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Uggh....my head. What the hell happened?

Garren slowly opens his eyes, but there wasn't much to see. The room was dim, and the only light coming into the room was from a small candle. The light didn't go far, and many spots in the room were still darkened to a great extent. It looked like a medieval dungeon. He tries to move, only to realize his wrists and ankles are chained to the wall.

"What's going on?" Garren demands, speaking to no one in particular. Has he failed a test, and is now dying for it? He's about to repeat himself, when he sees something lying on the ground not too far from him that makes his moyo nearly stop.

Kayleen.

Kayleen slowly comes to, and very slowly, gets up into a kneeling postion. She's blindfolded.

"What are wewe doing here?" Garren asks, repressing the uneasiness in his voice.

"Garren?" Kayleen asks, her voice full of surprise. "What's going on?"

"I'd like to know myself. How'd wewe get-" Garren's words are interrupted as something flys out from the dark and impales itself deep in Garren's stomach.

Taken kwa surprise kwa the knife, Garren yells out in pain, causing Kayleen to panic.

"Garren?! What's wrong?!" She asks frantically.

Before he can answer though, two figures step out from the shadows. Two men, kwa the looks of it, wearing long robes, covering their faces with hoods. Kayleen continues to talk.

"Hush, child," hoodie #1 commands. He turns to hoodie #2. "Restrain and gag her."

At once, hoodie #2 grabs her violently kwa the arm, and cuffs her to a nearby pipe. Then, he grabs a cloth from his sleeve pockets and shoves it in her mouth, silencing her.

Garren, in response to Kayleen's treatment, gives hoodie #2 his I'm-gonna-beat-you-so-hard-your-great-grandchildren-feel-it look, which caused him to quickly back up. Hoodie #1, however, gave a different response. He grabs a large wooden plank lying against the wall, and swings at Garren's face. The plank makes contact, and Garren's face is covered with cuts from the wood.

Just then, the voice speaks. "This is a test of endurance. Stay conscious for one saa as wewe are mercilessly beat during that time. Failure to do so will provoke the torturers to turn to your friend. Good luck."

And with that, hoodie #1 and 2 begin their hour-long, painful torture.

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It was, well, torture.

One after another, without even pausing, they dealt any type of damage they could to Garren. They kicked, punched, stabbed, and beaned anything in their reach, which was, needless to say, everything.

Several times, Garren came close to blacking out, but always managed to keep awake. To keep himself from focusing on the pain, he decided to count how many times they did something. So far:

14 stabs
5 hits with the plank
56 punches
41 kicks

Garren was bleeding from everywhere. There wasn't a place on his body that wasn't covered kwa blood au cut. Kayleen had managed to pull off the blindfold, and was sickened kwa what she saw. How he was still alive was anyone's guess. She nearly threw up everything inside of her.

But she kept track of the time. She had heard the Sentinels, the chanzo of the voices, speak, and knew Garren had to only live through 30 zaidi seconds.

Again, the torturers kicked him, a sickening crunch coming from the blow. Still, Garren remained conscious. He wasn't going to let them hurt Kayleen.

10 seconds.

With all of his might, torturer #1 swung the kisu across his chest, cutting the skin once more. Garren coughed up blood, the sticky liquid splattering on the walls. He was at his limit.

5 seconds.

Torturer #2 backed up a little, got a running start, and aimed a kick towards Garren's head.

3.......2........1!

The torturers froze, #2's kick only a millimeter from contact. With a horrifying yell, they burst into flames, and disintegrated. Garren, too tired to even blink, finally passed out, but not before hearing the Sentinels again.

"Pass. There is one final test wewe must pass. Not a single person out of the 10 awali has passed this. Will wewe choose correctly?"
posted by Problematic129
~Genre:realistic fiction, humor~
Chapter 19    
        I didn’t even need revenge
    I couldn’t help but feel giddy as I brushed my teeth and changed into zaidi prettier looking clothes than my bedtime pajama’s of Hello Kitty. The house was quiet and I was a little bit disappointed, but at least I’d get some time to myself, and I needed that very much. I was also glad I didn’t have to go to school either, not because I’d be embarrassed au anything, but because the dakika I saw Meredith I’d go all Ninja...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, mystery and ndoto :)~
Chapter 31
        The worst form of betrayal
    I think I woke up, it still painfully hurt to breathe. But I was still in the woods, au at least inayofuata to it. Witnessing the moment.
    The moment my sister died.
    I hadn’t been able to hold the tears ever since I appeared here, leaving my sister behind, I still couldn’t believe it. I missed my one chance, I remember what she had said, though I didn’t understand most of it, but I do now.
    Now...
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His eyes fluttered open, and his muscles automatically tensed. For a sekunde he was back in Afghanistan, alone, without his comrades, falling asleep unguarded behind enemy lines. He noticed how his arms were, like they had been holding someone, someone who is no longer there. Gemma.... The thought entered his head like a speeding bullet. The fact that she wasn't there made him think that she had never been, that he wasn't really home, and that he imagined the whole thing. But one look around the room, his eyes adjusting to the moonlight, he could tell he was in the club house. He really was...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
(Fantasy)

I woke with a pounding head and a throbbing shoulder. A bright light was shining in my eyes so I couldn't see anything. “What happened?”
“You were shot.”
“Shot?” I couldn't see anyone. Suddenly, the light snapped off and the room was thrown into shadows. Rubbing my eyes, I saw that I was in some sort of operating room. “Yes, shot. Brett and Dalla brought wewe here, alisema I was the only one that could save wewe so I did the only thing I could.” I was drawing a blank, what was it Dylan could do? An image came into my mind. It was a stack of files, one flashing after another....
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I shook in fear as I felt him hovering over me it scard me out of skin I could already feel his hits coming. As leaned over me I heard angry load foot steps stomping their way towards us. My eyes were closed tight but snapped open when I heard his out burst.

"Dad! Stop!" He'd alisema firmly.

"This little witch" he stooped down so his mouth was level with my ear. "Was snooping on on our conversation I think I'll..." he chuckled "finish her off in one sweep."

I could feel the cold metal of the kisu against my skin against my vocal cord. God, I wasn't even breathing I didn't didn't bother to think....
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posted by 1999jacko
4 weeks ago
Ron sat miserably in his apartment watching the new for something interesting, when a beeping noise butted into his little siku dream. He ran over to the meza, jedwali where the phone was placed, he picked it up instantly hitting answer." Hello commander, is my dad back yet?" he alisema hopefully. The commander cleared his throat before answering," Ron I'm really sorry but we just received a message and its not good news... I'm afraid your father is dead and we need wewe to relocate away from Washington today. So pack your stuff and get ready for your escort to take wewe to your new home." All...
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posted by flabaloobalah
Genre: Realistic Fiction, Mystery, Drama/Romance

Claire and I unpacked our belongings and put them in our own dressers and waited for lunch to be ready.
After a little while, Leila hollered for us. As Claire and I reached the doorway, we observed the stampede as the six of them pounded down the stairs.
When my little sister and I reached the kitchen, Jeb greeted us and handed us a bowl and silverware. At the head of the table, Leila stood with a ladle and served us plenty of food. I sat inayofuata to Makayla, and Claire sat across from me, inayofuata to Joey.
The meal was spent in almost total silence, save...
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posted by flabaloobalah
Once we were all done swarming each other, Leila helped Claire and I through the little herd of cousins, upstairs, to our room. Where usually wewe would take a left and be looking at their bedroom doors and a bathroom, we took a right at the juu of the stairs so we were faced with a room i hadn't seen before. The interior was a pale, almost skin like beige that was cracked and peeling in some spots, especially where our beds were pushed against the wall. Beside each kitanda was a small meza, jedwali with drawers and a lamp. In between us was a large window, creating a distorted patch of light on the scratched...
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Hi, my name is Jonas. I'm thirteen. I'm...well, not what wewe would consider normal.
I have twenty pairs of X-His from the Converse store inayofuata door, all pink. Okay, okay, see? I'm not normal. And that's not the end of it.
I have thirty T-shirts that say kondoo Wanyonya damu Rock on them. Yeah, I upendo the horror movie "Sheep Vampires." It's filled with kondoo that get tortured and wake up at midnight only to turn into kondoo Wanyonya damu that suck the blood out of their shepherds. It's rated R, but my parents never notice. I bet they don't even know there's a rating system. Lucky for me.
So, this morning, I woke up, when my glass of koki left from an mwaka zamani shimmered. A misty face appeared.
"Jonas...come here to me...or wewe shall suffer the consequences...like your precious ancestors," the woman screamed.
Was it my imagination...or did I get sucked into my glass of Coke?
 Jonas's glass of koki
Jonas's glass of Coke
posted by 1999jacko
because I like to have lots of stuff on at once heres a prologue of one of my new stories

The prologue
I ran mbele into nothing things being erased in the path of the other kids behind me, the world is crumbling before my eyes. MY Marafiki that have already died bodies appear on the nothingness in front of me I shove them away from my eyes and jump high over them.Too high I feel the pain shoot up and down my leg searing a hole of pain in my head and then that's all I feel, think and hear..Pain and that's when I know they are right behind me haunting me for all the bad things I've done I just...
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posted by flabaloobalah
Genre: Realistic Fiction, Drama/Romance

There was this one summer I spent with my cousins, back when I was fourteen. My little sister, Claire, went to their house with me.
That first day, when we jumped out of the van, we were stunned. The house was this glorious, leaning, peeling, giant nyumbani on a winding dirt road. The paint was a soft baby blue, something that reminded me of rocking farasi and winter nights. Our Auntie Leila stepped onto the rickety porch and waved and smiled. Cautiously, Claire and I waved and smiled back. Uncle Jeb came to give us hugs. We returned the hugs without complaining....
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posted by Problematic129
Chapter 8
    That was not subtle
    “My reports so good! I’ll get at least a D!” I squealed as Beth and I walked towards the school.
    Beth frowned. “A D? Why not aim for B?”
    “Honey the last time I got a B, was when one stung me.” I informed her.
    “You can at least try, bubs, it can’t be that hard.” Beth reasoned as reached the school parking lot.
    “Impossible wewe know I- hujambo look it’s Grey!” I yell when I see him on his motor cycle. “Hi...
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posted by rory2011
David rode the man's car , the man drove to the police station ,when they arrived ,the man told David to go to ask for officer 12's office in the sekunde floor
David ran towards the office as fast as he can ,when he arrived ,the officer looked at him asking " are wewe Mr. David miller ? " yes ,I'm sir " David alisema
" sit down please " the officer alisema
David sat on that black kitanda near the officer disk
" sir ,could wewe please tell me what's going on with my son Kevin " David alisema
" today there was a moto in the sugar factory where your son work ,your son is a very good strong guy ,he helped all...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the maoni and mashabiki :) Please don't copy and please read and review. Note, my stories might be ilitumwa later than usual, so your forewarned. Thanks for tuning in!!!*
Chapter 6
    Sage, the really strange red head
    I feel my blood boil when I see my gals outside drooling over football players outside with no shirts on. I suppress the urge to roll my eyes, Sage’s practically fanning herself, Ali has no shame in giving them the stalker look, and Beth is too pre-occupied on her phone.
    I stomp towards them. “How...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the maoni and mashabiki :) Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 5
    Okay I’ll- wait what
    We danced liked the crazy people we were, close yet strange, sweet yet insane, cool yet tender, happy yet…something else. I hoped that Cal was noticing, I haven’t seen him since he and Grey left the kitchen.
    Sage and Beth came back after there bathroom break and joined us, and soon we were the four Marafiki of awesome dancing together.
    When we took break, Grey and (girly squeal please) Cal...
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posted by hgfan5602
This is a crazy song I wrote called Rotten Tomatoes, and I hired the Black-Eyed Peas to sing it. WARNING: This song was meant for entertainment, and should in no way be connected to real people, places, au things. It is not the author's responsibility for the medical bills if wewe die from laughter, au possibly, thinking I'm weirdness.
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Converse is awesome
The Westing Game is gruesome
My Marafiki all ran
When they heard me say that

People say I'm weird
But look over there then,
That teen has a
White, fluffy beard

chokoleti coins rock
They're the celebs of the block
They're creamy and sweet
Cuz they always go to swim meets

I upendo Harry Potter
au was it apple Rotter?
It was everyone's favorite,
But it soon molded.

Now, I'm almost five
And I live in a hive,
Like my other amigos
Who live in anthills!
posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for the maoni and mashabiki :) I just noticed I put Ch.3 for Ch.2, my mistake I can be so dumb sometimes. But! I fixed it. Please read, review, and don't copy*
Chapter 3
    We all upendo the great Beth
    Back to the story, Ali was right, the new substitute was HOT, kwa the time class was over the girl sitting inayofuata to my had drowned in a pool of her own drool. We make our way to the cafeteria and listen to one of many of Beth’s crazy stories, it’s basically this lame story that she recreates improvising as she goes along.
    That’s...
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posted by rory2011
two years later ...
kevin took his father's part of making money for this family and David stood in the house to take care of the others ,and to brought chakula and other needing for his family

Jack hated school so much ,but David refused to let him without education ,jack taking drugs and stealing money from other people ,he's not a good guy like Kevin and Paul ,so all David caring is around jack ,David couldn't understand that his son is a bad guy , cause jack look like his father so much with his black hair and his skin , his face shape ,he took his green eyes from his mother but he look nothing...
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posted by Problematic129
*Chapter 2 up! Thanks for all the maoni and mashabiki :) Please read, review and don't copy*
Chapter 2
    Evil takes true form
    So right now I’m talking to my best friend, Beth, as were walking to our class. As we were talking Grey Callister interrupted us.
    With his flawless gold-blonde hair and warm brown eyes, it isn’t a surprise he’s wanted kwa most girls. I hate to admit when I first laid eyes on him, my legs turned jello and I didn’t want to look away, but later on I realized he was a conceited jerk.
    So...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the maoni and mashabiki :) Please read and review and please don't copy!*
Chapter 14
        A deadly experience
    The girl in the bag was whimpering now, and Dorothy and bubble gum hair started to look worried.
    “Your sure she won’t suffocate.” My sister asked, doubtfully looking at the tie in the bag.
    “Of course, I tied my brother in that bag so he would shut up, he’s still alive.” The leader told her, with a roll of her eyes, and a flip of her hair.
    “And...
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