Mafuatano ya Twilight Article: My thoughts about the movie

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posted by alicecullen91

I thought the movie was great! If i had to rate this movie it would be an A.
Acting: B+
Directing: A
Story: A

My inayopendelewa parts have to be:
+the kissing scene
+how the movie started
+how the movie ended (good cliffy)
+the baseball scene (very funny)
+the prom
+bella tellimg charlie that she a tarehe with edward.
+the meadow

My least inayopendelewa parts are:
- how edward acted soooo dramatic at the meadow
-the hospital scene at the end of the movie (a little zaidi detail needed to be added)
-the WAY too fake flying and running with bella.

thanks to the movie, i really enjoyed some of the characters in the book, for instance:

Mike Newton: (book) I hated him! he got on my nerves. (movie) pretty funny! I enjoyed him.

Laurent: (book) never paid too much attention towards him aka. ignored him. (movie) i loved him! he had soooo much character in him! thank wewe Edi for playing him!

Victoria: (book) never paid too much attention (movie) I loved her! she was so flirty and dangerous! she rocks!!!

Charlie: (book) no opinion of him, just a dad. (movie) funny! i seriously thought he was my dad! me and mom started comparing. he is truely a sweet guy who didn't want her to leave.

Eric Yorkie: (book) no opinion. (movie) I JUST WANNA HUG HIM!!!! he is so cute and cheezy!

They really changed how I viewed them.

Characters that I really found annoying!

James: hot guy. not too much deph in him and really annoying. i forgot, are all bad guys this annoying. i guess the good thing is that he knows who he is and what he wants: he is a vampire and he wants to eat humans (particualry bella)

Jacob Black: nice face and charming smile. but i still don't like him due to his betrayl at the end of New Moon and his sceaming ways in Eclipse to Bella's heart. was i seeing this wrong au is he alot shorter than Edward in the movie? the wig was totally fake.

Characters that could have used improvement:

Jasper: they cut all of jasper's lines in the movie in half! I really wanted to hear zaidi of him and Alice. Jasper looked a little creepy as well, his eyes and his portrayl was a little off. But I still enjoyed him, especially him playing baseball. he still rocks!!!!

**The Chemistry**
I enjoyed the cast/charcters chemisty!

Emmett and Edward playing baseball and crashing into eachother was sooooo funny!!!! it shows that they really enjoy each other.

Emmett and Rosalie were so cute together

Jasper and Alice was perfect, just like how they were in the books, very dainty. when bella was riding in the back of the car, she saw them holding hands and such. it just like the books.

Carlisle and Esme are just like husband and wife, very real and cute and they seem to upendo each other.

Edward and Bella are cute together. very rocky and extreme but very sweet together! i wish they were dating in real life!!! poor Rob!

Bella and Charlie acted like father and daughter, in a very awkward situation, but sweet and enduring.

Everyone else has good chemisty, friends, family, nomads, veggie-vamps, all of 'em. Some movie don't have actors/actresses that get along and work well but they did.

**Meet the Cullens**
When they walked in the cafeteria, i thought they were sooo cool on how they did it!

Rosalie and Emmett have this powerful aura when they walked and their attitude. its like 'look at me, i'm hot but wewe can't have me' and like 'we are so powerful and cool like that'. they acted like celebirtys.

Jasper and Alice have their walks different but molded together. Jasper was stiff as dry ukuta and Alice was fluid and dainty! they were so adorable when the walked in, and their walks fit like a glove.

Edward's walk was powerful and mysterious.

Catherine (the director) did a great job directing them. their walks give us and the people who never read the book, a glimpse on how their character is.

Overall, i thought this movie was the shizz! i really wanna see the movie again. and even though i hate New Moon, i can't wait to see the movie when it comes out! :)
(My mom can't wait either! She's been asking me when its gonna come out!....She dreams of Edward now! lolz)

Note: this is only my personal view and opinion about the movie. i'm sorry if i'd offended anyone and all that.
u don't have to agree au disagree with my maoni and opinions. i would appriciate if i get some feedback, but no flames!
its okay if wewe disagree with me, but don't personally attack me. everyone has their own opinion on how they saw the movie and what they like.
Thank you!

tubby2002, DarkSarcasm and 3 others like this

LoveToLove I still haven't been able to see the movie yet, it doesn't come out here in England till December 19th, but I really like your review! I have a feeling I'm going to agree with pretty much everything you said. I too hate New Moon but I'm already excited to see how they make that into a movie also. : ) Again, loved your review.

BrookeCullen I love the movie, i know basically every word. I loved the scene where Edward rescued her in Port Angeles. I cried at the part where she was yelling at Charlie, and left him. and when it showed the flash backs, when Edward was sucking her blood. (: Amazing movie, and Amazing books.

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Lost upendo

posted by groovychicklisa

Chapter 13

E|POV

She was standing there. Shivering in the night. She was nothing like the girl i knew- her dress ripped, her hair pulled out and chaotic. Blood pouring from what appeared to be a bust lip. It was 1am. What the hell was she doing here “can i come in” she whispered – tremors of shivers running through her body. I didn’t even know if i could speak- looking at her- hurting was physically torturing me. I stepped aside letting her walk in. I closed the door behind her. She jumped slightly at the noise it made. She looked a million years from the girl i saw at the party- she...

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taking chances chapter 8

posted by karpach_13

"nessie" my mom alisema in shock. wow i couldnt believe i told my father to get out of my life.i was disappointed in myself.i was so sorry for everything but i couldnt say anything. i ran in the bedroom and slammed the door. i began crying then i heard my dad come in.
"dad im really sorry i didnt mean anything that i said, im just really tired of u pretending that im a little girls still" i told him. his eyes softened a little.
"nessie,... its my fault i didnt want to let go the baby u i just cant believe ur getting as old as me" he laughed at that thought.
"haha wow technically ur 18 and im 16 wow...

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taking chances chapter 7

posted by karpach_13

"who is it?" eric asked. this cant be any worse ur alone with a guy at a hotel and ur family pops up thinking who knows what.
"grandpa Carlisle i told only mom" i whispered to him.
"i didnt want to tell them, but edward read my mind" he told me. i couldnt believe it.
"dad stop kusoma peoples mind" i told him, i wasnt as mad with him as i was before.
"ooo a movie sweet... excuse me let me through" emmett alisema and went o watch avatar.
"ooo popcorn" he practically shouted and i rolled my eyes.
"i've missed u so much" aunt alice squealed.
"me too" and she hugged me.
"then y dont u come home?" she asked...

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Cold Roses--Chp. 17: Secrets Kill

posted by Summer_Leanne

Hi again all wewe sweethearts! I read each of your comments, and wewe guys are such blessings!! :D I'm thrilled you're loving this fic. Hope wewe enjoy this chapter! Much upendo to each of y'all, from me! <33 :]
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Secrets Kill
The couple caught a plane ride back to Forks, Chloe hanging onto Jake the majority of the way. Jake almost refused to believe this was real. A few days ago, Summer was out of his life entirely, but now, she left her abusing husband for him. He had to admit, when he strolled into Volterra, he was expecting his death. Luckily,...

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emmett cullen upendo story chapter 5

posted by karpach_13

wewe had a knock at your bedroom door. wewe got up and answered it.
You: hujambo mama.
Esme: Time for bed.
You: Thank you.
You laid down and she came over to your kitanda and kissed your forehead.
Esme: Good night sweetheart.
You: Night mom I upendo you.
Esme: upendo wewe too.
She turned the CD on low and turned out the lights. wewe thouht about your siku while listening to the music. wewe were about asleep when someone came into your room. wewe felt the teddy kubeba in your arm and knew it was Emmett. wewe smiled and said.
You: Night Teddy Bear.
Em: Night
You fell asleep.
The Dream.
You were back in the forest and wewe looked...

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Who's zaidi popular? Edward au Jacob?

posted by Abilei

In the never-ending "Twilight" battle between Team Edward and Team Jacob, we have the results: The vampire -- and the man who plays him -- claims the buzz. Sure, there's been a lot of tough talk about the mbwa mwitu boy -- aka Jacob Black, aka Taylor Lautner -- wooing affections away from his glittering rival. But, as a brooding Bella knows, it takes a lot to shake one's loyalty to Edward Cullen -- aka Robert Pattinson.

Not that there hasn't been a time when many have strayed: Jacob Black (and Lautner himself) wrangled zaidi searches on Yahoo! than Edward Cullen (and Pattinson) for about three weeks...

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the new Begining ch1

posted by sh0rtiinedward

No one is looking at you, i promise myself but deep, deep inside of me i knew that everyone in Forks was staring at me.

"Mmmm Charlie, can we just go eat at home, i don't want to go to your inayopendelewa Restaurant please?" i ask him with my little puppy eyes."Nessi come on wewe never go out of the woods, now is the time please try?"
well charlie was right but i wasen't hungry anyways i when hunting with my aunt Rosalie 2 days ago, but i will do it just for grandpa.
"Here we are, My number One Restaurant"Charlie alisema very exited. " yeah chajio, chakula cha jioni time" i reaply as we started walking to the door, everyone...

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(Doesn't have a name yet)

posted by jacob_lover5253

Here is Jacob's POV!

End of Chapter 4.

Chapter 4. (Bella)

"Is that no we won't mgawanyiko, baidisha au no i can't go"

"Both"

"Get out of my house!" I alisema angerly. As soon as he was out of my room I
slammed my window shut.

A rock hit my window. What now?

Chapter 6. (Jacob)

Throwing a rock at her window was stupid. I probably scared her. She looked out her window shocked.
She opened it. "Jacob, what are wewe doing here? I thought wewe were getting here tomorrow."

Yup, I was right Billy got to Charlie and Charlie got to Bella. "Just get out of the way." Once
she was out of the way I was in her bedroom. We sat and talked....

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Blackout blurb

posted by smileyfaceddude

When Renesmee is taken away once more, her kidnapper isn’t the person she thinks it is. Her enemy, Cynddylan, is now developing feelings for Renesmee he has never thought a heartless, soulless monster could feel. Renesmee goes on another epic journey and the Cullens race to save her. Who we she choose, who will be lonely forever more? Renesmee decides…

Please maoni and read the story!!! Thanks

:)

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A Life Of Death Part Two

posted by a-jforever

“Who’s Alice and why did she send wewe for me?” I growled. I could fight them, of course not all together but I could get away easily enough. I crouched down my growl getting deeper.

“Peace young one.” The one that must be called Carlisle said.

I stuck the gun in the back of my black knee high boots, sticking my hands in the back pockets of my denim shorts and standing up straight.

“All we ask of wewe is to come back with us.” The blonde female said, sounding irritated.

“Where am I going to? What do wewe plan to do with me?” I had so many maswali to ask, that would keep me safe....

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a Youtube script(episode two)Die,Live,and Beg

posted by moolah

Episode Two:
*Die, Live, and Beg*
(Black Screen)
Edward’s POV:
Ever guessed why things fall?
Or die?
Or are ruined kwa one slip?
I never did because I was the predator.
A lion was no match for me.
I could smash it to pieces.
Until…
Bella came along.
Her birthday was my birthday.
I gripped her hand.
Kissed her cheek.
And then, let her fall.
Hard.
(Back to the room)
Edward: *standing beside Bella*
Bella: *opening gift* Ow. *gets paper cut* Paper cut.
(You can hear a sound such as blood pulsing in ears)
Edward: *pushes Bella back*
Jasper: *runs toward them*
Bella: *falls against the table* *glass breaks*
Edward: *growls*...

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Time Kidnapper (Chapter 5)

posted by 1TeamEdwardFan

Bella

hujambo guys, Thanks for all the great maoni :) Hope wewe guys are enjoying my story. Please comment!!!

Bella's POV

"Why not!?" I asked getting a little pissed off now.
"Well wewe see Bella" Tash paused "The thing is... I haven't told wewe everything that wewe need to know"
"What do wewe mean? Why didn't wewe tell me?" I asked getting confused again.
"Well see I was going to tell wewe but wewe passed out" She told me.
"Has this got something to do with, Why you're dressed up in old fashioned clothes? And why at least half of you're house is old fashioned? Because this has been really bugging me!"
"Um......

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Jakes POV

posted by LexisFaith

"Mail!" I called as I walked through the door.
Nessi came down the all balancing a laundry basket on her now bulging stomach. She had one of those belly's that was perfectly round, and the belly button stuck out. Only her's was cuter.
"Anything for me?" She asked as she set the basket in the chair and put her hands on her hips. Clearly she had been cleaning today.
"Well," I sighed, sorting through the short stack "Oh, here is something addressed to both of us."
She furrowed her brows. "From who?" We had never gotten something addressed to both of us. It was either Mrs. Renesmee Black, au Mr. Jacob...

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Talent Part 1

posted by CarlislesLover

I’d been a vampire for almost two months now. Nobody in my family thought I had a power, but the truth is I do. I just don’t want to tell anyone though. I could make the dead rise. I know it sounds pretty creepy but I find it amazing. I’d seen Royce, Rosalie’s ex fiancé. He seemed a nice guy, he told me he didn’t like Rosalie as it always had to be her, her, her. I’d met Edward’s mum, she was nutty, we’re great Marafiki and I’m glad I have this talent to meet her. I hadn’t met Edwards’s dad yet though. I’d met Alice’s brother that she doesn’t know about. I made up...

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Renesmee (#4)

posted by LexisFaith

Jacob was at Billy's, so I was at nyumbani kwa myself. And a half. I patted my stomache as I closed the door behind me. I drove to Carlisle and Esme's house for some company.
I pulled in the drive and got out smelling the air around me. Everyone's sent was faded out towards the woods. All except for Carlisle's. Good. He was the person I needed to talk to.
I opened the door and listened for movement. "I'm in my study." Carlisle's voice carried softly down the stairs. I set my bag down in the chair that was inayofuata to the stairs. I I thought about running and then I thought about the thanks Sarah would...

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My Dreams Ch.2

posted by decullen

i woke up to hear jake shouting my name i jumped off the kitanda and stood crooked waiting for him to come in "im so sorry bella i've been cheating on wewe " he alisema in a calm tone and he then ran out the house , i lifted my hand and shot a strong bolt of electricity shuddering at the door as it torn through its structures , why had he been so calm? why didn't he explain? my upendo torn and trampled on once again i heard a child crying i flung my body sideways to see a small baby that looked like jake, he was covered with a blanket witch had a word on it , 'canowicakte'. I lifted him gently and...

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a beautiful death part 2

posted by xroylex

slowly a young lad stepped out from the front door he looked shy but as soon as he saw me his face lit up as if we knew each other did we?
"nessie meet jacob jacob meet my grandaughter nessy"
he leaped with such grace such speed of the porch and came closer and as he did i got a smell that had me backing away/
"nessue?" charlie asked consern crossing his voise as jacob started to vibrate? what was wrong with this kid really 1st he smelled sekunde he looked really familiar and last he was vibrating?
ok then this was not normal and trust me i have seen not normal but i think this is the biggest...

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Life after Breaking Dawn Part 9!

posted by smileyfaceddude

I screamed in horror, trying to pull free, the hand was just like Jasper’s… just thinking brings tears back to my eyes, but they won’t spill, so I just blinked them away like I always did… I looked at my capturer I gasped, my eyes went so wide I thought they’d pop out, my mouth curled into an ‘O’ shape, the capture WAS Jasper. Oh, how I was relieved he was alive, in one way, but his very being wasn’t, oh, how I wanted to wrap, upangaji pamoja my arms tight around his neck, and just forget all this has happened and go back to the Happy times we had… but there was no way to do so. For, my beloved...

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What If. CH.7

posted by decullen

Its been a week since I found out I was pregnant, Alice alisema she had told Carlisle and I had to go and see him right away.We were getting out of my truck to go in to the Cullen house.When we entered they were all looking at me except Edward he was know were to be seen .Esme came over and hugged me, she lead me to Carlisle he was in his office he had the baby monitor all ready.
"Bella could wewe lye down for me."He alisema and I was lying on the table. Carlisle came over to me and pulled my juu up so my belly was inaonyesha then put some jelly stuff on it.He started to rub the monitor on my belly.On...

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Dear Diary:Chapter 1

posted by Jessie-Louise

Dear Diary,
I think I upendo him,I want him to be mine forever,we shared our first kiss tonight it was so magical, I but if my dad found out he would break his legs au even worse kill him and I don't want that to happen.
If my mom knew she would probably attack him and scream at him,Why does he have to be so special to me?,Jacob I upendo you.
upendo Renesmee..x

As soon as I had put my diary underneath my bed,there was a knock at my bedroom door
"come in" I alisema quietly trying not to wake my mom up.
"Sweetie,get your pyjamas on,time for kitanda wewe have school tomorrow."Dad alisema to me.

As soon as he left my...