Okay, so I've been looking over my makala to see where I need to make improvements and to see any errors, and I've noticed that Autumn is becoming another Bloom. Lol, I didn't mean to create another Mary Sue, so I've decided that the story is still gonna be focusing on Autumn and Ike, but there's gonna be a lot zaidi of Flora and Helia in the story than there was before. Also, to make up for all of that, I'm gonna make both another sequel (like, a threequel xD okay okay I know it's lame) and I'm going to start a Flora and Helia story also, but I will include my characters like Autumn in it....
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