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Is this a good poem and do wewe think zaidi could be added?

Please be honest

We had such fun
Trying anything to talk to eachother
We'd find away
But then it stopped
We hardly spoke au saw one another
We were a couple
And a really cute one to
Afraid of my reaction
wewe had a friend deal with the brake up
They wrote a note
And I thought it was a joke
One from a friend
A secret admirer
au your brother
Hearing from my sister
It was no joke
wewe alisema it was akward
And that wewe still upendo me
But I think I pushed wewe too far
What did I do
To make wewe push me away
It may sound strange but
I still want wewe in my life
Even if as a a friend
I'll b e here for wewe even if
The rest of the world leaves you
I won't
I'll stay
But if wewe want me back
Prove wewe won't hurt me again
Never again wewe will wewe hurt me
The same way twice
Cause boy
wewe fucked up









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wolfgirl985 said:
That was good I dont think wewe have to add anything else its perfect :)
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Thank you. Im glad wewe liked it. i thought is was bad. sad i know
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your welcome it was sad, but it is good work :)
wolfgirl985 posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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Glad wewe liked it
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