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Today is a landmark for Twilight mashabiki because Eclipse, the third installment of the Twilight Series, has finally hit theatres.

I have had the opportunity to see it twice and counting. I have to agree with the critics when I say, “Eclipse was the best ‘Twilight’ yet.” It definitely was. Not only did the cinematography add to the film’s richness, but the elements from the book were captured on film. This film brought the book it was based on to life. This film was the only movie that was successful in that aspect.

All in all, I loved the movie! I thought it stuck very close to the book, way closer than the awali sinema had. Of course I had my quirks though. I will share my positives and my negatives. I will not go through every scene because this would be a really long review if I did. Haha

DIRECTOR:

I felt the need to write a small paragraph about the new director. When Slade was chosen as director, many people were worried, including me. Yes, David Slade brought darkness to the film. However, he brought it to a realistically, dark level. And what I liked about Slade's direction is that he did not try and follow the directors before him. Continuity is there, but he made the movie his own. The film is tainted with his unique touch, and wewe can obviously see it in the film. The tone of the movie, the wide-shots, everything is "Slade-copyrighted". We haven't seen these camera movements in the other films before, and I thought Slade did a fantastic job: with the actors, with the cameras, and with the movie.

CINEMATOGRAPHY:

The cinematography was absolutely gorgeous. From the landscapes to the tone of the movie, everything was beautiful. The movie was very visually dynamic and the coloring was incredible. The different angles, whether wide shots au close shots, they fit with the scene they were in. I will go into specifics when I am talking about certain scenes. To wrap, upangaji pamoja up this portion of the review, I reiterate what I alisema about him in the paragraph above: David Slade did an amazing job with the camera work. I would even use the word artistic. He had some unique shots, which I am excited to talk about later on.

****Obviously, Spoilers from here on out****

SCENES:

I would give a play kwa play review, but I am afraid I would mess up the order of scenes, so I will review them in the order in which I loved the most. This is very hard for me to do considering I have many inayopendelewa scenes in this movie :) I can say that two and three are tied. I can’t decide which one I like better!

1)Edward Proposing to Bella. This scene was absolutely beautiful. I loved how similar Edward’s bedroom in Twilight and Edward’s bedroom in Eclipse were. They were two completely different houses in two completely different locations and I was very impressed. The color of his room, the golden glow fit the scene so well. It added intimacy. This scene was all about them. When Edward gave Bella the moyo charm, I do wish it was longer, and I do wish the whole “I thought it was a good representation” talk was in there, but the scene is amazing nonetheless. I will not gush about the kissing/leg hitch in this scene too much, but I must maoni that it was insanely…passionate. The emotion in the scene was building and flowing and that’s one element that I loved. Of course, Sia’s My Love song placement was perfect and fit hand in hand with this scene and helped the crescendo of emotions. The camera movements flowed and intertwined with the melodies. It was like having an instrumental song with the scene. I would not have had any other song playing during this scene. I wish this scene was longer, but maybe that’s just me being greedy. :)

I loved how Edward explained how he’s from a different era. I upendo how he told her the steps in which he would have made her his if they were living in his time. “I would have courted you. We would have taken chaperoned strolls and had ice chai on the porch. I may have stolen a kiss au two. But only after asking your father’s permission… I would have gotten down on one knee and would have presented wewe with a ring…” I absolutely loved that. And after Bella accepted Edward’s proposal, she jumped into his arms and he spun her around and embraced her…I could not have asked for a better and zaidi touching proposal.

2)Edward and Bella’s First Scene in the Meadow. I’m going to start sounding like a broken record, but the way this scene was shot was remarkable! The lighting, the ethereal feel of it, the magic of the meadow…it was the meadow from the book. The interaction between Edward and Bella in this scene was such an improvement from the awali films. People seem to forget that Edward and Bella have light moments in the books, but this scene shows, they most certainly have fun at times :) Edward playfully whispering in her ear, breathing around her neck, playing with her hair… he was the Edward from the books. wewe feel the closeness, the connection, the upendo between them. Nothing heavy in this scene.

3)Edward vs. Victoria/Riley. What else can I say other than epic? David Slade alisema in an interview that he wanted Edward to be dark. He wanted to onyesha the audience a dark Edward. He succeeded. “You won’t get another chance like this again! wewe want her! wewe want me to feel the pain wewe felt when I killed James! When I tore him to pieces. When I turned him into ash. When I turned him into nothing.” He was taunting her. He was playing on her feelings, her motivation. Once she set off, he crouched and they fought. Once he went for the kill, he bit her neck, then beheaded her. It’s one of my inayopendelewa scenes because it shows that Edward is capable of fighting too. And that he’s zaidi than capable of doing anything for Bella, even if it means him risking his life for her. However, the addition they made, Bella cutting herself with a rock, I loved it. Because… nothing says “I upendo you” zaidi than having the will to risk your life for a person. Upon kusoma the script, I was a little wary. I did not know if that idea was so great, but it turned out well. I have nothing bad to say about this scene.

And small heshima to Xavier Samuels. He played Riley really well, especially since the character is small. He made me feel… bad for Riley throughout the movie. And applauds Bryce Dallas Howard. The task of continuing Victoria must have been daunting to her. She knows the shabiki base and how hardcore they can be at times. People doubted her ability. I did not like that Rachelle was replaced, but I was positive Bryce would do a great job. And she did. The book says Victoria was feline like. A sweet, soft voice. Like a child. They both had great chemistry and they took their characters and embodied them. Give Bryce Dallas Howard a chance. She’s not half bad.

4)The Tent Scene. A lot of Edward and Bella mashabiki will tell wewe they hated this part in the book. Of course I am not too fond of Jacob’s ndoto thoughts, nor do I upendo the idea that Edward is just sitting there, feeling completely helpless. Well, I am one of the few that loved this chapter. The movie wasn’t nearly as specific as the book, but the scene played out well. In this scene, Edward’s thoughts are revealed to the audience like in the book. The conversation vaguely mentions Edward’s reason for leaving [in New Moon]. I do wish they had zaidi of the “four options” speech though. And it’s revealed that Edward would let Bella go if she were to choose someone else. The reason why I upendo this scene so much is because Edward never had a chance to explain himself in New Moon. He did in the book, but not in the movie, unfortunately. But, we see what he went through. Rob played this really well. wewe could see all the emotions on his face. He was completely disgusted with what he is. He was disgusted that he could not do anything to help Bella because of what he was. Rob did an excellent job with this.

And another reason why I absolutely love this scene is that it shows how much of a man Edward is. He stays classy. Jacob asks Edward “How did wewe cope?” Edward majibu “There are no words. But I wouldn’t wish it on anyone, Jacob.” Also, Jacob asks Edward “Would wewe try and kill me?” Edward majibu “That’s an intriguing idea…but no. I could not hurt her like that.” I upendo that the audience can finally catch a glimpse of who Edward is and that he solely lives for Bella. How he would do anything for her, how he wants her to stay human and have a human life. She’s his “reason for existing”. In the other movies, Edward has alisema he wants her to stay human, but this scene, there’s an undeniable honesty there. wewe cannot doubt him.

The scene in the movie compared to the book? Similar. The gist of the chapter wrapped into five minutes. I would have liked zaidi conversation between them like in the book, but we cannot have everything. :)

5)Fight Training. This scene was so fun to watch. It changed a little from the book though. It was supposed to be dark, however, I liked the change they made. I think if they put darker tones in this scene, it would not have been so great. We can actually see what they are doing. I liked Jasper demonstrating how to fight. He would fight Emmett, and then give a tip. In Emmett’s case, “Never lose focus.” Edward vs. Carlisle was adorable. I loved their relationship in the book so much and I loved that we got to see it on screen. When they were fighting, Edward was… smiling. He was “fighting with dad” and I thought it added to their father-son relationship rather well. Once Edward smashed Carlisle to the ground, which looked amazing kwa the way, Jasper gave another tip, “Never turn your back on your enemy.” Rosalie vs. Jasper was cute since it was playful “sibling rivalry”. I loved how Rosalie smiled when she was on the ground. And Alice vs. Jasper, I am glad Alice and Jasper mashabiki got a couple of cute moments between them. I loved how they showed Alice. She was cunning, but playful. Like she should be. Again, I do wish this scene was longer, but that’s just me being greedy again :)

6)Graduation. This might be surprising, but I really enjoyed the graduation scene. From Jessica’s speech to the after party, I really enjoyed it. I appreciated the fact that during the graduation ceremony, it focused on Bella, Charlie, Edward, and Carlisle and Esme. When we see Bella accept her diploma, and Charlie stands up and claps… it makes my moyo melt. wewe can see how proud he is of her, almost on the brink of tears. And Carlisle and Esme share a smile of appreciation for each other during the speech after we see Edward. I think the reason why I upendo this particular section of the scene is because I graduated this year, and it brought me back to that. I was in tears in this scene. “This isn’t the time to make hard and fast decisions. It’s the time to make mistakes. Take the wrong train and get stuck somewhere chill. Fall in love…a lot. Major in philosophy ‘cause there’s no way to make a career out of that. Change your mind. Then change it again, because nothing is permanent…”

The after party, when the Cullens, Jacob, Embry, and Quil were gathered in a room talking about teaming up to save Forks, I liked what Jacob had to say at the end. “Bella…this is was we do. wewe should be happy. This is what wewe wanted. Us… working together.” Something along those lines. In the movie, Jacob Lost his edginess. I specifically remember in the book, Jacob sounded cocky and had an “it’s stupid for wewe to worry” attitude, but this line sufficed I guess.

7)“Something's Wrong." This is such a little scene, but I upendo this scene. Bella returns nyumbani from seeing Jacob for the first time. Once inside, there is a knock on the door. Edward appears and he begins to tell her how worried he was and how close he was to breaking the treaty… then he stops. He has this look on his face. A look of fear. He runs up to Bella’s room and touches her dream catcher. “Edward, what’s wrong?” The way he says, “someone’s been in here” is so chilling. I do not know what it is. It is how I imagined it in the book. There is nothing zaidi inaonyesha in his eyes other than fear and concern for Bella’s safety. Not a big scene, but it spoke volume.

8)The Clearing. I loved the scene where Bella and Edward, Jasper, and Jacob were gathered in the clearing talking about scents. I thought it was cute. All the bantering. When Jacob picks Bella up and Edward plainly says, “Run.” zaidi chills.

9)Victoria On the Treaty. The reason why I upendo this scene so much is the Cullens’ desire to catch Victoria to save Bella. wewe can hear it in their voice. When they are chasing her and she nears the Treaty line, Esme shouts “She’ll get away!” I loved that. I do not know what it was. Just the fact that she was so desperate to catch Victoria and that unknown fierceness. We have never seen that in Esme before. It was a nice touch.

POSITIVES:

--Eclipse. The ‘Eclipse’ title screen. I really have nothing zaidi to say other than absolutely beautiful.

--The Make-Up. It is so much better in this film. Edward does not look old. He looks so young. He actually looks like a seventeen mwaka old, which is a good thing! Since there are a lot of close ups, I am glad we could not see the powder on his face.

--Seth Clearwater. The boy is too cute. Even though he had a minimal character, I loved his character just like in the book. I did miss him and Edward’s friendship. I really liked that in the book. I also missed their fist pampu when they killed Riley and Victoria, but he was adorable nonetheless and it was nice to see him on screen.

--The Wolves. Their characters were shown through the wolves. wewe could actually tell which mbwa mwitu was which. The actors’ features were resembled in the CGI wolves. Big thumbs up to the art and graphics department.

--The Ice/White Granite Effect. In New Moon, we see the Wanyonya damu being torn apart and they were like stone. In Eclipse, we see plenty of Wanyonya damu being torn apart, but they were like ice au white granite. I really liked that. It showed how hard and cold the Wanyonya damu are.

--The Sets. David Slade alisema he was aliyopewa pretty much free reigns about the set as far as continuity. I think he did a great job recreating Bella’s room and Edward’s room, let alone the Cullen’s whole house, especially the stairs to his room. I thought the resemblance between the Twilight house to the Eclipse house was amazing. It looked the same! Such a beautiful house.

NEGATIVES:

--The Wigs. My goodness, some of them were just awful. Bella’s wig was okay in some scenes, but in certain scenes, it was very distracting. The juu of her head would be flat at times. Jasper’s wig… he always ends up with bad hair in the movies. However, during his flashback, we see him riding in the desert… his wig looked amazing there because of his hat. Victoria’s wig was pretty obvious, but it did not take away anything from Bryce’s performance.

--The Jacob/Bella Kiss. Before wewe all say anything, I did not write this off as negative because I upendo Edward and Bella. I put this in the “negatives” because it seemed awkward. I am sure it was for the actors, but the awkwardness was just leaking off the screen. I did not feel anything. Nothing like I did in the book. I was angry when I read the book. I was angry at Bella, but in the movie, I was not angry at her, I was just irritated that the kiss was going on for so long. Lol. The scenery was beautiful, but I felt the kiss to be awkward. wewe can disagree, but I did not feel the passion the book described. Jacob did not grab her violently. I thought the kiss would have been zaidi heated. I was prepared for it. But it turns out, I did not need to be.

--Angry Edward. I did not know where to put this, so I put it in the ‘negatives’ just because I would miss the change. I liked the change; however, I am also sad that he was not as calm as in the books. In the books, when Bella calls him up and tells him about Jacob’s forced kiss, he arrives at her house and checks her hand first. Then he walks up to Jacob and calmly threatens him. In a way, it could have been zaidi chilling. I did miss that, but this way worked too.

--Angry Bella. I wish Bella became zaidi irritated with Jacob. It seemed that she did not really lash out at him as much as in the book. I missed her asking Edward to kill Jacob, however, Edward, being the gentleman that he is, would say it would bother her in the morning. I wish they showed zaidi of that, zaidi of Bella’s disgust when Jacob kissed her the first time.

--The Last Scene. A big problem. In Breaking Dawn, after Bella has become a vampire, she says that she knows it was her destiny to be with Edward and to become a vampire. In Breaking Dawn. Not in Eclipse. When Bella is talking to Edward in their meadow in the last scene in the movie, Bella says that it was not just a choice between Edward and Jacob, but between who she is and who she should be. “I’ve always felt…out of step. Literally, stumbling through life. I’ve never felt normal. But now I know. I’m not normal. And I don’t want to be. I’ve faced death and Lost and pain in your world. But I’ve also never felt stronger, zaidi real… zaidi myself. Because it’s my world, too, Edward. It’s where I belong.” And then says “You’re saying… that it’s not all about me.” Bella smiling, simply says “Sorry. No.” It has everything to do with him.

Page 267 of Eclipse says that “Forever means nothing without you.” The quote I provided from the movie, where Bella is talking about not fitting in, it is sounding like she just wants to be a vampire with powers. It comes off as shallow and superficial and completely and entirely out of canon. During Eclipse promotion, Kristen had alisema that the ending scene was to onyesha that Bella is also choosing for herself. She is not just running off with the guy. She is choosing to be with Edward and choosing, for herself, to be a vampire. And I do not get that. This had the potential to ruin the entire movie for me because this is what the movie, the book is about. Bella’s immortality and her conscious decision to be with Edward. Solely for Edward. Being with Edward means becoming a vampire, and she is willing to make that sacrifice because she loves him that much. Forever means nothing without him.

ACTORS:

--Kristen Stewart. All in all, I think she did an okay job. I do wish she had zaidi enthusiasm in certain scenes. However, I think she portrayed Bella well in this movie. Better than the awali movies. I like what Kristen brings to Bella. And that is inner will power and strength. We all know Bella is motivated and has a strong will in the books, but I upendo that Kristen enforces that a little more. She does not make Bella as weak as she is in the book. She evens out the field. In the books, wewe can tell Bella is completely different and out of sync with everyone. But in the movies, it is zaidi believable.

--Robert Pattinson. I upendo how Rob plays Edward. Even though Edward in the vitabu and the sinema are a little different, the scripts change the character, not Rob. But I upendo how Rob plays Edward. Just like the book describes Edward, “the emotions flash across his face”… wewe can see that when Rob plays him. I appreciate that. Rob understands his character. He understands that Edward is flawed. He understands that Edward can be over-protective, but he also understands that he only acts that way to keep her alive. That her “existence is everything”. He knows that Bella is the only person he wishes, he needs to protect. He comprehends that even though Edward is one hundred years old, long past human, Bella brings out the human in him. Bella brings out the 17 mwaka old in him. He grasps the fact that even though Edward is disgusted kwa himself and what he is, maybe he has been too hard on himself. Because, how could someone like Bella be capable of loving someone like him if he was truly the despicable creature he thought he was? Rob knows that Edward accepts the fact that he is a vampire, but he also accepts the fact that Bella loves him because he chooses to be better. To become the best he can be.

--Taylor Lautner. Taylor’s portrayal of Jacob is lighter in the movie than it is in the books. I appreciate his enthusiasm and his upendo for Jacob, but sometimes, Jacob’s other qualities need to be shown. During New Moon promotion, Taylor had been speaking about Jacob’s pre-transformation/post-transformation side, but I have yet to see a massive difference between the two. In the books, wewe can tell Jacob is different. He is a lot rougher and zaidi edgy. In the movies, we hardly see his ignorance. It’s part of his character, and I am disappointed that we do not see it. During the scenes where Jacob is trying to convince Bella to choose him, the scene in the garage, his uigizaji is awkward. Dramatic pauses and he do not mix well. I do like how he alisema “He probably can’t even kiss wewe without hurting you. Feel that? Flesh and blood and warmth.” Despite what ‘team’ I am on, Taylor did act that one line pretty well. Other than that, I could not help but feel awkwardness leaking off the screen.

Now, we have finally reached the end of the review. It ended up being longer than I originally thought. I restate what I alisema at the beginning of the review, over all, I loved the movie. The movie had the moyo the book did. The feelings, the magic was captured in the film. David Slade recently alisema in an MTV interview, “You can have the best actors in the world and the best cinematographers in the world. But if wewe don’t have a solid story, then wewe don’t have a film.” And he is absolutely right. Without a solid story, the film would be dead. I very much like David Slade and have grown to upendo him and what he has done for the Twilight mashabiki kwa blessing us with a movie such as this one. I really respect him as a director and I hope everyone shares my thoughts regarding him. He knows his stuff. Aspiring film directors should take notes from him and what he says. Because a lot of what he says rings true.

I hoped wewe liked my review :) maoni are welcome!
posted by just_bella
I don't know if I was the only one, but shabiki pop didn't work for 2 1/2 hours. Well, here's the inayofuata chapter :)

End of Chapter 7

I saw us all leaving, that much was for sure. Edward would say his goodbyes to Bella and then would leave town. The strange thing was I kept seeing him in different towns without any of us with him. I didn't understand that part at all, and would have to ask him about it when he calms down.

"Edward, are wewe saying that wewe want to leave Bella and this town?" Esme asked.

"Yes. We need to leave her before anything else happens." He alisema sadly.

"Edward, what else could...
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Next one will be up in a dakika au so :D enjoy ^_^

Bella's pov

I saw everyone looking at me and some stood up.
“Bella, Bella, are wewe okay” I heard Charlie ask me while he started running towards me
“I’m fine dad” I alisema back and then he just hugged me. I still didn’t let go of Edward’s hand, it made me feel safer knowing that he’s kwa my side.
Charlie finally stopped hugging me and starred at me.
“We need to talk, Bella” he alisema very concerned and frightened
“I know dad, I just don’t know how much they alisema already” I alisema back and looked at everyone. But it was Alice who...
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posted by just_bella
OK I think I figured out how to make this a bit zaidi fun, thanks to madz and twilightgglost for the help :).

End of Part 20

When we were all done we all began walking back to town, everyone discussing where we would be going next. I thought this was strange because I thought that they just stayed in one place and lived their lives like normal people.

"Let's go to Alaska." Esme suggested.

"No we were there a few years ago. How about New York?" Rosalie suggested.

"New York could be fun, but too much sun." Carlisle said.

"How about Washington? It's cloudy a lot there I hear, it's suppose to rain...
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posted by twilight-7
Sitting on a chair on stage waiting to get my diploma wasn’t as frightening as I thought. Ok, nearly a hundred people were staring at us but it wasn’t as bad as I had imagined. Jessica, who was sat inayofuata to me, looked close to tears. I didn’t get what was so upsetting about graduating. We were leaving school for ever. No zaidi classes. Well, for me I guess. I couldn’t go to college au chuo kikuu, chuo kikuu cha until I turned eighteen and Edward the gentlemen decided to wait for me until he went to university. So far no one in the audience had tried to kill me which was good. Charlie and Mitchell were...
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posted by sami1002
Remesee's pov.(she's 16)



I walked down the dimly lit halls to enduer another mwaka of 9th grade . Somethims never growing up has it's dis-advanages." Remesee Cullen pay attention" Mrs.Zedong yelled to me as I stared out the window. I wandered into my room after school and waited till my parents came nyumbani from collage."Nessie, wanna go hunting with your anut Roselie and me" mom asked from down stairs. "Sure" I called back coming down the stairs. We ran into the forest ,jumped over the river and stated hunting .

When we got hom Jacob was talking to dad ,mom ran to talk to grandma, and aunt Roslie and uncle Emett whent in to their room . "Nessie wanna go down to La Push with me" Jacob called when he saw me walking into the house. "Can I" I asked dad " be back kwa 7:30 no later " he agreed . Yes !! Now i dodn't have to lisen to mom and dad doing it today
posted by just_bella
I know that I alisema I wasn't going to write until Friday...but well I failed. I couldn't wait...I think I have a problem ;)

End of Chapter 4

"Edward?" I asked as I took a step closer to him.

He wouldn't look me in the eye. I knew this was not a good sign, he was thinking deeply again. He was contemplating things and he wouldn't tell anyone his thoughts until he made the decision.

I stopped what I was doing and looked into the future. It was unsure still, one sekunde I saw Edward breaking up with Bella. We would stay in town and he would do his best to avoid her, never allowing his true feelings...
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posted by just_bella
Chapter 4

They managed to get him out the door, the sounds of Jazz's growls still roaring into the house. Emmett still had him in his arms and was now walking around the house to the woods. I wasn't sure what was going on, but I saw Esme look back at the mess and then out the door before she walked out closing the door behind her.

"Edward, let me check her." Carlisle alisema as he walked over. Edward was still in a defensive stance and took a moment before he relaxed and let Carlisle close.

Her arm was very badly cut, I ran into the jikoni and grabbed a jikoni towel. I ran back to Carlisle...
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posted by lovethecullens
Chapter 21: Temper, Temper…
When we got to my beat up, white 2000 Ford Tempo we all jumped in and Seth took my keys. Jake carried Nessie quickly into the backseat. Seth pulled out of the parking lot a little too speedily and the car peeled out, everyone looked at us as I slunk down in the passenger seat. I truly hated being in the spotlight. We were only driving for a couple of moments before I realized that Nessie was still shaking, and her breathing was hard. “Is she ok?” I half shrieked as I looked back at her in concern. “She’s going to be fine” Jake alisema as he opened his phone,...
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Chapter 20: “Who Needs A Werewolf for a Boyfriend When wewe Have a Vampire for a Best Friend…?

“Please turn to page 31 in your textbook,” Mr. Banner droned on, I couldn’t pay attention to another boring lecture. Although I had to absorb myself in something otherwise Nessie would give me that concerned look again. I really hated being the chanzo of everyone’s concern especially when they were putting themselves in such grave danger to keep me safe. “I am going to go get the video that we will be watching today, so starting kusoma this chapter and make sure that wewe all behave while...
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posted by Brown_x_Eyes
Isabella "Bella" Marie swan (later Isabella Marie Cullen) is a clumsy, accident-prone teenage girl who moves from Phoenix, Arizona, to Forks, Washington, to live with her father, Charlie. Though many boys are attracted to her when she arrives, she falls in upendo with Edward Cullen, a mysterious boy she discovers to be a vampire. In an attempt to protect Bella from his lifestyle, Edward leaves her. Bella falls into a depression and is comforted kwa her friend, Jacob Black. She comes to upendo Jacob as well, though not as deeply as she loves Edward. She eventually marries Edward and, after a complicated pregnancy, gives birth to their daughter, Renesmee, and becomes a vampire at age 18. After Bella's transformation, she has the ability to shield her and others' minds from mental attacks.
Chapter 19: The Illusion of Normalcy
We waited on edge for something to develop but weeks went kwa and Aunt Alice didn’t have any visions regarding the Volturi and Sienna. She spent most of her free time in La Push with Seth au here at our house. She slept over my parent’s house a lot. If it were under better circumstances it would have been zaidi enjoyable it was kind of like having a sister. It was definitely nice to have someone in the house that was truly similar in age to me. It is peculiar for your parents and aunts and uncles to look as though they are the same age that wewe are; so...
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posted by vampirelover17
rachell's pov


omg y r u shining what are wewe ' rachell dont be scared ' he came closer ' dont come near me ' rachell please let me exsplain ' what is thee to exsplain ' just shut up and listen to me ok fine make it quick ok here it is iam a vampire and so is my whole family ' what ' iam confessing iam cofessing so baby just here me out i fell to my knees and started to cry than his cold body was beside me dont touch me ' ok ' then i codent handle it i climbed in to his arms and alisema y y please u cant be rachell i upendo wewe to much to lose wewe if u want thow i will leave ' NO ' u cant well what...
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Enjoy be back tomorrow, please leave maoni :D

Bella's pov

We arrived at the cemetery, but it was so hard for me being back here, I didn’t even make a songesha to get out of the car. For the first time I was really scared.
“Bella, are wewe coming” I heard Edward say and I looked at him and noticed that he and Daniel already got out of the car.
“come on Bella, we don’t have all day” I heard Daniel say and I looked at him angry
“Just give me some time, Daniel, it’s been years since I been here wewe know, and you’re sister meant allot to me, so don’t rush me” I alisema angry to him.
Edward...
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posted by Twi-Freak14
"Happy birthday Nessie!" Jacob yelled out the window when we jumped across the river to the house.
"Hi Jake!" Nessie looked up at him and smiled.
I ran over to Edward and Alice who were putting decorations up all around the yard.
"Need any help?" I stood on my tip toes to kiss Edwards cheek.
"Yes, go around the trail leading up to the house and put up these lights." Alice handed me a big bundle of twinkly lights that I remembered from a number of occasions I had gone to at the Cullens in my human days.
I darted down the drive and down kwa the little bridge; I had finished in less than five...
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posted by lovethecullens
Chapter 10: The Eye of an Artist

I couldn’t believe it Nahuel was sitting at the meza, jedwali that we were at yesterday with a red rose. He smiled brightly at me as I sat down. “So how are wewe feeling today?” He asked in his thick accent. “Oh, I’m better,” I said, I smiled back at him as I accepted his rose. I really dislike roses but he was just so amazing it suddenly took on a new appeal to me. “Thank wewe I alisema it’s beautiful.” “It pales in comparison with wewe he murmured. “So, what would wewe like for your birthday?” He asked flashing me another brilliant smile I stared at...
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posted by jamiesue00
Chapter 1- Questions
My life had changed in so many ways in such a short time. I’d moved to Forks, met the upendo of my existence, Lost him and found a best friend in a werewolf. Edward of course came back, neither one of us could really breath without the other. I had fought to save my life countless times, almost killing myself for our beautiful daughter Renesmee. Life seems to be almost normal au so I thougt.
Jacob and Nessie where never too far from each other, he would do anything for her. Edward always kept a close eye on the two of them, still never really trusting Jacob. It was on this...
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posted by Twi-Freak14
Jacob, Edward, Renesmee and I went hunting later that evening, though Nessie still isn't very fond of animal blood, its become something that is slowly growing on her, though I could understand wolves, Jacob smells horrible.
On our way back Edward pulled me behind so Jacob and Nessie could pass, something about his expression concerned me.
"What is it Edward?"
"I was just thinking, Nessie is going to be five the siku after tommorow and it's been only a year, she's growing very fast, and I'm a little worried."
"What can we do? It's dangerous but maybe, maybe if we wait another mwaka au two she...
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“Volturi?! Volturi?!” Bella choked as she stared at me with horrified astonishment. I winced; her chokoleti brown eyes were very much like Renesmee’s lovely eyes. Would her eyes hold the same horrified expression when she found out I was her sworn enemy? Growls emanated yet again from the dangerous duo, Emmett and Jasper. Rosalie hissed. Carlisle shook his head in disbelief. Jacob cussed vehemently and advanced towards me.

“I ought to wring your neck.” He snarled. If I wasn’t facing the rest of the Cullens, I would have found his anger amusing. I would have taunted him arrogantly...
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posted by lovethecullens
Chapter 6: An Invitation

I maneuvered my car along the long and windy driveway that led to the house. Jake made up some lame excuse about having something to take care of at nyumbani and took off, I couldn’t help but notice how angry he was as he left; he was trembling. I knew he was going to phase at any moment so I was kind of glad that he took off before he lashed out. “I am sorry for how rude my friend was to you, he is not usually like that something must be going on, “I told Nahuel. He smiled warmly at me, and said, “It’s perfectly fine, I hope I did not cause any problems for you”...
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posted by just_bella
"I'm sorry, I know this doesn't help anything. I know I can't take anything that happened back, but I wish that we would have gotten the animal and brought it back so wewe would be proud of us." I alisema as I turned and walked out the door.

I got about half way back to the house when John and Ben came walking behind me. Obviously they were listening to the entire confrontation, because John came up and put his hand on my shoulder.

"He's just scared, he doesn't know how to express his fear, so he took it out on you. He didn't mean any of it, just give him a siku au two and he'll calm down." John...
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