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Where 2 start...? The beginning...fine then. Well, I was not born with nine tails. I'm a Bake Furry...meaning each tail is a soul...basicly meaning I've got 9 other people in my head that each have control over 1 tail and could try 2 take over my body any time they want. I've also got access 2 everything they kno and anything they can do. That's perhaps not the best wording...everything they COULD do...b4 they died and then ended up with me...
    Needless 2 say, each of them has their own story as well...all 9 of them were criminals of some type....all of them male...Vincent the mob leader, Greg, who was Vincent's rite hand man. There's Jake the con-artist, Jack the burgler/B&E specalist, Jacob the murderer...there's Blake the tormentor. He's great at torture...Don the gang leader, Samson the smugler, and lastly Wilson....purse snatcher and rapist...u have no idea how iritating it is having these 9 constantly trying 2 tell me what 2 do...
    Up until I was 9 I had only 1 tail...however, 9 years was long enough 4 me 2 b tormented. Some ask me y am I so broken? Y am I so cold? Y amd I so hard inside? I'll explain this 2 u. I'll tell u y so long as u stay quiet long enough 2 listen...
    I never wanted 2 b so cold, never ment 4 it 2 happen...so what I rlly mean 2 say is I'm sorry 4 the way I am. I can't help that...I always thought of life as give au take, an equill extange...u get what u give. I've been changing since....but they will never c me now. I killed them...
    Let's re-start, back-track thro that and explain...I only wish I had a choice. I'm still looking 4 the answers...but I blame them 4 everything. My father was a drunk...a stupid, angry drunk. It's y I will never touch a drink in my life ever...it always brought the worst in him out...made me cower in the corner when ever he got a drink...
    Yes, bak then I was zaidi red then black...red with blood...and I thought streaks would b made permanit down my face....my little sister had it just as bad. She...was 6 when he killed her. His face showed nothing but hate 4 her...Mother had died giving birth 2 her and he's always blamed her death on her. He was drunk...he was always drunk...and I was forced 2 watch as he killed her slowly...he had me chained up on a ukuta and her 2. He had a barbed whip....I was 9 and forced 2 watch my little 6-year-old sister killed kwa our own father. After that he would have killed me 2...if Jacob hadn't decided 2 jiunge me rite then and make me suddenly less willing 2 do what he wanted me 2 do...which in this case was let him kill me.
    No, instead I decided 2 kill him 1st. I wasn't about 2 let my sister's death go without punishment...he was gonna pay 4 it. So I killed him...a life 4 a life, rite? A fair trade...except it was anything but fair...not with what he'd done 2 us for the past 6 years and longer...and that's when Blake showed up. I tortured him....and I killed him slowly, making sure 2 onyesha him as much pain as I could just like he did 2 us.
    This may sound like cold-blooded murder 2 some....but u have no idea what he put us thro. I found out l8er that mother didn't die during birth like we were told....she was poisoned shortly in2 the birth so she'd die just after the birth making the doctors blame it on child birth so he'd get a bunch of money 4 it...money which we didn't c a dime of. How'd I find out? A nurse from the hospital had seen him and was smart enough 2 keep her mouth shut...until I showed up and told her what happened...and who I am...about how I killed my father who'd killed my sister because he blamed her 4 killing my mother...
    She wasn't going 2, of corse...out of fear...that's when Jake, Vincent, and Greg showed up. Jake managed 2 con her in2 talking....Greg and Vincent were there 4 back-up which fortunately didn't need 2 b used....
    But I still had nothing 2 live off of and nowhere 2 live after I burned down the house...that's when Jack and Samsom showed up and taught me how 2 take what I need and not get caught. So ur wondering now when do Don and Wilson onyesha up...well Don showed up in a figt I ended up getting stuck in after Egg-Head us and I was off on a robbery mission I was sent on. That's also when I ran in2 Aiko and brought her with me, unknowing of what the future would hold 4 us. Wilson showed up when I was pondering whether au not I should take this rich girl's purse...and he sorda decided 4 me...
    I can't fix scar tissue...I tried 2 stop the bleeding and I only bleed more...so I will always have these torn, ripped petals. Don't ask me y I have them...ask me how I lived thro them.
Selena was about to shoot the chao when something jumped in front of her," LEAVE THEM ALONE!" It shouted and tripped her. She fell and saw a white cat standing over her," get out of my way freak! wewe have no business here!" Selena shouted and shot a couple fireballs at Tiny. She dodged quickly, but only for them to hit zaidi trees. " you're destroying my home, I have every right to be here!" She yelled and went to ngumi, punch Selena. Tiny was surprised when Selena caught it. Selena laughed," wewe just made a big mistake, cat girl. I not only shot fire, I can control it." Selena caught Tiny's entire...
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Cliff ran to an old mti trunk. He looked around and then waved his hand towards some trees. Nook and Scar ran from behind the mti and ran to Cliff. Cliff opened a secret hatch on the mti stump and climbed in with Scar and Nook after him. When they got to the bottom, they ran down a couple of hallways and got to a big room. Bard was waiting for them," Well? Is half the forest gone?" He asked. "No, sir. We had some trouble with that stupid wild cat. We only got a quarter of the forest cut down." Bard slammed his hand against the wall," That's not good enough! We need to cause huge amounts...
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This is basically just a orodha of all of the Acid-Monsters in existence as of this very moment. I have this here just in case my computer crashes. (I'm super paranoid about that.) And before wewe say something like "This isn't part of this fanbase!" Yes it is, and if wewe do say that, wewe weren't around when Yxari Sadaris first came out as a character. Acid-Monsters originated as a Mobian species.

So, as of today:

Full-Bloods--
Paris Blake
Almodea Blake
Albus Anguis (Owned kwa TheTacoMan)
Jakob Enu
Milo Smalls
Melik (owned kwa TakTheFox)
Ryker (owned kwa MephilesTheDark)
Yxari Sadaris
Yukari Nale
Ana-Luisa Oliviera
(Ana-Lysa and Sayofrick-- deceased.)
[You can only make a full-blood if I like wewe and wewe get my approval.]

Half-Bloods--
fox, mbweha (soon to be a full-blood)
Nazareth Runner
Rynk (Owned kwa TakTheFox)
[Room for discussion as to making a half-blood...]
posted by SilverFox73
Name: Cario
Species: Parrot
Personality: Wacky, loud-mouthed
Powers: Can manipulate and copy a large amount of sounds and voices, flight.
Skills: Sword fighting, pickpocketing, element of surprise.
Story: Long ago, Cario was part of a pirate crew, and was first mate of the captain. He was very skilled member of the crew, with his experience and looting skills. But one day, the pirate's ship was inexplicably struck kwa lightning! Cario was one of the few crew members who managed to escape kwa raft, and spent days at sea, hoping that he would find dry land. One day, his prayers were answered when he...
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posted by NoctusLynx
The moto blazed on as zaidi freshly cut firewood was tossed into it with Menae's vectors.

“We’ll I guess I’m next,” Gatage said.

“Whoever alisema wewe were going next?” Menae argued.

“Would wewe like to take the stand, Menae?” Gatage asked.

Menae thought of this for a moment, and alisema “point taken,” making Gatage nod, and allowing him to continue.

“So, in a nutshell, I was raised to become the best there was at the art of shooting,” Gatage began.

“Shooting a pistol can be considered an art?” Sanae asked. Gatage simply gave her an annoyed glare, and continued.

“Anyways, I was...
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posted by Shade2145
Hi. I'm Shade2145. It appears a load of wewe are Mary-sues. I am here to help. Unlike someother FC guides. I give advice in the best (and shortest) way possible.I don't try and offend you,this is just here to help.
So here we go!

Chapter One

Mary Sueing is when wewe bassically God Mod.
Don't know what God Modding is? It's when your Invincible,not being able to die. Thats wat Mary sueing is. Let's take an example from a RP.

N00b133!!!: I shoot wewe then telport wewe inside then kill you!! N00B! N00B pro!!!!
Mephilesthedark: Mary suer
N00B133!!!: LOLOLOLOLOLN00B wewe JUST MADE UP AN WORD

See what i mean? This will turn into something like this
N00B133!!!: I kill u
N00B134: Oh no wewe never.


Now. This is the terrible thing of Mary sueing. If we onyesha ourselves to weak and don't stop Marysueing,this Commuity of 2,257. Will disapearr and be absorbed into MarySuering.
Do wewe want that? No.

Chapter 2.

Never Mary sue.
That is all.
posted by TakTheFox
Yeah it took a while for me to think up something to whine about X{D, but here’s one. FIGHTING IN ROLEPLAYS. NO, this isn’t going to be me complaining about “VIOLENCE IS BAD! NERRRRRRRRR!” I mean… yeah Violence is BAD, but th- okay right, off topic, sorry.

Anyway, Fighting in Roleplays is usually… one of the most annoying things ever. If someone is fighting someone else in a roleplay, it is can be at times what I like to call “Stubborn-one-sided” where both side will act like no matter what, they are the ones in control, and the superior. Now I originally was going to say that...
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Everyone ran to the room that Rose was in. See was at the far wall, staring. Thorn ran to her and hugged her," Rose! I'm so happy you're alright! I was so worried I-...Rose?" Rose was staring into the purple mirror, the mirror reflected nothing but flames. Thorn stepped back and looked at Flare," What's wrong with her? Why isn't she responding?!" "She's being controlled kwa these stones called nightmare crystals. If wewe stare into for even a second, wewe go into a dreamlike state, where your nightmares seem real. wewe could be stuck there for days, and it would only feel like seconds." Flare said...
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Flare looked around for some way out, but everything looked locked tight. " Do wewe see anything that could help us, Thorn?" Flare asked. Thorn shook his head and then noticed the rusty bars of their cage," these look like they're really really old, maybe we can break them?" Thorn grabbed one bar and shook it. The bar became loose, but was still stuck in place. "It's moving!" Flare yelled, then suddenly covering her mouth so Bard and Scar wouldn't hear. Bard had fallen asleep and so had Scar, and they still seemed to be snoring away. Flare helped Thorn try to songesha the bar. It seemed to get more...
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posted by Rachel_Savaya
Follow My Dreams (Rachel's Theme)
by: Rachel Savaya

verse 1:

ive been hurt
ive been crushed
ive been told
im just crazy
but i will not listen to them
anymore

chorus:

cause i know
i know
i know who i am
and i know
i know
i know what my moyo wants
and i will
i will
follow my dreams dont
care where they take me
ill follow my dreams
anywhere

verse 2:

ive been lied to
been shut down
i just cant
take this anymore
but now ive got Marafiki to
help me through this
and i will hang on cause

Chorus:

cause i know
i know
i know who i am
and i know
i know
i know what my moyo wants
and i will
i will
follow my dreams dont
care where they take...
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Rose immediately let go of the people's arms. " No...No it can't be!..." Rose knew these people because the people were Rose's parents. "Rose, help us!" "You're not my real parents...You can't be..." Rose's parents stepped mbele her. "Remember the moto Rose? The moto you created? The one that killed us?" Her father said. "We always told wewe not to play with fire.", alisema Rose's mother. Rose shook her head. " It wasn't me! It was an accident, caused kwa a cloth being kwa the stove!" Her parents got closer and as they did, they became zaidi and zaidi fire. " No, stay away! I don't like the fire...
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Nat walked down the tunnel, hand against the ukuta and flashlight on. She walked around until she came to an open room. Nat walked around gazing at how big the room was. She shone her flashlight around and then something caught her eye. The light was reflecting off of something. She walked towards the shining object. Then she stepped on something. She looked down and noticed some purple crystals. "What are these doing in these tunnels?" She looked up and saw a mountain of treasure. She stepped back in awe and tripped over something. She got up quickly and was face to face with eight giant eyes....
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Nat finished making some eggs and bacon when Flare woke up. "Good Morning. Did wewe sleep well?" Nat asked, getting her a plate. "I slept like a baby! How about you?" Flare answered, digging into her breakfast. "Not one of my best sleeps, but I'll pull through the day." Nat answered then yawned. She got herself a plate and sat kwa Flare. "Did wewe have any dreams? I had a strange one about going to the public pool and then ending up in the ocean and finding treasure. Very strange." Flare said. " Nothing interesting, I'm sure of that." Nat said, uneasily. Flare seemed to notice. " You're lying....
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posted by Dragonfruit44
Nat was walking to The Speed Demon, The restaurant she and her mother worked at. She was carrying many groceries for the chakula they needed to prepare. She was about to open the restaurant when she heard someone calling her. She looked around, but no one was there. A thick fog was starting to come down the street. " Hello? Is someone there?" She called, but no answer. The fog was in front of her now, and she couldn't even see a foot in front of her face. She went for the door, but it was gone and she was touching a tree.
What the? I haven't moved an inch, how am I kwa a tree? She went to put the...
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posted by mephiles97
The Rasoul Saga: Chapter 11



Kyle released a quiet groan as he slowly began waking up from the effects of the tranquil dart that he had been hit with. He struggled to open his eyes as his stamina very slowly began returning to him. He finally did manage to open his eyes, struggling to focus his blurry vision on his surroundings. He was sure that he had been captured kwa the Dark Horses.

Finally managing to get his eyes to focus, Kyle slowly moved his head around to observe where he was. He was in a fairly large cell made of solid concrete, so they would most likely be very sturdy. Since he was...
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So the small city-like village of Crystal city was in a bind,with the greedy tyrant Bubba closing in to take all the folks prisoner,the people of Crystal city worked like clockwork to retrieve the gems from the caverns in order to pay off the bill.However all the gems were incinerated due to the heat surrounding the smoldering remains of MTL's pod,The villagers quickly gathered everything and brought it to Bubba,however it didn't meet the proper amount,Angered kwa this,Bubba shouted "Cheapskates!I was generous enough to give wewe vermin the title of this land and wewe try to trick me out of it!?You...
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Part Two “Problematic Circumstances”

Talon slowly opened his eyes. He was weary and dizzy. “What… wh-where?” He slowly turned his head and pushed himself upward to get a better look at his surroundings. He was in a metal room… with a locked door… one light… and one bed… a cell? He was in prison?

“How did I get here?!” Talon jerked to his feet and yanked at the door handle; obviously it would not open, but why not try anyway?

“Wait a second…” Nick closed his eyes and concentrated on what happened before this. “There was the… fire… then I was taken kwa the cops!...
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Heh,I bet wewe didn't think I was going to write this,huh.XD

Okay...time for the shit storm of shit storms.The original MTL series...oh dear lord,where to begin?Well the creation of my original shabiki character was no easy feat,Back when I created my FC I never understood the concept of Gary-stus and Mary-Sues(Until mephs pointed out sometime later),but where to begin...I suppose let's get the easy part of this makala out of the way,My regrets and mistakes with the original series.First regret...cliche back story.Again,long before I knew anything about cliches I decide to give MTL a back-story...
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Note: If your character is already in a relationship, wewe can still answer, but pretend they aren’t. And do NOT just describe their current boyfriend/girlfriend for all the description parts unless they actually have the wanted traits.

1.    Describe your character in five words.
2.    Is your character looking for love?
3.    Would they rather stay single?
4.    What is the name of the first male/female that your character knows that comes to mind? (THE TRUTH)
5.    Does your character want an...
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posted by RawrMonster123
(This is the new shabiki fiction I made the answer for.)

"RING RING! RING RING!" the phone rung that morning.

The young 22-year-old in the kitanda besides where the phone was rose up, yawning and stretching. She looked at her alarm clock. It read "3:00am". "Why are people calling this early..?" the young adult thought. She sleepily tried turned the light on from lamp and tried to grab the phone.

Finally getting it's grasp, she pressed the talk button and put it up to her ear. "Hello?"

"Is this Cassandra?" the person, who sounded rather professional, on the other line asked.

"It's Casey.. And may I help...
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