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Another poem

My soul is shattered
My moyo is destroyed
At the thought of not being loved
I wasn’t afraid of the darkness
But now I think I am…
When something feels like it’s gone
au just missing
It shatters my soul more
And the darkness takes my moyo
One day, the darkness will take my entire life…
And the thought of being cared about
Will be the only thing I have left.

 brooke9878 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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happyfreak said:
that sounded kinda emo ^^
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Who alisema it wasn't supposed to be emo?
brooke9878 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
LizaIsARunner said:
Wow.You have inspired me to write a new poem for thoughts and feelings such as the ones wewe have written of.I think i will call it Grace.And when i get done i will post especially for you.I have felt how wewe felt before but i made it through so dont give up and remeber to read it when i am through.
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AWW!!!! THANK wewe SO MUCH!
brooke9878 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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it will take me a while to write it and post because i have ALOT to do lately but i will see that i fit it in.:)
LizaIsARunner posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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:D
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Bluefire7777 said:
when i run with u my moyo skips a beat
when i jump alongside wewe i almost fall
when i sleep inayofuata to u my moyo flys along with my butterflies
when i curl my tail around yours my paws tingle in delight
when we lick cheeks i nvr want to go back reality
when wewe say u upendo me i upendo wewe more! zaidi than id upendo anyone ever again
May my heart, my memory, my love, my faith, my wisdom live in your moyo as yours does in mine
-Skyheart

umm yeah its short and not tht great but its recieted kwa Skyheart a lovestruck young she-cat to her upendo Shadowecho
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That's awesome...
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shadow-angel said:
wewe hit this one dead one. I've actually felt everything in your poem in real life. The way wewe describe it is like a personal experience.
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Sometime it feels like it is a personal experience
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