Japan Article: Kuro no Shiro(Black and White) pt 1?

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posted by KuroOokami

Kaze Kazawa?

hujambo everyone! I was working on this stroy for 2 days now and I might as well put it up here. Tell me if wewe think I should keep on doing it and what wewe think. Arigato!

This srory takes place in Japan in the mwaka 2020. The world didn't come to an end but Kaze Kazawa wants it to. Kaze is a 16 mwaka old male all alone on a battlefield of a war that may NEVER end.

Kaze Kazawa's father was killed before his eyes. Kaze will never forget what his father alisema befor he died, "You can end ALL of this... wewe got to find 'it'." But Kaze doesn't know what 'it' is.

Having nowhere to go, Kaze fights. Kaze was born with an awesome power to control wind. The power was names 'Kiri kaze' au 'Slicing wind'. Kaze doesn't know who named his power but in a dream he met a black and white wolf.

The mbwa mwitu told Kaze that 'it' is a girl and he can find her where 'time didn't touch'. Kaze trys asking where this place is but he woke up.

Well Thats the just of it. Does it sound cool? Should I put up some of it? Tell me in the comments! I think the theme song for this story should be This is War kwa 30 sekunde to Mars. Look at it on YouTube and tell me what wewe think.Arigato!! (Below and above is what I think Kaze should look like.)

Elinafairy, YuukiTouma and 6 others like this

animelove30 wow! i like ur idea! keep on writing. u r very creative. It is a gift.

KuroOokami Thanks animelove30!

TailsDollFriend Hai! Watashi wa suki des sore! (Yes! I like it!)

orochimarux pretty good scenario you made me think of legend of zelda --wind waker the girl in your story maybe princess Zelda

KuroOokami @ orochimarux : Really?! Lol! I was thinking about D Gray Man when I started this story so it might end up being like that.XD

yana_sasuke heheh woow cool story dude lolz i like it :)))))

KuroOokami @ yana_sasuke: Thanks! Try reading the rest and maybe I'll add some more!! ^^

maxygirlforever U are right about War(30 Seconds To Mars)....I like the way u are writing........U are very gifted boy!!!....And P.s.-Kaze looks so hot!!!LoL

ginei_werewolf I like your story

KuroOokami @ ginei_werewolf: Thanks!

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Kuro no Shiro (Part 6)

posted by KuroOokami

(Is Zaru going to force me to come to the 'Mindless Side'?) Kaze though. Then a sound brought Kaze back from his siku dream. "Hmmm... It seems like HQ needs everyone to return." Zaru looks at Kaze and smerked. Kaze looked at Zaru. (This is it... this is how I'm going to die... at the hands of my mindless brother...) Kaze though. "To bad. I didn't get to kill you." Zaru walked away leaving Kaze and his dead father on the battlefield.

The night sky fills the glum of the Battlefield. A smal moto lights up a small area. "What do I do now?" Kaze pokes the moto with a stick. Kaze took out his father's...