True Writers Article: No zaidi Unicorns (Ch. 1)

posted by hgfan5602

This is my first shabiki fic... and hopefully I will be continuing on this! Enjoy!

My name is Alice. I'm eleven years young. My life has been all... unicorns until this year. It's sort of like all the fun has been cut off from my life. Like adults and other people alike all want me to have a short childhood. It's strange, because it seems as if everyone else is having loads of excitement in their lives. But I'm the only one who is at home, trying not to cut myself everyday because of all the stress in my life. It's difficult not to, and I haven't spoke to anyone so far. I don't want to be sent to a mental hospital. I'm not mental.... am I? I think that's wewe to decide and for me to find out.
All of this... drama started when a girl in our class named Stacy decided to write a note and send it to one of my BFFs, Skylar. It said, "Alice, Skylar, and Sarah... wewe will definitely regret being mean to me in the end." The first thought that came to my mind was, "Why would anyone do that? Why would anyone say that? And sekunde of all, her name is faded at the bottom of the note but it's still obvious to see. Why? Why? Why?!?! Stacy was my friend... au at least I thought she was. Why would anyone think of something so pathetic... yet something so vengeful?"
Well it turned out that she told our teacher Mrs. Harris... and she blamed it on Skylar. I didn't understand. Now Stacy was also being immature and making fun of my other best friends' hairstyles, clothes, shoes, and much more! I mean, grow up! Seriously!! Not only that... Stacy was also crying to our teacher... and making a huge sob story out of it. I was pissed... and sort of sad at how my best friend changed so much. Oh, au should I say ex best friend.

alicia386 What is this story based off of? You said it was a fan fic what story are your rewriting? Also, adorable title. The character seems a bit younger than eleven. When I was eleven the biggest thing to have ever happened was not unicorns, it was more along the lines of silly bands and who is the funniest. We were way past the unicorn stage. The story all together seems a bit fast paced as if we are rushing into a story instead of giving us more background information and then getting into the plot. Instead it is like we are jumping off a cliff and landing straight to the plot without barely any background information. All in all, it is a good start and a already interesting story. Is this a journal entry or chapter.

hgfan5602 Okay thanks for the feedback @alicia386! I will reconsider that... and maybe change some things on this story because I think it's not the best that it can be. Sort of need to revamp. But thanks! This is a chapter.. but I need some time to think about this... i'm not sure if i should continue or not

Howl (2nd Image)

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Source: Twitter au Photobucket

Just Because

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Silent Hill:Into The Dark (PROLOUGE & CHAPTER 1)

posted by adamk

After days of debating, I decided to post some of my first attempt at fan-fiction. In this case the "Silent Hill" franchise. For those of wewe that have never played the games, wewe could always look up spoilers for them, since this takes place in the game canon. Anyway, here's the prolouge & Chapter One, please maoni and let me know what wewe think! :)
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PROLOUGE:TOLUCA COUNTY, MAY 2001
Frank was asleep when he heard the knock on his door. After forcing himself out of bed, he looked out to see someone he hardly ever saw. Nathan and his father. Nathan was...

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The Inevitable Fate 23

posted by rory2011

she slept for three hours near Kat ,the ground felt harsher and colder than before ,but Kat's body made Hayley feel worm
she felt the door opening and someone is walking over her ,he grabbed her strongly ,she opened her eyes screaming " mom ... mom ... please " she was trying to escape from Mac's hand but she's too young and small to fight a 36 years old man
Kat finally felt something ,her head was killing her ,she can hardly stand cause she Lost a lot of blood ,but all she wanted is respond to her daughter's scream
after she stood up she can see very clear ,she saw Mac taking Hayley ,she heard...

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The Inevitable Fate 22

posted by rory2011

Hayley was lying on the ground without any songesha ,David was watching his daughter being tortured between Mac's hand

he slapped her three times then he hit her head with the ukuta ,in somehow ,Kat could get out of Mac's hand ,she took three steps back but everything she was seeing is dark with red and black vision ,she couldn't run away au find a way out cause her head hurt her so much
Mac walked fast after she stood away ,and he pushed her against the ukuta
he was holding something in his hand
" let's see if wewe can handle this " Mac alisema , he looked at Kat for a dakika then he looked at David...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel kilima Chapter 17

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (17):
"Glad wewe came dude" alisema Josh, "Yeah" replied Noah "Aren't wewe three going to sit down au wait to be invited?" asked Bonnie, Noah stalked away from Abbie and Leo, and settled himself inayofuata to Bonnie, Abbie and Leo sat in the two remaining chairs side kwa side, "Your Noah's sister Abbie right?" asked Josh, Abbie noticed that Bonnie and Josh weren't pale haired but there hair was deep golden blonde like their mother, "Yes, your Susie's cousin right?" she asked, "Yeah, I am do wewe know her?" he answered with a ghost of a smile, "Yes, we go to the same school and she's in few of my...

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Denial of the Truth, Protection of the Soul

posted by hgfan5602

I deny the truth,
But really,
That is nothing.
I do that just to protect myself.

I cannot let the truth overcome me
All at once,
I must let it come at me
Pieces kwa pieces.

The truth is always shocking,
At many times sad.
But I must accept the truth
Even after a while.
Because denying the truth
Is like lying to myself

Denying the truth hurts my soul
But it also protects my soul at the same time.
I don't know what to believe.
It's all too shocking for me.

I deny the truth.
I protect my soul.
I protect myself.
But I also hurt myself.

Remember me Ch.32 and Ch.33

posted by Problematic129

~Genre: Fiction, mystery and ndoto :)~
Chapter 32
My best friend was murdered kwa my other best friend
    I awoke again to find myself lying on a cold stone floor, I felt just as cold, emoty inside. My head throbbed lightly, but painful, and my chest hurt when I breathed. But that couldn’t compare to the betrayal I felt when I learned that Jessica was the one that killed my sister, and Dorothy’s so called friend were the accomplices.
    “Help,” I croaked. “Help.”
    “I don’t know why wewe bother, Des. Your voice is weak...

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Misty: The First Chapter Chapter 1 (2nd Rough Draft)

posted by kitty190123

One day. A girl named Rachel was camping with her friend, Misty. Later, they climbed trees. When Rachel fell from 5 feet, Misty went into the deep, dark forest to look for the ranger. After 2hours, Rachel decided to look for her friend. After searching, she found a row of what looked like cottages. Curious, she stepped into a newly built one. She saw a girl with long whitish-blonde hair and a white dress, slightly torn.You know, it kind of looks like..."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!"

Please tell me if it needs any other revisions. If not, I will songesha on to chapter 2. Note: For Chapter one, I will not go farther than "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!"

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The Boy Who Cried mbwa mwitu buibui Chapter 1

posted by sawfan13

Chapter 1

Warren poked his head slightly above the covers, noticing
the blinds were up, inaonyesha a bright and sunny day. He slowly peaked at the clock, trying not to look at the walls around him. 11:03am. Crap. He closed his eyes, using his senses to go downstairs for what was left of breakfast. He grabbed his old baseball bat that Sam had aliyopewa him in a chance to try to get his little brother to become "normal" and used it as a walking cane. He had tapped into his hearing, smelling, and feeling senses to the point where if he did loose his eye sight, he could live. If only I could loose my eye...

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The Loser Squad, Chapter 3

posted by sadiebugz00

Realistic Fiction

Chapter 3
The Shopping Trip

Anne's point of view

I got out of my dad's car, walked a few paces, then remembered to thank him. So, I turned around and what did I find? 1) My dad had already left. (Pffttt....Jackie Chan time.) 2) The cutest boy I have ever seen.

He had chestnut hair with beautiful, gleaming forest green eyes. It looks like he's saying something, but I can't make it out, because I was so absorbed in his beauty. Once I come to my senses, I finally find out he was saying, "What are wewe looking at, weirdo?" I blush and turn away, walking towards our agreed meeting place...

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The Ghost Chronicles: Murder in Mapel kilima Chapter 19

posted by LadyEmzy16

Chapter (19):
She walked into a unfamiliar kitchen, where three people sat around a small table, "Morning" she said, "Nice of wewe to jiunge us.." alisema a girl with pale hair and bright green eyes, "Shut up Suse" she said, "Lily please respect your sister" alisema Laura Gellar, she walked to the meza, jedwali and settled inayofuata to her father, "What's for breakfast?" she asked, "Pancakes,and if wewe don't want any cereal" replied Jonathan, "Mom, can I have two pancakes please" she asked, "Sure, Susie could wewe please put some for your sister?" replied Laura, "of course" alisema Susie with a forced smile and she put...

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Total Drama Adventure: Rico de Janerio

posted by E-Scope90

Chris: Welcome to Total Drama Adventure

= theme song =

(Team Zoey)
Mike: hujambo Z-
Gwen: STOP.
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*Chris walks into the kitchen*
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Private: CAN I PLLEEAASSE jiunge THE OTHHA TEAM????!!!!!
Chris: Well sure but you'd have to be replaced.
With Rico.
Private: Oh sure!!!

(Team Triumph)
Private: hujambo Crystal I'm on your team now!
Crystal: Great.
Heather: *sigh* Another stupid bird on my team...
Skipper: HEY!!!!
Crystal: hujambo don't talk bad about me and the cute one....I mean.....................
Lindsay:...

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Inspired:Experience

posted by Problematic129

Part 4!!!!!!!! Thanks to wewe guys, I made another one! Again with lovely inspiring freedom pictures, and it has to do with the title, i hope wewe enjoyed it. I found some of these pictures on tumblr and we moyo it, both great websites and really inspiring. I don't own any of these, but I hope wewe enjoy this and it inspires you, it sure inspired me.
I'm going to make another Inspired soon, so look out. Hope I'm inspiring wewe my lovely readers and writer's. Write on and live on!
I don't anything (especially the pictures). Enjoy!

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The Treasures of the World (song)

posted by hgfan5602

Katniss and Peeta

We share it everyday,
Oh yes we do.
They are the treasures of the world
That we use.

It's not gold,
Zinc, copper, au silver.
Oil, not even close.

They are
Courage, determination
How women could have their rights
Today

The treasures of the world
The one and only place
Where wewe can find people
Of different color and sex

Where wewe can find blacks,
Asian, Syrian, and Australian
Oh the people of the world
The treasures of the world

The treasures of the world
Use them wisely
Do not leave them in chains
For the people wewe break
They will break wewe back.

Oh the treasures of the world
(All the colors, all the people)
The treasures of the world
(All the colors, all the people)
The treasures of the world

Different sexes and colors come together to walk the Relay

Inspiration

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True upendo Never Dies

added by hgfan5602

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Charmed and Dangerous Ch. 14

posted by alicia386

Chapter 14: Convicts See All and Hear All

It was around the afternoon. We were simply driving around town trying desperately to come up with a plan. Our awali ideas weren't all that good. Many of the ideas included us going to look for Dr. Hyde since he was our main suspect. Raven and I shot down that idea. If we did go and find Dr. Hyde, what would that accomplish? Dr. Hyde is a villainous man. I am sure he wouldn't be able to be fooled kwa spies in training. We would end up getting zero amount of information from him. He knows me and Raven. He knows what side we have chosen. Darrell was...

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Remembering the Past, Hope for the Future (memoir)

posted by hgfan5602

Remembering the Past, Hope for the Future
by hgfan5602

I sat there, at my desk, inayofuata to my bedroom window, thinking about the past events in 2012...and remembered the time...when I was at Relay for Life. It would not be soon before I, myself, passed from cancer also. My doctor alisema that I would only have a few months left, so I decided to make the most of it.
Our team had raised $6864.88 for cancer patients across the globe. We had all been preparing for this one special time. I was walking the Survivor's Lap, and watched as all the survivors of cancer walked a lap together. It was so cheerful!!!...

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Girl code:The Pamela Jones Sequel Ch.12

posted by Problematic129

Chapter 12
        The lovely fun of kickball
    “School, school, school,” I shake my head. “I blame the smart people.”
    Beth looks at me. “Pammy, were in gym, technically not school.”
    “But still in it,” I say.
    Beth rolls her eyes as our gym coach leads us outside, to the very hot air, oh my goodness someone call the rain! I then feel my spirits lift up when I learn were playing kickball! Yay! I usually hit someone in the face with my powerful temper...