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Today is a landmark for Twilight mashabiki because Eclipse, the third installment of the Twilight Series, has finally hit theatres.

I have had the opportunity to see it twice and counting. I have to agree with the critics when I say, “Eclipse was the best ‘Twilight’ yet.” It definitely was. Not only did the cinematography add to the film’s richness, but the elements from the book were captured on film. This film brought the book it was based on to life. This film was the only movie that was successful in that aspect.

All in all, I loved the movie! I thought it stuck very close to the book, way closer than the awali sinema had. Of course I had my quirks though. I will share my positives and my negatives. I will not go through every scene because this would be a really long review if I did. Haha

DIRECTOR:

I felt the need to write a small paragraph about the new director. When Slade was chosen as director, many people were worried, including me. Yes, David Slade brought darkness to the film. However, he brought it to a realistically, dark level. And what I liked about Slade's direction is that he did not try and follow the directors before him. Continuity is there, but he made the movie his own. The film is tainted with his unique touch, and wewe can obviously see it in the film. The tone of the movie, the wide-shots, everything is "Slade-copyrighted". We haven't seen these camera movements in the other films before, and I thought Slade did a fantastic job: with the actors, with the cameras, and with the movie.

CINEMATOGRAPHY:

The cinematography was absolutely gorgeous. From the landscapes to the tone of the movie, everything was beautiful. The movie was very visually dynamic and the coloring was incredible. The different angles, whether wide shots au close shots, they fit with the scene they were in. I will go into specifics when I am talking about certain scenes. To wrap, upangaji pamoja up this portion of the review, I reiterate what I alisema about him in the paragraph above: David Slade did an amazing job with the camera work. I would even use the word artistic. He had some unique shots, which I am excited to talk about later on.

****Obviously, Spoilers from here on out****

SCENES:

I would give a play kwa play review, but I am afraid I would mess up the order of scenes, so I will review them in the order in which I loved the most. This is very hard for me to do considering I have many inayopendelewa scenes in this movie :) I can say that two and three are tied. I can’t decide which one I like better!

1)Edward Proposing to Bella. This scene was absolutely beautiful. I loved how similar Edward’s bedroom in Twilight and Edward’s bedroom in Eclipse were. They were two completely different houses in two completely different locations and I was very impressed. The color of his room, the golden glow fit the scene so well. It added intimacy. This scene was all about them. When Edward gave Bella the moyo charm, I do wish it was longer, and I do wish the whole “I thought it was a good representation” talk was in there, but the scene is amazing nonetheless. I will not gush about the kissing/leg hitch in this scene too much, but I must maoni that it was insanely…passionate. The emotion in the scene was building and flowing and that’s one element that I loved. Of course, Sia’s My Love song placement was perfect and fit hand in hand with this scene and helped the crescendo of emotions. The camera movements flowed and intertwined with the melodies. It was like having an instrumental song with the scene. I would not have had any other song playing during this scene. I wish this scene was longer, but maybe that’s just me being greedy. :)

I loved how Edward explained how he’s from a different era. I upendo how he told her the steps in which he would have made her his if they were living in his time. “I would have courted you. We would have taken chaperoned strolls and had ice chai on the porch. I may have stolen a kiss au two. But only after asking your father’s permission… I would have gotten down on one knee and would have presented wewe with a ring…” I absolutely loved that. And after Bella accepted Edward’s proposal, she jumped into his arms and he spun her around and embraced her…I could not have asked for a better and zaidi touching proposal.

2)Edward and Bella’s First Scene in the Meadow. I’m going to start sounding like a broken record, but the way this scene was shot was remarkable! The lighting, the ethereal feel of it, the magic of the meadow…it was the meadow from the book. The interaction between Edward and Bella in this scene was such an improvement from the awali films. People seem to forget that Edward and Bella have light moments in the books, but this scene shows, they most certainly have fun at times :) Edward playfully whispering in her ear, breathing around her neck, playing with her hair… he was the Edward from the books. wewe feel the closeness, the connection, the upendo between them. Nothing heavy in this scene.

3)Edward vs. Victoria/Riley. What else can I say other than epic? David Slade alisema in an interview that he wanted Edward to be dark. He wanted to onyesha the audience a dark Edward. He succeeded. “You won’t get another chance like this again! wewe want her! wewe want me to feel the pain wewe felt when I killed James! When I tore him to pieces. When I turned him into ash. When I turned him into nothing.” He was taunting her. He was playing on her feelings, her motivation. Once she set off, he crouched and they fought. Once he went for the kill, he bit her neck, then beheaded her. It’s one of my inayopendelewa scenes because it shows that Edward is capable of fighting too. And that he’s zaidi than capable of doing anything for Bella, even if it means him risking his life for her. However, the addition they made, Bella cutting herself with a rock, I loved it. Because… nothing says “I upendo you” zaidi than having the will to risk your life for a person. Upon kusoma the script, I was a little wary. I did not know if that idea was so great, but it turned out well. I have nothing bad to say about this scene.

And small heshima to Xavier Samuels. He played Riley really well, especially since the character is small. He made me feel… bad for Riley throughout the movie. And applauds Bryce Dallas Howard. The task of continuing Victoria must have been daunting to her. She knows the shabiki base and how hardcore they can be at times. People doubted her ability. I did not like that Rachelle was replaced, but I was positive Bryce would do a great job. And she did. The book says Victoria was feline like. A sweet, soft voice. Like a child. They both had great chemistry and they took their characters and embodied them. Give Bryce Dallas Howard a chance. She’s not half bad.

4)The Tent Scene. A lot of Edward and Bella mashabiki will tell wewe they hated this part in the book. Of course I am not too fond of Jacob’s ndoto thoughts, nor do I upendo the idea that Edward is just sitting there, feeling completely helpless. Well, I am one of the few that loved this chapter. The movie wasn’t nearly as specific as the book, but the scene played out well. In this scene, Edward’s thoughts are revealed to the audience like in the book. The conversation vaguely mentions Edward’s reason for leaving [in New Moon]. I do wish they had zaidi of the “four options” speech though. And it’s revealed that Edward would let Bella go if she were to choose someone else. The reason why I upendo this scene so much is because Edward never had a chance to explain himself in New Moon. He did in the book, but not in the movie, unfortunately. But, we see what he went through. Rob played this really well. wewe could see all the emotions on his face. He was completely disgusted with what he is. He was disgusted that he could not do anything to help Bella because of what he was. Rob did an excellent job with this.

And another reason why I absolutely love this scene is that it shows how much of a man Edward is. He stays classy. Jacob asks Edward “How did wewe cope?” Edward majibu “There are no words. But I wouldn’t wish it on anyone, Jacob.” Also, Jacob asks Edward “Would wewe try and kill me?” Edward majibu “That’s an intriguing idea…but no. I could not hurt her like that.” I upendo that the audience can finally catch a glimpse of who Edward is and that he solely lives for Bella. How he would do anything for her, how he wants her to stay human and have a human life. She’s his “reason for existing”. In the other movies, Edward has alisema he wants her to stay human, but this scene, there’s an undeniable honesty there. wewe cannot doubt him.

The scene in the movie compared to the book? Similar. The gist of the chapter wrapped into five minutes. I would have liked zaidi conversation between them like in the book, but we cannot have everything. :)

5)Fight Training. This scene was so fun to watch. It changed a little from the book though. It was supposed to be dark, however, I liked the change they made. I think if they put darker tones in this scene, it would not have been so great. We can actually see what they are doing. I liked Jasper demonstrating how to fight. He would fight Emmett, and then give a tip. In Emmett’s case, “Never lose focus.” Edward vs. Carlisle was adorable. I loved their relationship in the book so much and I loved that we got to see it on screen. When they were fighting, Edward was… smiling. He was “fighting with dad” and I thought it added to their father-son relationship rather well. Once Edward smashed Carlisle to the ground, which looked amazing kwa the way, Jasper gave another tip, “Never turn your back on your enemy.” Rosalie vs. Jasper was cute since it was playful “sibling rivalry”. I loved how Rosalie smiled when she was on the ground. And Alice vs. Jasper, I am glad Alice and Jasper mashabiki got a couple of cute moments between them. I loved how they showed Alice. She was cunning, but playful. Like she should be. Again, I do wish this scene was longer, but that’s just me being greedy again :)

6)Graduation. This might be surprising, but I really enjoyed the graduation scene. From Jessica’s speech to the after party, I really enjoyed it. I appreciated the fact that during the graduation ceremony, it focused on Bella, Charlie, Edward, and Carlisle and Esme. When we see Bella accept her diploma, and Charlie stands up and claps… it makes my moyo melt. wewe can see how proud he is of her, almost on the brink of tears. And Carlisle and Esme share a smile of appreciation for each other during the speech after we see Edward. I think the reason why I upendo this particular section of the scene is because I graduated this year, and it brought me back to that. I was in tears in this scene. “This isn’t the time to make hard and fast decisions. It’s the time to make mistakes. Take the wrong train and get stuck somewhere chill. Fall in love…a lot. Major in philosophy ‘cause there’s no way to make a career out of that. Change your mind. Then change it again, because nothing is permanent…”

The after party, when the Cullens, Jacob, Embry, and Quil were gathered in a room talking about teaming up to save Forks, I liked what Jacob had to say at the end. “Bella…this is was we do. wewe should be happy. This is what wewe wanted. Us… working together.” Something along those lines. In the movie, Jacob Lost his edginess. I specifically remember in the book, Jacob sounded cocky and had an “it’s stupid for wewe to worry” attitude, but this line sufficed I guess.

7)“Something's Wrong." This is such a little scene, but I upendo this scene. Bella returns nyumbani from seeing Jacob for the first time. Once inside, there is a knock on the door. Edward appears and he begins to tell her how worried he was and how close he was to breaking the treaty… then he stops. He has this look on his face. A look of fear. He runs up to Bella’s room and touches her dream catcher. “Edward, what’s wrong?” The way he says, “someone’s been in here” is so chilling. I do not know what it is. It is how I imagined it in the book. There is nothing zaidi inaonyesha in his eyes other than fear and concern for Bella’s safety. Not a big scene, but it spoke volume.

8)The Clearing. I loved the scene where Bella and Edward, Jasper, and Jacob were gathered in the clearing talking about scents. I thought it was cute. All the bantering. When Jacob picks Bella up and Edward plainly says, “Run.” zaidi chills.

9)Victoria On the Treaty. The reason why I upendo this scene so much is the Cullens’ desire to catch Victoria to save Bella. wewe can hear it in their voice. When they are chasing her and she nears the Treaty line, Esme shouts “She’ll get away!” I loved that. I do not know what it was. Just the fact that she was so desperate to catch Victoria and that unknown fierceness. We have never seen that in Esme before. It was a nice touch.

POSITIVES:

--Eclipse. The ‘Eclipse’ title screen. I really have nothing zaidi to say other than absolutely beautiful.

--The Make-Up. It is so much better in this film. Edward does not look old. He looks so young. He actually looks like a seventeen mwaka old, which is a good thing! Since there are a lot of close ups, I am glad we could not see the powder on his face.

--Seth Clearwater. The boy is too cute. Even though he had a minimal character, I loved his character just like in the book. I did miss him and Edward’s friendship. I really liked that in the book. I also missed their fist pampu when they killed Riley and Victoria, but he was adorable nonetheless and it was nice to see him on screen.

--The Wolves. Their characters were shown through the wolves. wewe could actually tell which mbwa mwitu was which. The actors’ features were resembled in the CGI wolves. Big thumbs up to the art and graphics department.

--The Ice/White Granite Effect. In New Moon, we see the Wanyonya damu being torn apart and they were like stone. In Eclipse, we see plenty of Wanyonya damu being torn apart, but they were like ice au white granite. I really liked that. It showed how hard and cold the Wanyonya damu are.

--The Sets. David Slade alisema he was aliyopewa pretty much free reigns about the set as far as continuity. I think he did a great job recreating Bella’s room and Edward’s room, let alone the Cullen’s whole house, especially the stairs to his room. I thought the resemblance between the Twilight house to the Eclipse house was amazing. It looked the same! Such a beautiful house.

NEGATIVES:

--The Wigs. My goodness, some of them were just awful. Bella’s wig was okay in some scenes, but in certain scenes, it was very distracting. The juu of her head would be flat at times. Jasper’s wig… he always ends up with bad hair in the movies. However, during his flashback, we see him riding in the desert… his wig looked amazing there because of his hat. Victoria’s wig was pretty obvious, but it did not take away anything from Bryce’s performance.

--The Jacob/Bella Kiss. Before wewe all say anything, I did not write this off as negative because I upendo Edward and Bella. I put this in the “negatives” because it seemed awkward. I am sure it was for the actors, but the awkwardness was just leaking off the screen. I did not feel anything. Nothing like I did in the book. I was angry when I read the book. I was angry at Bella, but in the movie, I was not angry at her, I was just irritated that the kiss was going on for so long. Lol. The scenery was beautiful, but I felt the kiss to be awkward. wewe can disagree, but I did not feel the passion the book described. Jacob did not grab her violently. I thought the kiss would have been zaidi heated. I was prepared for it. But it turns out, I did not need to be.

--Angry Edward. I did not know where to put this, so I put it in the ‘negatives’ just because I would miss the change. I liked the change; however, I am also sad that he was not as calm as in the books. In the books, when Bella calls him up and tells him about Jacob’s forced kiss, he arrives at her house and checks her hand first. Then he walks up to Jacob and calmly threatens him. In a way, it could have been zaidi chilling. I did miss that, but this way worked too.

--Angry Bella. I wish Bella became zaidi irritated with Jacob. It seemed that she did not really lash out at him as much as in the book. I missed her asking Edward to kill Jacob, however, Edward, being the gentleman that he is, would say it would bother her in the morning. I wish they showed zaidi of that, zaidi of Bella’s disgust when Jacob kissed her the first time.

--The Last Scene. A big problem. In Breaking Dawn, after Bella has become a vampire, she says that she knows it was her destiny to be with Edward and to become a vampire. In Breaking Dawn. Not in Eclipse. When Bella is talking to Edward in their meadow in the last scene in the movie, Bella says that it was not just a choice between Edward and Jacob, but between who she is and who she should be. “I’ve always felt…out of step. Literally, stumbling through life. I’ve never felt normal. But now I know. I’m not normal. And I don’t want to be. I’ve faced death and Lost and pain in your world. But I’ve also never felt stronger, zaidi real… zaidi myself. Because it’s my world, too, Edward. It’s where I belong.” And then says “You’re saying… that it’s not all about me.” Bella smiling, simply says “Sorry. No.” It has everything to do with him.

Page 267 of Eclipse says that “Forever means nothing without you.” The quote I provided from the movie, where Bella is talking about not fitting in, it is sounding like she just wants to be a vampire with powers. It comes off as shallow and superficial and completely and entirely out of canon. During Eclipse promotion, Kristen had alisema that the ending scene was to onyesha that Bella is also choosing for herself. She is not just running off with the guy. She is choosing to be with Edward and choosing, for herself, to be a vampire. And I do not get that. This had the potential to ruin the entire movie for me because this is what the movie, the book is about. Bella’s immortality and her conscious decision to be with Edward. Solely for Edward. Being with Edward means becoming a vampire, and she is willing to make that sacrifice because she loves him that much. Forever means nothing without him.

ACTORS:

--Kristen Stewart. All in all, I think she did an okay job. I do wish she had zaidi enthusiasm in certain scenes. However, I think she portrayed Bella well in this movie. Better than the awali movies. I like what Kristen brings to Bella. And that is inner will power and strength. We all know Bella is motivated and has a strong will in the books, but I upendo that Kristen enforces that a little more. She does not make Bella as weak as she is in the book. She evens out the field. In the books, wewe can tell Bella is completely different and out of sync with everyone. But in the movies, it is zaidi believable.

--Robert Pattinson. I upendo how Rob plays Edward. Even though Edward in the vitabu and the sinema are a little different, the scripts change the character, not Rob. But I upendo how Rob plays Edward. Just like the book describes Edward, “the emotions flash across his face”… wewe can see that when Rob plays him. I appreciate that. Rob understands his character. He understands that Edward is flawed. He understands that Edward can be over-protective, but he also understands that he only acts that way to keep her alive. That her “existence is everything”. He knows that Bella is the only person he wishes, he needs to protect. He comprehends that even though Edward is one hundred years old, long past human, Bella brings out the human in him. Bella brings out the 17 mwaka old in him. He grasps the fact that even though Edward is disgusted kwa himself and what he is, maybe he has been too hard on himself. Because, how could someone like Bella be capable of loving someone like him if he was truly the despicable creature he thought he was? Rob knows that Edward accepts the fact that he is a vampire, but he also accepts the fact that Bella loves him because he chooses to be better. To become the best he can be.

--Taylor Lautner. Taylor’s portrayal of Jacob is lighter in the movie than it is in the books. I appreciate his enthusiasm and his upendo for Jacob, but sometimes, Jacob’s other qualities need to be shown. During New Moon promotion, Taylor had been speaking about Jacob’s pre-transformation/post-transformation side, but I have yet to see a massive difference between the two. In the books, wewe can tell Jacob is different. He is a lot rougher and zaidi edgy. In the movies, we hardly see his ignorance. It’s part of his character, and I am disappointed that we do not see it. During the scenes where Jacob is trying to convince Bella to choose him, the scene in the garage, his uigizaji is awkward. Dramatic pauses and he do not mix well. I do like how he alisema “He probably can’t even kiss wewe without hurting you. Feel that? Flesh and blood and warmth.” Despite what ‘team’ I am on, Taylor did act that one line pretty well. Other than that, I could not help but feel awkwardness leaking off the screen.

Now, we have finally reached the end of the review. It ended up being longer than I originally thought. I restate what I alisema at the beginning of the review, over all, I loved the movie. The movie had the moyo the book did. The feelings, the magic was captured in the film. David Slade recently alisema in an MTV interview, “You can have the best actors in the world and the best cinematographers in the world. But if wewe don’t have a solid story, then wewe don’t have a film.” And he is absolutely right. Without a solid story, the film would be dead. I very much like David Slade and have grown to upendo him and what he has done for the Twilight mashabiki kwa blessing us with a movie such as this one. I really respect him as a director and I hope everyone shares my thoughts regarding him. He knows his stuff. Aspiring film directors should take notes from him and what he says. Because a lot of what he says rings true.

I hoped wewe liked my review :) maoni are welcome!
“H-how do y-you know she’s gone?” I gasped. My insides are constricting with fear I have never known. My blood froze. A chill that has nothing to do with the night breeze ran through the entire length of my spine.

“I though she was with you.” Jacob murmured.

“Answer my question! Damn it!” I clenched my hands into tight fists.

The grey mbwa mwitu growled and walked threateningly towards me until her glistening sharp teeth were only centimeters away from my forehead.

“There’s nothing that could scare me now except…”

“Except what?!” Jacob demanded his eyes narrowing into slits....
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posted by Twi-Freak14
"Alice!!!! Please I am capable of making my own decisions on what I'm going to wear!" I half shouted as Alice walked into the closet and started picking through my clothes, completely oblivious that I was there, that au she was just ignoring me.
I grabbed the aqua blue sweater from the rack, right inayofuata to the lacy black short sleeve shati and jean skirt, upindo that Alice was planning on making me wear.
"So... Bella, I was thinking, wewe know Nessie's birthday is coming up soon, and I would upendo your help on picking out what to get her."
"I'm sure wewe can already see what I am going to get her so no...
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i'll put the other makala up tomorrow i'm still uandishi them :D, Thankx for leaving maoni and avoiding my mistakes LOL

Bella's pov

I think I was right, This guy was about 23 years old, brown short hair and with topaz eyes.
“Daniel” I alisema strong and with curious in my voice
“Hello Izzy, I’m surprised wewe remember me” he alisema with joy in his voice.
I felt Edward taking place behind me I couldn’t say anything anymore and than Edward just alisema “can we help you” looking at Daniel.
“I’m here for Izzy” he alisema strong and determined
“Don’t now any Izzy, here” Edward said...
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it's getting pretty hard for me now to make it zaidi exciting and yet awesome, so give me some time to continue the story

Bella's pov

I woke up and I felt my hands being tight up.
“Edward” I alisema panicking and confused, I start looking around, I barely remembered what happened before.
“Bella, don’t panic” I heard and saw Edward now
“Why am I tight up, what happened” still with panic in my voice
“don’t wewe remember Bella” After wewe drank the blood wewe were, I would say, wild, like wewe were someone else, wewe threw Jasper in the middle of the room and Emmett against the ukuta and I...
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it's a very long one :D enjoy

Bella's pov

I was laying on the meza, jedwali with Edward’s hand in mine. I looked at him and he was looking at me I couldn’t resist but smiling at him and he responded with a smile back, but it wasn’t the smile I’m used too this one was full of pain, concern, grieve. But I couldn’t disagree on him I felt the same way and even confused but I was happy, because Edward and me are going to have another child, while it’s not even possible.
Carlisle came to me and asked politely
“Bella, may I touch you’re stomach”. I nodded yes. It didn’t took long and than...
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posted by iluvtwilight123
" OH, my god! Trenton your a vampire!" I shouted but really i didnt care, my best friend is a vampire instead of human and i never saw it coming. "Well yeah I didnt want to tell wewe until I explained it but i couldnt keep my eyes shut any more." He alisema it so casually it almost frightened me. I couldnt believe it was all happening in one siku and not just any day-my birthday. From drama with Jacob, to making up and kissing, then having a bad dream, to finding out that i had the flu where it is suppose to eat myself alive, and to juu it all off my friend is here telling me that he is a vampire!...
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Chapter 4: Jacob’s Suicide Mission…(lol) (From Jacob’s POV)

As I walked up to the front door, I felt oddly nervous. If it were 6 years zamani I would not have been comfortable walking up to a house owned kwa a vampire unless it involved me ripping them to pieces, but hujambo things change. Edward and I have actually gotten close since I stood with him and his family to protect Renesmee from the Volturi, we are on friendly terms; that along with the fact that both he and Bella know that I have imprinted on Renesmee. Yet, this knowledge did nothing to ease the nervousness I felt as I contemplated...
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posted by ktbminnie12
Okay this is probably the last one for today!!!!

Bella’s POV

    I turned to where I heard the wonderful voice come from. I could pick that voice out anywhere. I felt my moyo start to beat rapidly at his voice. I felt tears down my face.
    He came out of the bushes with a strawberry blonde and Jacob in his human form.    
    But I didn’t even pay attention to who else was around. I only looked for his face.
    I found it and held my breath in. His face was the same. But he had dark, purple...
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posted by ktbminnie12
Sorry it's so late!!!! I've been very busy!!!! Enjoy!!!!

Edward’s POV

    That night, Carlisle called the Denali’s. They were arriving in the morning. We teamed up with the werewolves, too. The only reason they were helping us is because of Jacob. He nearly ripped their throats out. They didn’t want to help at first, but once we told them who was missing, they all agreed.
    They all went out on patrol keeping an eye on Tanya and her family. I was downstairs, watching TV with Emmett. I was so anxious and impatient, Jasper had to leave the room.
    “Edward,...
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posted by twilight-7
hujambo Guys, stop worrying! Things happen for a reason!


“I’m not ageing?”
Jacob nodded. I looked at Edward who was still giving Jacob death stares. How could I be so stupid? How could I think that I would ever live happily ever after with Edward? He was a freaking vampire for Christ sake! I didn’t need Jacob to tell me the venom wasn’t stopping me getting older, I could have told myself that. Whenever I had looked in the mirror I could see another sign that I was getting nearer and nearer to seventeen and I knew Edward could see this too. He isn’t that brilliant at disguising his thoughts....
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posted by twilight-7
Guys, I am utterly sorry. MacNurse11 is right. Jacob does know that Kayla was bitten. Sorry. When I was uandishi the chapter this morning I did look to see whether Jacob knew but I couldn’t find it at all in my prequel folder. So I assumed he didn’t. I have written a tonne of these and wewe lot should know so I am allowed to get confused as to what has already happened. I have rewritten the chapter but don’t worry. Jacob not knowing now wasn’t a significant thing, it just made the story drag longer. Now that I know that he does things are much zaidi easier.

So here it is, re-edited Chapter...
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posted by kladida_22
Ok guys this is my first time doing shabiki fiction well one of my inayopendelewa characters is Jacob from twilight series obviously duhh! And I really liked Leah’s character too and I thought they would have made a great couple and I really thought they were going to end up together so this is my ending for Leah who in BD didn’t not get a happy ending like everyone else in the book so I changed a couple of things up be patience with me I’m new at this and if there’s any advice wewe want to give me post it in your maoni and if wewe like the story I promised to keep going the first chapters are...
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Warning: Thist is just my ndoto coming through. And some information to you; the story plays before Bella became a Vampire and there is no Nessie in sight. So its just for our little Jacob's sake, he needs some luving.

...and so the story goes on

Right into it
I was alive, zaidi than the past few months. I was able to sleep and zaidi important i was willing to face the world. And why? All happened two days ago, when i had only one wish: To forget. But instead of that, my pain got washed away kwa a human girl. I didnt know her name, and i wasnt sure if i ever got a chance ot find out.- but she was...
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She was kissing him back…

She kissed him back…

Did she really?

No….

NO!!!!!!!

I covered my eyes with my trembling fists then moved to cover my ears and tried to muffle the agonized howling.

You were the one howling idiot!

I shut my mouth and squeezed my eyes shut as my body convulsed with pain. Pain like I never knew before.

Damn it! This is too much.

I gritted my teeth as a tortured moan escaped my lips.

“Jake!” Nessie gasped. She stepped away from him and tentatively walked towards me.

I took a deep breath and counted up to sixty before I looked up to her. I was on my knees on the ground....
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All right, if wewe have read the series and upendo them. Then wewe will absoultly upendo the series called

The Mortal Insruments
kwa Cassandra Clare

link

If wewe want to skip this and just read the summary just scroll to the bottom, I took quite a lot of time uandishi this!

"The Mortal Instruments series is a story world that I upendo to live in. I hate to see the story end, but if it has to end, then City of Glass is the most perfect way for that to happen. Beautiful!"

– Stephenie Meyer, internationally bestselling mwandishi of TWILIGHT-

-and it is also alike Twilight; hot main guy: named Jace Wayland...
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posted by kristine_cullen
Warning: This is just coming from me, and was done out of boredom and maybe some motivation. Its just a fiction, so nothing is real. So dont be upset if wewe wont find Bella in that story, it wouldnt make sense otherwise. Enjoy.

SideNote: I know that Edward isnt as straight mbele in the books, and in the inayofuata chapter he will change. I just wanted Ashley to fall in upendo with him for the right reasons, instead of being obsessed.

Waking up didnt feel right, being here was somehow strange. I sat up in my bed, stretching and tried to remember what had happened last night. Letting out some low sigh,...
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As I was going nyumbani I suddenly was hit kwa the reality that I really was going to be a mother... a mom at last.
A mother wow... I thought to myself. I'm going to be responsible for someone. I shook that thought out of my head quickly, since I had always been a clutz like my mom. I mean what if I accidently hurt my unborn baby, I thought to myself before quickly shaking that thought off too.
It was 6 a.m. and I had just awoken to discover Jacob sitting at the foot of my bed. Jacob... I began- I need to tell wewe something I'm...I'm... Pregnant. "Thats great", he replied to me reaching up to stroke my growing stomach. "How far along are you?", he asks me. "I'm 3 months now Jake but... the baby's not yours.", I tell him... he slaps me and gathers all his things and bolts out the door leaving me to face reality i]alone.[/i]
posted by just_bella
I am horribly addicted to uandishi this, it's so much fun and interesting to write. I hope wewe guys enjoy this chapter:
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Quick refresher:

I need to go now, the lights are coming back on. I will try hiding my book better this time so that no one will find it and take it away. I need this, this is my only lifeline right now."

The last paragraph was slightly smudged, I ran my finger over the spot when I realized what would have made the ink run. I sat there staring at the tear marks realizing that my moyo was breaking twice. Once when I wrote it,...
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I stared at my tiny room’s ceiling. The paint is starting to peel off and Dad’s been bugging me to work on it. I don’t want to. I just wanted to lie in kitanda and do nothing. Do nothing but think of her, dream of her.

Once again, her beautiful face flashed before my eyes…

“D-do wewe want me to l-leave? So wewe could be free?” She asked brokenly.

I winced at the memory of her lovely face torn with pain. That look on her face haunted me for months now.

“Do wewe want me to haul your stupid butt out of this room, Jacob Black?” Leah growled from the doorway.

I glared at her.

“Get lost, Leah.”...
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“Vincent Salvatori asked about you.” Jenny alisema as I joined her for lunch today.

“Who?”

“The recluse. He introduced himself to me during class.” I decided to ditch class this morning. I don’t want to spend an saa and a half beside arrogant Vincent Salvatori.

“I told him wewe overslept.” Her eyes narrowed as she took in my bloodshot puffy eyes. “Care to explain to me what last night’s sobbing was about.”

“Some other time, Jen. Don’t want to talk about it.” I murmured then picked up my cup of coffee and took a sip.

“Okay….Listen, do wewe want to go to Jessie’s for...
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