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Poetry Swali

Dose anyone have a tile sugestion and is this any good?

Have wewe ever been hurt kwa the one wewe love
Have wewe ever wanteed to change
Who wewe were, who wewe are, who wewe will be
Feeling as though your life is all laid out
Wondering why wewe have the life wewe have
wewe have it for a reason
Figure it out!

Have youo ever been hurt kwa the one one wewe love
Have wewe ever felt so betrayed
That wewe wanted to die
Don't give up
Things will change...for the best

Have yoou ever tired to change the world
With just a song
Try to change a moyo just kwa saying "hello"

Have wewe ever though wewe had true love
Then found it in a total stranger
Have wewe ever had so much hate
Then saved a soul that was dying alone

All of us have in one way au another
Live life your way
The futures always changing








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Poetry Majibu

BittenGirl said:
wooow!that is amazing!you should write zaidi poems because wewe are really good!
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irena83 said:
It's a nice poem, emotional, partly dark but filled with a hope.
Suggestions for the tittle could be:
- Eternal struggle
- Pieces of living hope
- Wondering mind
;)
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