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Is this good for a tweve mwaka old? Its a song called " i miss you" written kwa a twelve mwaka old.

The pain is too deep to handle. your all i wish for when i blow that candle. even in my sleep you're all i think of. i'll always wonder if wewe do the same, while wewe look at the stars up above.every tear that falls from my eyes represents how much i miss you. i picked wewe out of all the guys. now will wewe do the same for me? I've tried so hard not to cry but it hurts so much i'd rather die. i think of wewe siku and night. if someone interferes i put up a fight. I miss you. Do wewe miss me too? is it possible to hurt so much? i miss wewe and your gentle touch. i wish that wewe were here with me; holading hands on a branch of a tree. i wish that wewe could pull me close. i think i took and overdose.... of you. i cant stand it. help me up. ill start a riot. be my love. i'll cry and cry till wewe reach me... and wait for wewe to kiss me.
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MattxAliceNine said:
for a 12 mwaka old really good but there holding is misspelled
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Vixie79 said:
That is really good. I imagine kwa the time she is 17 au so she'll be mind blowing with her own style of course. This uandishi isn't particularly my favorite, but it's still good uandishi wise.
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irena83 said:
Cute! ;)
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skillet_luvr said:
Very good for a twelve mwaka old. :)
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