Thinking of Someone Special (ME)

"So you're the newbie here huh," the odd man says to you, wewe nod nervously," well first bit of advice from me kid, don't mess with them." wewe wonder who they are," who are they," wewe ask still pondering who they are. The man chuckles slightly and a smirk appears on his face," you'll find out soon enough kid, soon enough. So whats your name," he jumps down from his position on the ukuta and starts walking looking at wewe expecting wewe to follow him. wewe stumble to get your words out," I-I-I'm J-jace, a-and wewe are?" wewe say gaining confidence as wewe stroll along beside him." Well Jace, wewe don't...

Derek Washington embraced the warm rays from the sun. It was his first time in a long time being able to stand outside without being yellled at that his 20 dakika were over.

The security guard took his machungwa, chungwa jumpsuit and ID that he would need to officialy leave the prison.

His stepdad and his mom were waiting in the car in the parking lot. His mom was smiling and running to hug him. His stepdad, former soldier, was scowling, as usual.

"Oh honey," his mom cried. "That was the longest mwaka of my life and wewe grew a beard. How lovely."

"Good to see wewe too mom," he alisema through her blonde hair.

"I...

My breath came out in a white, frozen wingu before me and smelled heavily of my mint gum. My footsteps’ sounds were wet on the sidewalk. It had rained just before I left the bookstore and, just kwa my luck, someone aliiba my car (boy, was my dad going to have a cow when he hears that…), so I had to walk all the way nyumbani in the wet night, all kwa myself. I prayed silently that I would be able to find my way because I was new in town and barely knew where everything was. I had to use a crappy GPS to find the bookstore. I was just lucky I found it.
    The town was Cassidy....

Chapter one
A Hard Time

Christopher
Present Day

"Christopher, Christopher!" My mum shouted at me though I was barely listening to her," Christopher, listen to me! This is the last straw Christopher, a 2 siku suspension and now your not even listening to your own mother," she gently smacked me around the head to get my attention back. As I slowly came back into focus of her shouting, my sister looking disapprovingly at me and my dad not paying any attention what so ever to what was going on," Christopher you've got to try harder at school, okay? wewe can't go through your life not trying your...

This is the first chapter of the novel I've been working on....




1
TORN
Derek’s Perspective

I look down at the little rascal, soundly sleeping on the floor. What a decision… I think to myself. I can’t believe that Jesse is making me get rid of him… I bend down to get Bailey, Carter’s old stuffed rabbit, so I can keep SOMETHING of his to remind me of him. I feel bad having to wake him up, he usually has nightmares and rarely sleeps well, but I have to if I am to do my girlfriend’s willing. “Carter…” I whisper, “Wake up buddy!” He slowly opens his one eye and thumps his tail...

Garren wasn't nervous, which surprised him.

Most people would've been scared out of their wits, but he felt.... excited. He was finally learning where the hell he was. Garren absorbed every word Kayleen said, and he slowly understood zaidi and more.

As they walked through the front door of the house, Kayleen began explaining everything.

"We, the residents of this land, call this land Feay. It used to be peaceful and a prosperous land. Even the government was decisive and kind, and they cared about their people. That is, until 500 years ago, when the high cha-gar passed away suddenly. No one knows...

So you’re finally finished uandishi it – the thing that has taken up all of your free time for the past two years (or more), the monkey on your back that wouldn’t let wewe sleep, that had wewe pulling out your pen and paper while on vacation with your family because The Idea came to you…
Well, you’re finished. wewe want to print it out, slap on a title, and send it off.
Hold up, there partner! Pause, breathe, put the the manuscript down. Easy! There wewe go….
What’s the big deal with a title?
Everything! It’s the first thing that a potential reader will see, the line that will either...