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Detective James Whitaker stood at the homicide scene, inspecting the body as thoroughly as he could, until he figured out what had happened. With all the forensic scientists gathered around him he started to tell them what had happened," well what happened was the killer was chasing the girl through the forest, and the girl tripped up and the killer slowly walked oveeer." James made his way swiftly through the branches and twigs until he reached a large mti and took 3 steps forward, and then continued." Here, he raised his gun and aimed at the head and shot then ran as fast as he could away."Every single scientist stood shocked, their mouths wide open.

After about 2 dakika one shook out of it and said," sir, how could wewe possibly know all that?" James stared intently at the scientist until explaining himself," well Jameson, if wewe must know. Behind me are a set of footprints where the killer would of stood, then just below that kichaka over there a but of a gun is sticking out, so he would of dropped the weapon on the run. So that's how I know... please wewe Jameson."As Jameson nodded, with only the slightest bit of embarrassment showing, James decided to onyesha just how cool he is kwa leaning against the tree. Just as he lent back though he missed the mti and, with a squelch, landed in the biggest pat of dog poo any of them had ever seen.

Jameson lead the laugh at James, but not for long as James stood up heaving with anger and shouted," JAMESON! shut up and pick up that gun now!" no movement was made apart from the laughter died down." JAMESON we don't have all siku so hurry up and PICK IT UP!" his face going red with embarrassment Jameson ran to pick the gun up from the bush.James knew that always works with the scientists so after all the commotion and died down and his kanzu, koti cleaned they all went to work identifying the victim, getting DNA and looking for any evidence in the surrounding area.

meanwhile at the old, abandoned factory...
John stood against the ukuta waiting for the killer to get here. He had his pistol loaded ready for anything, kwa the time the killer got there John had his best fake smile on and his gun behind his back."Hey Ron." John alisema to the killer, the killer, called Ron, alisema hujambo back but then all hell went down." Guess what the pigs found earlier today?... no guess's well I'll tell wewe your gun." John alisema as everyone else including the leader stepped into the line of view all with pistols in their hands. " I'm sorry Ron but we have to kill wewe now otherwise we all go down." John alisema as they all raised their guns to Rons' head, then the triggers went off and Ron instantly died with a nyota shape placed in his brain.



well hope wewe enjoy and if wewe like this check out my other ones
posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the maoni :) Please read and review and please don't copy*
Chapter 4
    Something fishy
    I had the perfect excuse to go back to the station, after my parents rash behavior I would need to have an apology at the ready. I mean, if wewe fight in the police station be glad wewe weren’t arrested.
    I entered the police station, looking for anyone similar. I felt a tap on my shoulder and whirled around to find the boy I was looking for.
    Cadence.
    “Hello again, Destiny,”...
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hujambo readers as wewe all know I usually begin with Abbie Preston my main character in this story but now I kinda wanted something diffrent so I began with the Gellar family and some of their relatives, this chapter is all them so I hope wewe enjoy it just the same! ..two characters in this chapter are named after two of my most loyal readers usernames..
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Chapter (14):
"Thank wewe so much for coming" alisema Laura Gellar to the last of the guests as the filed one kwa one out of the door, "Your welcome, Laura, and agian...
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posted by rory2011
chapter (4)


the Wanyonya damu took me with my sister and my brother ,they hit us on our head to pass out and when we woke up ,we found our self's in a dark nasty old room ,the room were empty ,the only thing I can see is the sun light crossing that small window
I looked around me Sofia and Jeremy were still sleeping on the floor ,I smelled something weird ,I feel dizzy ,I can't see very clear so I started knocking the room door strongly "help ,please somebody help me " ,I can feel my body hit the ground strongly ,I want to get up but I couldn't songesha ,I couldn't even breath

all I see now is darkness...
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posted by Dhampires
No matter how much wewe wish for zaidi it happens like the saa glass time runs out and you'll lung for more.

With that time your ideas that others may know them as sweet they run out and leave people wanting more.

We song writers, novelists, story writers and poets will all leave our adience want so much more. The reason? It's because of our massive creatively, our unique style and tenchquie it's what drives us to a certain point as of where we'll keep our audience entertained. While inventors may lose their touch after contrast copies from the same old ideas being modefiyed we have our minds being put to the test kwa our viewers. After all they matter most their who we write for right?
posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I woke up cold, tired and sore. I moved a little and got a face full of sunshine, I reached for the curtains and for my quilt. I opened one eye a bit to find them, but when I looked I wasn't in my bed, au even in my house. I was in the forest on the cold, hard ground. “What happened?” I alisema out loud. I stretched. “Ouch.” My back and shoulders were killing me, I touched my shoulder blade and winced. It was scratched and the skin was torn. I heaved myself off the ground and nearly fell back down. “What is going on?” I stood there for what felt like eternity, when I heard something....
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posted by rory2011
chapter (3)

    
"ok where are we ? " Jeremy alisema ,"I don't know ,it looks like we're in china "
"yea but there's nobody here ,the streets are empty"
I heard a weird scary voice ,"what was that sound ? " I alisema ,"it's my stomach ,I'm so hungry" Sofia alisema ,"ok let's try to find a restaurant au a place that we could eat there "I alisema
we were walking around the city ,trying to find the restaurant ,I looked all over the thing that can give me a clue for the place that we're in but I couldn't understand anything ,it's like we're in everywhere ,there were houses took the shape...
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(Verse 1)
I am in upendo with the guy whois sweet
till we meet It isn't possible

(Verse 1)

(Chorus)
We need to meet before we go under cover for each other We need to meet before we go undercover for each other

(Verse 2)
We haven't met yet
Still single hearted
thinkin' 'bout each other
Everyday

(Verse 2)

(Bridge)
Now & then everyday we need to meet each other goin' separate paths and ways to meet each other and go undercover

(Pre-Chorus)
We are going separate paths and ways sometime we need to meet in the middle and go undercover Now,

(Chorus)
We need to meet before we go under cover for each other We need to meet before we go undercover for each other

(Chorus)

We need to meet before we go undercover
posted by alicia386
Chapter Five

Mason met Olivia at his inayopendelewa restaurant. It was a perfect siku for a chajio, chakula cha jioni date. The sun was shinny, the clouds were extra white, and the nyasi seemed greener then ever. If only she knew that this was a chajio, chakula cha jioni date. He signed the last autograph for today as Olivia sat across from him at their round table. Her hair was curly and in a ponytail. Then she wore a red dress with a thick, black ukanda in the middle. His sekunde impression of her was still the same, gorgeous. This tarehe was going pretty well but Cassidy dresses better. Mainly because Cassidy is rich but he didn't want to...
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posted by Problematic129
*First of all thanks for maoni :) Please read and review and please don't copy*
Chapter 3
    Colorful styles and pictures to doom
    After that class I found out that Cali and I shared all the same classes. And hallelujah for that, because she’s been giving me advice and tips throughout the beginning of the day, and I stuck to her like glue.
    The zaidi I got to know I realized that she wasn’t all that perky, it’s just in the morning because she has too much coffee. kwa the time lunch rolled around I was practically shaking....
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posted by hgfan5602
Every weekend, I sleep late, like every normal teenager. Problem is, my annoying little brother wakes up at like what? 6:30 every morning? Yeah. And he dumps a bucket of water filled with ice in it on my face if I don't wake up at 6:30. What a nuisance. Otherwise, if I go hangout with my Marafiki before he gets up. he says, "Mrs. Mellark! Going out with your boyfriend?" Yeah, I like Peeta, as a matter of fact, if wewe didn't know before. Personal opinion, you'll live with it. What a strange little kid. No idea where he learned what a boyfriend was, but fine. The major thing that makes me mad...
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Hi. My name is Jake Gartner, and right now, basically a huge mutant serpent is coming to kumeza me whole, tear me to pieces of flesh, so I have no time to talk right now. Oh, um...you want to follow me? Sure, just accept that everyday will be the best of the thrills. Right now, we are not getting any help from the immortal world, so just know that we have a horrible system of magic right now, and we have an extremely low supply of weapons, thus, the chance that wewe will get out of this mess is around eighty-six percent. (because of me, the master of war) Oh yeah, the serpent. Enough talk. (ROARS) Off to kill a mutant serpent!!! (stabs, deflects, cuts a gash in its head, dies) That's only our first one, trainee. Whatever your name is. inayofuata time, I invite wewe to jiunge with us on our battle. And it will be even zaidi life-consuming, if wewe know what that means.
Yo, everyone. Chase here. wewe know, Jake's been uigizaji all strange lately like he's hiding something from me. And I don't like it. I don't see how anyone would. I thought we were a team. And I thought he alisema that I was just as great as he was. Now, this proves that he was totally lying. What a fraud. Okay, I found out something today that might be useful to the two of us. Well, that is, if Jake even wants to work with me. I saw his light on yesterday night. Face it, he's probably researching something about the mutant serpent. Am I right? Well, yes, I thought so. wewe know, I am telepathic....
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posted by hgfan5602
I walk into
The Fields of Sorrow
Once again.
Why do I walk there
Almost everyday?

I stroll along the grasses
Thinking
Bearing a horrible pain.
I think of the world around me
And how much they have inspired me.

I start to cry once again.
All my teachers
All my friends,
They have always stood kwa me,
When things went wrong.

I want a chance to repay them,
To onyesha them that...
Their work was useful.
To onyesha them that
I am truly thankful.

Why do I have to leave them then
Now?
No, now's not a good time.
But I know it was not intended
That I leave them now.

I want to onyesha all those people
That they have been
The change of my life,
That they have made my life so much
Better,
That they were the flames
In the darkness.
posted by sawfan13
Dear Mother,

Yes I know what wewe did to me

You threw me down the well

All because I made your life a living hell

Mommy, Mommy can't wewe see?

I'm your little adopted baby girl

If wewe didn't want me, why did wewe adopt me

Yes Mommy, I know

I, Samarra morgan knows.

The tape that is cursed

Is nothing worse

Than what I had experienced

Why didn't I ever sleep?

Because the farasi kept me up at night

Because wewe let Daddy keep me in the barn.

I have hurt others

I have killed others

I may have even sickened your horses

I bet wewe loved them zaidi than wewe loved me

Yes, I know I am a freak

Because I am afraid of water, so...
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posted by Knowitall123
 cover of the original Vamp out
cover of the original Vamp out
part 2

****2 Weeks Ago*****
I woke up thinking how this was just another usual siku
"Sweetie, we need to talk." my mom alisema seriously while her dragon Vinictus flew around her head
"I didn't do anything wrong, wewe don't have any proves."
My dad stopped me and put a hand on my shoulder.
"We kn..what proves?" He asked with a serious face.
"Nothing. What did wewe need me?" I tried to change the subject, Dia who just stopped chasing Emmas dragon looked at me.
"Well..we got a latter this morning.." My mom started.
"And it's an Invitation." My dad continued.
"An Invitation?" I was getting interested in it,...
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posted by Knowitall123
half a mwaka zamani my friend wrote a story called Vamp out ,but after receiving some mean maoni she gave up on it and when I asked to do a revamp she agreed.




I have,a pretty much normal life, well not quite as normal as wewe think.
You see I'm a Vampire. All of wewe who just started running in panic wewe can relax. I don't kill people, I'm Vegeterian. I almost never drink blood. When I need to drink blood I drink animal blood. I live in the UK, to be zaidi precise in London. Maybe wewe want to know how I look like. I'm a normal girl, who's a Vampire. I have long curly brown-blond hair and blue eyes...
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added by h3rmioneg
posted by -SilverFey-
It's funny. We're so different. Me and Kein. He's so shy. Quiet. Introverted.

But I think I would die if I couldn't talk to people.

Even our mark. He is curious, true. But he's curious in a different way. He just need to know things, then he's fine. He just needs knowledge.

Me? I need to see those things. Be out in those places he reads about. I want to leave. Go somewhere else. See something no one's seen.

I wonder about the other planes. I want to see them. Travel there. Why can't we? The Faeries are clever. And magickal. They could let us.

Sometimes I don't like the Faeries. What they did. They...
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Aznr ran down the kilima to the edge of the cliff. fallen trees scattered the ground and there was no sign of life. Aznr's hair blew back in the wind and memories of the past filled his head...

*Flashback*

Aznr heard a scream that rang through the forest.
Airellion! he thought, immediately recognizing his voice.
'Aznr! LightWater!' he heard the scream again.
This time he ran through the forest towards him. Aznr burst into the clearing and saw Airellion. He had an arrow in his throat and one in his arm. He was surrounded kwa an army of goblins, all heavily armed.
'Airellion!' called Aznr.
Aznr raised...
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Just a few things before the story; one, if there's something wewe don't like about it, please tell me! I want it to be as good as it can be. ^-^ Just please tell me in a respectful way, please. I would appreciate that. Thank you.
Also, this story will be a little (well, zaidi than a little) bloody and violent, and there may be some cussing later on. Just a warning.
That being said, I hope wewe like it!
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Gnarled branches. Green leaves grew from them—green leaves spotted with yellows and reds. They rustled dryly, talking of the upcoming season of autumn....
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