It was the summer of 2006 that my whole world would be changed forever. I was only seventeen at the time. I lived in a very small town in Vermont with my parents and my snotty nineteen mwaka old sister. Oh where are my manners, my name is Courtney Brown au should I say Courtney Jackson. But i'll get to that in a little while, first I want to tell wewe a little bit zaidi about me. During the summers I would work in this pizza place so I would earn extra money, (well that's what I told everyone but the real reason was so I didn't have to hear my parents argue.) My princess sister Heather (that's what I call her because that is exactly how she acted,) lived with us. She didn't go to college she basiclly sat on her duff all siku while everyone around her did their job for the day. But for some strange reason my parents doted on her because she was the beautiful one, the precious one, and the brillant one. So in my parents eyes I was the rebel of the family. My parents constantly argued all the time usually it was over something stupid au insignificant. But there was one thing in my life that was always a bright spot that was, Michael Jackson. I will have to admit I was pretty much a fanatic. I had every album, every movie, and every magazine he every was on! I started becoming a shabiki when I was six and never stoped. It always seemed like when ever I had a bad siku at school au my parents arguements got really bad, he was always there to get me through it. That's why one siku when I was eleven, I started to write upendo stories that transpired between me and Michael. And ever since that siku I have never stoped. I never told anyone about them except my best friend in the whole wide world Kayla. She also worked with me at the pizza duka but we always had a ball together. Sometimes that was my only excape from the real world was to shut my door and drown myself in my dreams with him. Little did I know one siku they would happen.......

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