HELP!!!!!!

Oh my God!! That is Amazing! I'm Pretty sure I'm going to do that! I might not do Jack getting shoot (But still, I might) but that is... Wow. That's all I can say!! Thank wewe soooo Much!!! And if I do make it based on that; I'll be sure to thank you!

ur welcome honey u can always ask for my help i have a good imagination just like u i think that will help :D kwa THE WAY my name is Rita :D

it doesn't matter try to not explaine stuff like that...just write down the important things (u know what!!!if u write down this story it could make alot of episodes cause jack won't find them easily and when he find rose and the girls after about 10 days cal will tell him that he had thw most amazing ten days with rose but at the first time jack didn't care about what did cal mean kwa that but after he took rose and the kids back nyumbani he start to Doubt that in those 10 days rose could cheat on him with cal she was his fiance so she probebly have feelnigs for him so he started to avoid talking to rose and avoid her in everytime she tries to kiss him because he couldn't forgot what cal told him ''but the truth was that in these 10 days nothing happend between cal and rose but he told jack that just to make problems and to get revenge kwa seperating between them and finally jack believe rose because he trust her '' :D and relize the truth but it would be too late because rose took the girls and runaway but she left a note saying ''i can't live with someone who can't trust me '' but then he go find her and tell her that he's so sorry and he know that cal did this just to separate between them so she say cring that she loves him and she can't live without him (try to make this scene a little romantic like under rain) :)