rain and spirit

Rain and spirit was alone. Spirit walks up to Rain and says "Rain?"
"Yes" she answers.
"I am..." he clears his through,he was sweating all over.
"I am in upendo with..." he pauses.
"Who?" she asks curiously.
"Rose." he says softly.
Rain laughs and says "I am hearing things it sound like wewe alisema wewe where in upendo with rose. Now who are wewe in upendo with?" she said.
"Rose." he said.
Rain had tears in her eyes.
"Rain.I..." he alisema but before he could finish rain runs away without a word. She couldn't even look back. Spirit was still standing where he was. Finally he walks away silently.
He went to sleep.
End of chapter 7.
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"Rose before wewe meet spirit,can wewe tell me about yourself?" Rain asked.
"Yes,well first of all i have no herd.And i am single." Rose said. They both laughed.
"And i have been kwa myself for 5 years." She added.
They where on the other side of the kilima getting ready. A mountain lion hiding in the bushes,and it was getting ready to pounce.Then it leaped and landed on Rose. She was fighting fiercely. She bucked,kicked,reared,she even did what spirit did, reared and fell on her back.Finally,the mountain lion gave up and ran away. Rose was tired.
"Rose are wewe ok?" Rain asked.
"Yes just tired." Rose answered.
"Are wewe ready to meet the one so special in my life?"
"Yes." She said.
They walked up the kilima to meet spirit on the other side.
End of chapter 3.
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Rain was galloping and looking for hours. She ran into many obstacles,like fighting a mountain lion. She had to take a break from looking so she fell asleep. The inayofuata morning. Rain woke up and heard hoof beats. She looked around and sees nothing but she still hears it and it was getting louder. Finally she seen what it was. It was another mare! She was cantering gracefully. She stops in front of Rain. She looked like rain but different. She had Rains kanzu, koti but her main and tail was brown. "Is that wewe Rain?" the mare said.
"Rose?" Rain said.
The both neighed happily.
"Can wewe come with me and see someone special in my life?" Rain asked.
"Sure." Rose said. They galloped together all the way home,side kwa side. Finally they got home. "Now Rose i want wewe to get cleaned up for us,ok?"
"You sound just like mom." Rose said.
"And yes i will." rose walks away and gets ready to meet rains boyfriend.
End of chapter 2.
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