm.

Mars shook his head and walked off, Cynthia almost cried watching him walk away.
Rouge the Bat had acme along and met up with Cynthia.
"Hows the siku gone?" Rouge asked in her sassy tone.
Cynthia shook her head and ran to the restroom to cry.

8 dakika later after crying, Cynthia headed to class, math.

"This is going to be a hrrible year." Cynthia answered herself.

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My shabiki Character Profiles: Bethany the hedgehog

posted by Shadow5772

Name: Bethany
Gender: Female
Animal: Hedgehog
Age: 14
Height: 3'3"
Weight: 80 lbs.
Fur Color: Purple
Eye Color: Dark Blue
Hair Color: Black
Family Members: N/A (was adopted kwa Sonic the hedgehog)
Has A Crush On: Shadow the hedgehog
Powers: Speed, Psychic, Is a master of the dark arts, Is a wizard
Weapons: N/A
Clothing: Black spy suit for missions at G.U.N., Purple short sleeved shirt, black jeans, and purple boots with a white stripe on them (kinda like Amy's shoes.)
Personality: Nice, Sweet and lovable, Powerful, Can be angry at times, Is very gentile, Always knows the way, Is really intelligent
Hero, Evil,...

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Darkness The Vampire Bat: Chapter 1

posted by ThatMarySue

Authors Note: This is a sonic shabiki fic so if wewe don't like sonic then go away!!!1

Hi, I'mBlack Blood-wing Darkness Queen of Death, but everyone just calls me Darkness.

I am a bat like my sister Rouge, except I'm a special type of bat. A vampire bat.

I have black hair, red and blue eyes (that turn all black and bleed when I'm mad), black make-up, black wings, deathly pale skin, white boots with red hearts on them and white gloves with red on the top.

Today (It was storming btw) I decided to meet my sister. Rouge doesn't like to talk about me much, I think it's because I'm too dark and evil au maybe...

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Gina The fox, mbweha

added by kumik0