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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and ndoto :)~
Chapter 28
    The interrogation of a lifetime
    “Thank wewe all for coming, I know this is unexpected but my colleague here, Cadence, has just found some new astounding evidence. Cadence?”
    “Here,” Cadence stood up and handed him the diary, Jess silently gagged as most of the girl’s (or women) tried to look zaidi attractive.
    “This,” the police held it in the air. “Is a personal data of the victim, Dorothy Loreans, a diary she updated daily until the night she died. Does anyone want to tell us something before we confront you.”
    Silence.
    “Good, um…Serache, it seems wewe and Dorothy had quite a rough time, huh?”
    Serache, who I’ve been refusing to look out because I know once I start I won’t stop, paled. “My, um cousin and her Marafiki weren’t really buddy buddy with me, sir.”
    “Is that true…Meredith?”
    Meredith clenched her jaw. “Yes, yes, it is, she wasn’t a part of a group, she wasn’t our friend, she hated us and we hated her, easy.”
    The cop nodded. “Okay, um…Mr. and Mrs. Loreans, in here your daughter doesn’t seem to like wewe much, it describes here how wewe barely take care of them anymore, is that true?”
    Mom and dad looked at each other panicked, clearly shocked. Dad cleared her throat. “Time’s have been tough during that time, it wasn’t neglect, it was just the matter of not enough money.”
    The cop cocked his head, narrowing his eyes. “Matter of money? wewe live in a fancy, expensive, house. And in here, it describes how wewe threw this really expensive party for Dorothy’s sweet sixteen, cost zaidi than a billion of dollars if correct, and her eighteenth birthday cost even zaidi of that.”
    Dad paled, looking furious and mom looked close to tears.
    “And your daughter, Destiny, hello,” he continued. “It says in here wewe didn’t even throw her a party, wewe didn’t even get her a present. Not to mention the fact that Dorothy tells us wewe practically kicked her out.”
    Dad stood up, throwing his hand violently on the table. “That’s not true!” He roared.
    “Oh, is it?” Cadence asked, “what is true Mrs. Loreans?”
    Mom looked up, eyes full of tears. “It wasn’t that we didn’t upendo them, god bless there souls, we do, we really do. We just weren’t ready, we took precautions, we tried. But it didn’t work, we couldn’t give them away, our parents would have our necks!”
    Mom turned to me. “I upendo wewe sweetie, and I’m sorry for not doing a very good job. I’m sorry for not holding you, loving you, soothing you. I just wasn’t ready, Dave-”
    “Cindy,” dad warned, and I felt myself shiver at it’s cold tone. “Don’t.”
    “I’m not lying! Not to them! I upendo my daughter’s! I always have. I always will.” Mom looked dad square in the eye, I took her hand, and she looked at me.
    I nodded, smiling at her. “Go on.”
    “We may not have had a strong onyesha of our love, I was just so angry. I didn’t want any responsibilities, Dave kept saying that we should get rid of them, but I couldn’t. It’s what started most of our fights, we weren’t ready for children then, but if that’s how he thought of wewe guys now, would he change his mind. We started fighting and I couldn’t look at wewe guys without snapping…I’m so sorry.”
    Mom broke off crying. “I w-w-as conv-v-vinced that wewe were the c-c--cause of our f-f-fighting! I wanted wewe to feel the p-pain I felt! My parents were just as worse!”
    “Mom!” I hug her, trying to calm her down, and her sobbing slowed a bit.
    “I’d look at wewe and just see everything in your eyes, me and Dave, broken futures, soon to be broken hearts. I hid from wewe when wewe needed me the most. And when Dorothy died! I felt plagued. I kept on thinking if I tried, would she still be alive. And you, ho my sweet Destiny, when I heard about wewe almost being choked to death, I couldn’t control myself, it was like I was losing wewe to, like I could do nothing to help. I didn’t help Dorothy, and if I had, she would probably be alive.”
    Dad snorted. “Dorothy died because of her own foolishness.”
    “Shut up!” I yelled, and everyone looked at me shocked. “Just shut up! It’s always us doing something wrong! And never you! If mom could admit her mistakes why can’t you!”
    “She’s right Dave, we’ve made so many mistakes, I’m ashamed and I’m sorry. This is all our faults, we’ve Lost everything we’ve worked for, and then some. It all fell apart!”
    Mom cut off sobbing again, and I held her. The police man cleared his throat. “Mr. Loreans, did wewe have anything to do with Dorothy’s death?”
    “NO! I did not! I loved her just as much as everybody did!”
    The cop nodded. “Because everyone loved Dorothy…” he continued walking, until he stopped kwa me. “And not you.”
    “What?!”
    “You were jealous weren’t you?”
    “I didn’t kill her!”
    Cadence nods. “Yeah, bud, she didn’t kill her sister, she wouldn’t.”
    Officer bud gave him a look. “Just cause she alisema she didn’t doesn’t mean it’s true, wewe should know that, don’t let your emotions get in the way of your sense.”
    Cadence clenched his jaw, glaring at him.
    “What happened to all is innocent until proven guilty?” I asked. “You can’t accuse me, wewe can ask me. And I’m telling you, I didn’t kill her.”
    The cop snorted. “Yeah right, the girl who has visions of her dead sister’s memories, things that only Dorothy and the people that were there could know. Didn’t wewe claimed wewe had a vision of Dorothy running in the woods? How would wewe know that, unless wewe were.”
    “My visions are true! I didn’t kill her! Just because wewe don’t have strong faith doesn’t mean wewe can accuse me, nothing’s impossible! Those visions were real, I had them, and I’m not crazy.”
    “I’ll believe it when wewe have proof.” He stated, uandishi something in his journal after a rude glance at me.
    I look at his police badge, on it is a small scratch, lucky for me I had excellent observation. I grinned.
    “Your badge.”
    “What of it?” He didn’t look up from his notes.
    “It’s got a scratch on it, that…”, a faded visual of a memory popped up in front of my eyes. “You got from arresting a guy with a knife, that got a small scratch on it, but a big scar on your chest. The kisu wasn’t big, but it wasn’t weak, it left ugly marking’s behind it, especially your scar.”
    The cop blinks sharply, Cadence winks at me, and Jess is pumping her fist in the air. Mom’s smiling, and dad looks like tomatoes.
    “Well…um…lucky…no…I…”
    “Aren’t wewe getting it wewe insufferable narcissist,” mom said, glaring at him. “She’s. Psychic.”
    Everyone in the room, had there eyes bulging out of there sockets, except Serache who was smirking at me, she nods.
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Chapter (12):
Abbie and Leo were walking in the hallways during study hall, they stopped because Leo had to grab his French book , Abbie spotted Susie and Brad in the crowd of students, Susie was whispering something to Brad, after she was done his eyes widened and he glared at Susie, "Does your mom know?" Abbie heard him say, "Shh!" alisema Susie, then they were both whispering again, "Ab!" alisema Leo, "That's the third time I've spotted wewe like this!" he said, "I'm sorry" she said, "What are so interested in?" he asked, "Susie" she whispered, "Susie Gellar, Lily's sister?" he whispered, "Yes"...
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posted by alicia386
This is a continuation of The Dying Ashes. I am Katherine Adams and I have received this manuscript my aunt had sent me weeks ago. She has gone missing. I fear for her life and I wish not to speak of her. I must continur this tale.

I knew Dylon very well. He was like a sekunde father to me so his death took a great toll on me. To continue my aunt's research I have had to follow those four demigods very closely. I have learned so much about them. I think that maybe it is better to songesha from city to city so they can't get a good lead on where I am. So far it has worked.

Gabriel and Maycen were...
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 Saukerl
Saukerl
"SAUMENSCH!" I hollered from inayofuata door. Saumensch isn't really the nicest thing wewe can call someone, it is like an insult, that is, like calling someone a pig in America. But right now, I am not in America, I am in Germany, so live with it. You'll get used to it, don't worry. "SAUKERL!" Matna hollered back. Saukerl is about the same thing, except used to call men and boys that, while Saumensch is used to call girls and women that. Her name is Matna Johanasen.Anyways, my name is Carls. Carls Shotansen. Pleased to meet you. The story of "Way to Go, Saumensch: A Note From the Saukerl" all started on one foggy night...when everyone was asleep, except for one very peculiar being. And, he, was not German. He bore the symbol of the nyota of David. He was a Jew.
 nyota of David
Star of David
posted by Problematic129
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Chapter 6
    Breaking news
    A few hours later, and wewe found all of us racing out of the movie theater to our car, which we thankfully parked far away from the scene. We jumped in and when we all finally stepped through Lara’s front door we burst out laughing, falling to the floor.
    “There faces!”
    “Their reactions!”
    “That was so fun!”
    “You should have seen that dude! The balloon...
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posted by alicia386
~Please read it and maoni at the bottom~
Thanks!

Chapter Three

Mason stared off at the window. Was this new emotion joy au sadness? He couldn't tell. When wewe think about it, his life isn't all that complicated. He could be in a worse situation like having to remodel the house after a natural disaster hit. Instead he was a millionaire with girl problems. His father offered to have "the talk" with him but he refused. Cassidy had came kwa this morning. She asked him out on a tarehe and he alisema sure. He couldn't believe he alisema that. 

There was something interesting about Cassidy. She had long black...
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posted by Problematic129
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Summary
Zyanna Connor is just your not so average girl, and she’s in the middle of a tough decision. wewe see her father is the legendary killer of his hometown, though nobody knows it. And when her and her brother songesha back with her father, his identity is at stake and the legendary killer may be found. The threat is a group of kids that claimed to have seen him, and the only way to ensure safety is to silence them. But as Zyanna gets closer to them she starts to see different people, and she starts to care. Now Zyanna has to choose her family...
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Prologue


Beep Beep The monitors from the hospital kitanda were rapidly going off. The violent shaking and movements made
them go faster and faster. "We're losing him! We're losing him!" They cried out, trying to turn the boy to his side. The
violent shakes stopped, as the one continuous beep on the monitor showed one never ending line.


It's been a year, since the arachnophobia slowly developed into agoraphobia. How, wewe may ask? It had developed from extreme arachnophobia, slowly and slowly growing so irrational that the kid won't even leave his room. His parents look at each other with misunderstanding,...
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posted by alicia386
Last weekend, Ciara, Zaria, and I, Teresa, traveled from Hollywood, California to Paris, France. We planned on living there for a mwaka and see how it goes. Zaria wanted to study fashion, Ciara wanted to study art, and I wanted to study the french boys there.

We bought an apartment about a mwezi before we started packing. Ciara is the organized one so of course we had our plane tickets, some snack because airplane chakula is cheap and disgusting, and we had our suitcases. Unfortunately, I am the complete opposite of Ciara. I forgot my suticase in my mom's car. Luckily for me, she didn't drive off...
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posted by 1999jacko
Dark Fantasy(I think)

Drake and Sam stood at the edge of the road waiting for the cars to stop zooming past. drake was starting to get really impatient so she started to shout," oh come on! how long does it take for us to be able to kuvuka, msalaba the road," his face going red and all the while Sam was laughing his head of at the rants that drake was going on about until finally he said," come on man lets just go under the bridge it may be the long way but its easily quicker than this, so come on." Sam had already started jogging towards the entrance to the little path that lead under the bridge kwa the...
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Through Her Eyes... Chapter One- Life No More?





Alice could still fell the warm breeze glide across her skin and through her blonde streaked strawberry red hair, making it fly every which way. She remembered looking over at he father with his warm brown eyes and brown hair a shade litter then his eyes. His nose big as every. She would always make fun of him for that nose. She remembered leaning in to give him a warm kiss on the check and saying, “I upendo wewe dad.” He looked down at her and said,”I upendo wewe two.” As he turned into the inayofuata road, She gasp. He slams on the breaks but it’s...
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Chapter (13):
"So, are we gonna walk nyumbani au is Noah gonna pick us up?" asked Leo, as they descended the school steps, "I'm calling Noah" replied Abbie, "Okay then" alisema Leo, he shoved his hands in his pockets and started rocking back and forth on his heals, Abbie fumbled her messenger bag for her phone,and found it just before she could dial Noah's number, it vibrated lightly signaling that she had a text, "I got a text" alisema Abbie, "Who's it from?" asked Leo, "Noah" replied Abbie after she'd checked the name, she read the text, 'Stay where wewe are I'm picking wewe and Leo up, From ur 'Also...
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posted by hgfan5602
Run now. Run fast. We all have a place that we desire to be, and that place is not nyumbani for me, unlike most people. My parents have started to torture me since last December, and I have had enough of it. My moyo is racing, and I know I have to get away now. I can't take any zaidi of this. My parents have been holding me in my room, locking me under chain and key, beating my head against the wall. Not your normal kid, the kid who thinks doing homework is torture. This is what I call real torture. Yesterday past midnight, I was thinking, "Why do my parents do this to me? Why? Why? I'm definitely...
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posted by Problematic129
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Chapter 9
    The Seven Deadly Sins
    Greed, gluttony, envy, lust, sloth, pride, and wrath. The seven deadly sins, we all know what they are. Commit one and wewe are sinner, commit all, wewe are very bad sinner.
    If I have ever believed I committed one it would be wrath, I have a good temper, believe me, but when it is broken. When I’ve met my breaking point, that is when I am at my most unpleasant.
    In the bible, it tells us about...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I dropped the bat and ran the two steps to his side. “Brett, what happened?! Who did this to you?!” His leg looked like it was torn apart. The skin was hanging in shreds, there was blood everywhere and I could see the bone. His arm was hanging at an odd angle and his face was covered with claw marks and a deep gash could be seen above his right eye. I grabbed some cloths from beside me and turned on the sink. Wetting one of the cloths, I began to clear some of the blood away. Brett gasped in pain. “I'm sorry. I should take wewe to the hospital.” I was getting up to leave the room to...
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posted by kitty190123
One day, a girl was walking through a forest. Her name was Rachel, and she was looking for a friend. Her and her friend, Misty, were camping, but then Misty disappeared. She then saw a dim white light. She walked towards it and saw a face, a body, arms, and legs. It was wearing a white dress. wewe know, when she thought about it, it looked a bit like... "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!"

That's all for chapter 1! Please tell me if it needs to be a little longer and feel free to post your maswali and comments!
added by alicia386
I deny the truth,
But really,
That is nothing.
I do that just to protect myself.

I cannot let the truth overcome me
All at once,
I must let it come at me
Pieces kwa pieces.

The truth is always shocking,
At many times sad.
But I must accept the truth
Even after a while.
Because denying the truth
Is like lying to myself

Denying the truth hurts my soul
But it also protects my soul at the same time.
I don't know what to believe.
It's all too shocking for me.

I deny the truth.
I protect my soul.
I protect myself.
But I also hurt myself.
One day. A girl named Rachel was camping with her friend, Misty. Later, they climbed trees. When Rachel fell from 5 feet, Misty went into the deep, dark forest to look for the ranger. After 2hours, Rachel decided to look for her friend. After searching, she found a row of what looked like cottages. Curious, she stepped into a newly built one. She saw a girl with long whitish-blonde hair and a white dress, slightly torn.You know, it kind of looks like..."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!"

Please tell me if it needs any other revisions. If not, I will songesha on to chapter 2. Note: For Chapter one, I will not go farther than "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!"
Chapter 1


Warren poked his head slightly above the covers, noticing
the blinds were up, inaonyesha a bright and sunny day. He slowly peaked at the clock, trying not to look at the walls around him. 11:03am. Crap. He closed his eyes, using his senses to go downstairs for what was left of breakfast. He grabbed his old baseball bat that Sam had aliyopewa him in a chance to try to get his little brother to become "normal" and used it as a walking cane. He had tapped into his hearing, smelling, and feeling senses to the point where if he did loose his eye sight, he could live. If only I could loose my eye...
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Chapter (19):
She walked into a unfamiliar kitchen, where three people sat around a small table, "Morning" she said, "Nice of wewe to jiunge us.." alisema a girl with pale hair and bright green eyes, "Shut up Suse" she said, "Lily please respect your sister" alisema Laura Gellar, she walked to the meza, jedwali and settled inayofuata to her father, "What's for breakfast?" she asked, "Pancakes,and if wewe don't want any cereal" replied Jonathan, "Mom, can I have two pancakes please" she asked, "Sure, Susie could wewe please put some for your sister?" replied Laura, "of course" alisema Susie with a forced smile and she put...
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