----SPOILER ALERT----
Below is an excerpt from the original, unedited draft of the first chapter of "Because wewe Loved Me". If wewe do not wish to be spoiled, trespass no further.
----Chapter 1: The Storm----
Suddenly, she heard heavy footsteps approaching her. Someone was in the house. Not again, she thought. A burglar had broken in their house the other week, and Liana couldn't let it happen again. She took the broom, which was leaning against the ukuta in a corner of the kitchen, and prepared herself to ambush the intruder.
She waited... And the perfect moment came. The footsteps stopped right inayofuata to the ukuta she was hiding behind. Liana took a deep breath and started hitting the burglar repeatedly with the broom.
"Ow! No, wait! Ouch! Liana, it's me!" The burglar screeched with an oh so familiar voice, raising his hands to defend himself from her attacks.
She stopped just as she realized the person she wa s assaulting was her husband, who had just come nyumbani from work. She blushed at her own mistake and quickly hid the ufagio behind her.
"Oh, I'm so sorry! Jeremy, are wewe okay?" She asked, feeling worried and embarrassed at the situation she had just got herself into.
"Well... I was expecting a warmer welcome... One that doesn't involve ambushing me with a broom... au any other kitchenware for that matter." Jeremy said, rubbing the back of his head.
"I'm sorry." Liana let go of the ufagio and threw her arms around his neck, giving him a sweet apologetic smile.
"Don't worry, I think I'll live," Jeremy laughed as he gazed at her beautiful blue eyes. "But just so wewe know, your aggressive side is beginning to show."
"I thought we had a burglar... again," She elaborated. "Though I don't know why anyone would want to steal anything here." She looked around the house, a sad expression marring her features. There was indeed nothing valuable to steal in this house.
"Well, I'm afraid now they'll have something to steal from us. So promise me you'll always keep this with you." Jeremy alisema and placed a pink chalcedony in his wife's hand. She gasped at the sight of the gemstone.
"Where did wewe get it?" She blurted out.
"In the mines," He replied casually. "I'm not a thief, don't worry. A workmate of mine found it."
"Oh, I see." Liana took a closer look at the stone, then looked at Jeremy again. "But what's the occasion? It's not my birthday, au anything like that."
Jeremy smiled.
"Oh, it's just... It's so beautiful, and I thought you'd like it. Besides, since I'm not going to be around now that I have to work extra hours in the mines, I want wewe to keep something that reminds wewe of me. So that wewe won't freak out and run around randomly assaulting people with that broom." He explained with a grin. Liana frowned. Must he always bring up her embarrassing moments? He was so much like Alexa.
"That's just so romantic, Jeremy" She said, trying to hide the blush that was starting to creep on her face.
But then, Jeremy stopped smiling and looked at Liana with an almost pain-stricken expression, then began to speak in a serious tone.
"You know our life isn't easy... And it will never be. There will be moments in our life when wewe feel scared, when wewe feel like wewe can't go on anymore. But life goes on. Whatever wewe might believe, life always goes on. wewe just have to find enough strength and faith to songesha on with it. So everytime wewe feel like giving up, hold it in your hands and think of me. It'll give wewe strength."
There was a moment of silence before Jeremy began laughing about how he scared her with that one. Liana laughed along with him, but she still couldn't get rid of that tiny uneasy feeling inside her stomach. The way he alisema it... and his sudden change of attitude... It scared her.
But then she soon forgot about it. Perhaps she was never convinced that something could go wrong. Their life was perfect. There couldn't be anything lurking in the dark, ready to harm them, right?
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Okay, I know it's horrible, but it's just the draft. Final result might look different. Feed me with your thoughts!
Below is an excerpt from the original, unedited draft of the first chapter of "Because wewe Loved Me". If wewe do not wish to be spoiled, trespass no further.
----Chapter 1: The Storm----
Suddenly, she heard heavy footsteps approaching her. Someone was in the house. Not again, she thought. A burglar had broken in their house the other week, and Liana couldn't let it happen again. She took the broom, which was leaning against the ukuta in a corner of the kitchen, and prepared herself to ambush the intruder.
She waited... And the perfect moment came. The footsteps stopped right inayofuata to the ukuta she was hiding behind. Liana took a deep breath and started hitting the burglar repeatedly with the broom.
"Ow! No, wait! Ouch! Liana, it's me!" The burglar screeched with an oh so familiar voice, raising his hands to defend himself from her attacks.
She stopped just as she realized the person she wa s assaulting was her husband, who had just come nyumbani from work. She blushed at her own mistake and quickly hid the ufagio behind her.
"Oh, I'm so sorry! Jeremy, are wewe okay?" She asked, feeling worried and embarrassed at the situation she had just got herself into.
"Well... I was expecting a warmer welcome... One that doesn't involve ambushing me with a broom... au any other kitchenware for that matter." Jeremy said, rubbing the back of his head.
"I'm sorry." Liana let go of the ufagio and threw her arms around his neck, giving him a sweet apologetic smile.
"Don't worry, I think I'll live," Jeremy laughed as he gazed at her beautiful blue eyes. "But just so wewe know, your aggressive side is beginning to show."
"I thought we had a burglar... again," She elaborated. "Though I don't know why anyone would want to steal anything here." She looked around the house, a sad expression marring her features. There was indeed nothing valuable to steal in this house.
"Well, I'm afraid now they'll have something to steal from us. So promise me you'll always keep this with you." Jeremy alisema and placed a pink chalcedony in his wife's hand. She gasped at the sight of the gemstone.
"Where did wewe get it?" She blurted out.
"In the mines," He replied casually. "I'm not a thief, don't worry. A workmate of mine found it."
"Oh, I see." Liana took a closer look at the stone, then looked at Jeremy again. "But what's the occasion? It's not my birthday, au anything like that."
Jeremy smiled.
"Oh, it's just... It's so beautiful, and I thought you'd like it. Besides, since I'm not going to be around now that I have to work extra hours in the mines, I want wewe to keep something that reminds wewe of me. So that wewe won't freak out and run around randomly assaulting people with that broom." He explained with a grin. Liana frowned. Must he always bring up her embarrassing moments? He was so much like Alexa.
"That's just so romantic, Jeremy" She said, trying to hide the blush that was starting to creep on her face.
But then, Jeremy stopped smiling and looked at Liana with an almost pain-stricken expression, then began to speak in a serious tone.
"You know our life isn't easy... And it will never be. There will be moments in our life when wewe feel scared, when wewe feel like wewe can't go on anymore. But life goes on. Whatever wewe might believe, life always goes on. wewe just have to find enough strength and faith to songesha on with it. So everytime wewe feel like giving up, hold it in your hands and think of me. It'll give wewe strength."
There was a moment of silence before Jeremy began laughing about how he scared her with that one. Liana laughed along with him, but she still couldn't get rid of that tiny uneasy feeling inside her stomach. The way he alisema it... and his sudden change of attitude... It scared her.
But then she soon forgot about it. Perhaps she was never convinced that something could go wrong. Their life was perfect. There couldn't be anything lurking in the dark, ready to harm them, right?
----
Okay, I know it's horrible, but it's just the draft. Final result might look different. Feed me with your thoughts!
“Anneliese, I upendo you,” Julian admitted.
Anneliese’s eyes widened. Her moyo skipped a beat. “Julian loves me,” she thought, “He loves me!” She tried to speak, but couldn’t find her voice.
“Anneliese,” Julian whispered, his hand slowly caressing her cheek.
Anneliese felt her cheeks grow hot, her eyes close, her lips curve into a smile. She heard the sound of fabric shifting, someone moving. Her eyes opened. His face was inches away, his blue eyes gazing deeply into hers.
Anneliese couldn’t take it anymore, “Oh, Julian,” she sighed. Her lips crushed to his.
Julian was stunned, confused, and unsure of how to proceed. Her lips were soft and warm. Butterflies rioted in his stomach, his moyo lurched violently.
Anneliese’s eyes widened. Her moyo skipped a beat. “Julian loves me,” she thought, “He loves me!” She tried to speak, but couldn’t find her voice.
“Anneliese,” Julian whispered, his hand slowly caressing her cheek.
Anneliese felt her cheeks grow hot, her eyes close, her lips curve into a smile. She heard the sound of fabric shifting, someone moving. Her eyes opened. His face was inches away, his blue eyes gazing deeply into hers.
Anneliese couldn’t take it anymore, “Oh, Julian,” she sighed. Her lips crushed to his.
Julian was stunned, confused, and unsure of how to proceed. Her lips were soft and warm. Butterflies rioted in his stomach, his moyo lurched violently.
This FanFic will be about Melody from DC...
I'll tell how she learned the song "Believe" as an apprentice, how she hid it in her moyo for a long time and how she made Liana and Alexa learn it all during those days.
It's a Song-Fic
Characters: Melody
Genre: Friendship/Adventure
Rating: K
Hope you'll like this FF, it came to my mind this morning coming back to school kwa bus, and I was listening to "Believe" (The full version)
I though it would be a nice idea, also Mel is Miss McCartney's inayopendelewa character in DC, so then... that's what my mind sent me! Lol!
I'll tell how she learned the song "Believe" as an apprentice, how she hid it in her moyo for a long time and how she made Liana and Alexa learn it all during those days.
It's a Song-Fic
Characters: Melody
Genre: Friendship/Adventure
Rating: K
Hope you'll like this FF, it came to my mind this morning coming back to school kwa bus, and I was listening to "Believe" (The full version)
I though it would be a nice idea, also Mel is Miss McCartney's inayopendelewa character in DC, so then... that's what my mind sent me! Lol!
Barbie wants to wake up Kelly's fantasy... and she asks her a new story. So Kelly begins to tell Barbie a story about the goddesses of the Four Elements, that are trapped in four different places in the World of the Glass Tower. But it's time to go to kitanda now, it's ten o'clock in the evening... and Kelly told Barbie only the plot of the story. In the night, Kelly heards a strange noise coming from the living room, she wakes up to see what's happening there... but a fairy with upinde wa mvua wings appears in front of her from the nothing and does a spell... So, Kelly wakes up, as the fairy says, in the World of the Glass Tower. When Kelly asks the fairy why she has a cut in the right leg, she tells her that she has tried to defend the goddesses of the Four Elements. Kelly doesn't understand: is that the world that she began to tell Barbie about? au it's only a dream?
Coming soon... I already done Chapter One! Hope wewe like the plot... I've done it in one saa yesterday, I didn't have ideas!
Coming soon... I already done Chapter One! Hope wewe like the plot... I've done it in one saa yesterday, I didn't have ideas!
