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Emmett and Rosalie - Their Untold Life Told

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gwen5890 said:
not cool
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Mind giving me a good, thorough, clear reason why you didn't like it? Not that I mind since I'm not the author, but "not cool" isn't really what I'd call a great explanation for a 3-rating....o_O
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To start, the story isn't bad, really. I mean, the English grammatic is fine and everything, it's just that, you made the story a little bit unreal. I mean, Emmett would never, never talk to Rosalie like that. And why is he so surprised that she said: "I love you," to him? Like Stephenie wrote, they share a very passionate relationship. I liked the fragment with the roses, but it's a little bit too unreal.
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Okay...but again, I did not write this story.
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