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yea i made the title to be something a little less opinionated, and zaidi open to other peoples opinon. so if wewe agree, say why, and if not, give some examples of her good side! all i did was her bad side cuz thats my opinion. :)

These are from the first chapter of Eclipse.

pg. 14-Charlie to Bella"You're hurting Jake's feelings, avoiding him like this."
response: HOLY CRAP listen to your father Bella!!! wewe have got a serious problem, and wewe are hurting poor Jake in the process! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?!?!?!?!? GET..A..LIFE, and leave Jacob out of it

pg. 17-in Bella's mind"I wrenched the door out of my way--ridiculously eager--and there he was, my personal miracle."
response: ok Bella, wewe may think he is your own "personal miracle" and all, but hey, GUESS WHAT?? he loves wewe UNCONDITIONALLY. and what do wewe do? OBSESS NON-STOP, NOT LETTING HIM HAvE HIS OWN LIFE, and HANGING ON HIS EVERY WORD! give him some breathin space girl!

pg. 18-Bella's mind "It made me sad that he had to try so hard. I comforted myself with the knowledge that I wouldn't be causing him pain much longer.
response: so the part i underlined, wouldn't be causing him pain much longer???? Bella, honey, wewe ARE ALWAYS GOING TO CAUSE HIM PAIN. NO MATTER WHAT wewe DO, HE WILL BE IN PAIN. so dont lead yourself in the wrong direction, thinking that wewe are so perfect

Yea haha so ok now im done with the very short pointless ranting. PLEASE COMMENT!
posted by joe-edwardfan
black moon mashabiki im so sorry im not uandishi very often hope your not mad!
i cant write every siku cause of my nyumbani works :(
but dont give up on me i promise to write soon!!
and thanks 4 your support!
and i want to know if u want me to continue au start new ones i have plenty of new ideas!!
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posted by twilight-7
Regarding Kayla.....












Guys, I regret to inform wewe that my internet had committed technical suicide. I have stolen someone's laptop to write this and I hate to tell wewe that until someone revives my internet no further Kayla chapters can be posted.
This is an unforseen event and I will kick as many asses as I can to get the internet working agan.
I will continue to write the chapters and try to steal as many laptops and PCs as possible to post them.

I hate that I leave my story with wewe at such a critical point. Unfortunately this post is just a spur of the moment thing and I don't have my memory stick with me au I'd shove a chapter on at the end of this message.

Very sorry my peeps. wewe can verbally abuse me, my internet au BT broadband au all three!





Emmii-Luu
Here's the inayofuata chapter of Amore! ^_^

I was glad that no one followed me when I was on my way out. I need to find out that girl is. But then I heard footsteps behind me and a finger tapped my sholder. I jumped.
"Angela?" I asked, a little startled.
"I'm going to help wewe with this, even though I don't know what wewe saw." she said.
I opened my mouth to argue, but she cut me off.
"I'm not asking for wewe to tell me what wewe saw, Bella. I'm just going to help wewe as a friend." she said, while smiling at me.
I sighed.
"Fine, Angela. wewe can help me, but I don't know exactly what I'm going to do now....
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Chapter 2 Home

The doctor was right, today Is tomorrow and I'm out! What am I going to do now? I tell wewe what I'm going to do nothing.
I closed the front door behind me with my bag full of clothes on my back.
“If wewe need anything honey just ask” worry was in my mums eyes... I was going to reply don't worry then I suddenly thought why she being so stupid for I'm fine.
“I'm fine OK jee back off will ya” anger burst through me. She your mum for crying out loud what's wrong with me. I started walking up the stairs I looked at mum she looked hurt... she needs to get over herself I thought....
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posted by callejahLUVSed
okay.. i like this chapter, so i hope wewe do!!!

CHAPTER SEVEN- School

When we arrived at Forks High School, of course everyone was staring at us. Not to be rude, but Wanyonya damu are just naturally zaidi attractive than humans. So with us, we brought a lot of attention. And, being the Cullens, we all loved the attention, so we linked arms, with me in the middle, and walked confidently to the office.
Emmett, what have people been thinking? I wondered.
Well, what do wewe think? Three, new, attractive strangers at the most boring school ever? he replied. I nodded as Jasper gave me a curious look. I glanced...
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posted by surfergal
When I woke up it was so early that the sun hadn't come up yet. I tried to go back to sleep but I couldn't so I walked downstairs to find the tv on and Emmet and Rosalie in front of it and edward, bella and renesme at their house and Carlisle and Esme in the jikoni and then Alice and Jasper were on the upendo kiti, kiti cha watching tv as well. I went and sat on the floor until Emmet alisema what are wewe doing up at 3am? I alisema its 3am?! I cant go back to sleep I said. carlisle came in and ask if he could x-ray my knee and I alisema sure I don't have anything to do right now. I went to put on shorts, then I...
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posted by VAMPirella1997
End of part 3:
I walked slowly, even kwa human standards, as we rounded the corner to Charlie's street. I walked to the door, took a deep breath. "go on, Bella," Alice encouraged,"Get it over with." I knocked the door...

Part 4:
We waited a whole minute. The suspence was killing me. I just got zaidi and zaidi nervous, instead of being zaidi prepared from the time to think of what i was going to say. Finally, Charlie opened the door. A wide grin spread across his face when he saw me. It grew even larger when he saw Alice standing there, instead of Edward, who he had expected. "Alice! Bella!"
Alice...
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posted by Bella11700
When i walked in they were watching football on the couch. Everyone besides Susan. She was holding a empty bia bottle. "you know we wouldn't play without you." She alisema with a smile.
She turned to the boys and said"Who wants to play?"
They all alisema me like little children.I couldn't beleive that I even joined.
We sat in a mduara, duara and susan went first it landed on Jerry. Great. He leaned in and kissed her.Susan handed the bottle to jerry. It landed on alex.I almost cracked up.
They were always restleing in college. They would call each other names and stuff like that. They got along but this was...
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posted by _madz_
this is just something i wrote the other siku when i was bored. tell me what wewe think. whoses POV do wewe think it is?



Fate had aliyopewa me the best months of my life, zaidi than I had any right to expect.
So was it fair for me to wish for more? To ask for zaidi than I had so generously been given?
Was it wrong for me to be sad? To feel like life had come to a standstill and nothing mattered anymore? I knew it wasn’t fair, wasn’t right, for me to be feeling like this, but I couldn’t do anything. Couldn’t songesha on, couldn’t live through the long days. It seemed that time moved slower, so much...
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posted by genyva
ok this s a good one lol i hope wewe like it



3. Just A Good Distraction

Why am I still thinking about him? He left me he chose them not us. I don’t know how mom could just accept what he is doing to me. I have been away from him like this before I really want to feel his hot skin on mine. He use to call every night, but he hasn’t called all week and last week he called me twice. So much him for loving me.
    I hadn’t slept well in a few days I looked up and it was 4:32 am may I can go talk to mom shell know what to do to help me get over this.
    “Mom...
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posted by Edward_lover101
Here is the inayofuata chapter!
I know it's a little short, but it's good.
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I woke up in the middle of the night, screaming in pain again. This time Carlisle put me in one of thouse hospitle beds. This kitanda was huge. He stuck an IV in my hand. I guess he called Charlie, because he was down here is a matter of 15 minutes. Edward never left my side. Charlie walked into the room.
"Bella? Honey are wewe ok?"
"Charlie, Bella can't talk. She has been screaming all night long, au so I've herd."
"Oh! Bella. Is there anything I can do for you?"
I shook my head no....
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posted by CharmedVamp101
I waited, he was staring off into space, with his mouth hanging wide open. Maybe I should repeat myself.
"Edward? Be honest, if wewe don't want to marry me, then tell me, but I would really appreciate it if wewe alisema something."
I watched as his eyes slowly refocused and he closed his mouth. His expression was hard, determined.
"I'm not saying no, but are wewe sure wewe want to?"
I thought about it as quickly as possible. I was testing him. If he agreed to marry me, then he did upendo me, if this was all a joke to him, then he would say no. It was easy to decide.
"I definitely want to. I mean, I love...
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posted by CharmedVamp101
We walked down the stairs. He was holding my hand. His skin was ice cold, no, way colder than that, but it felt nice. His hand was perfectly smooth, and hard, like he was a walking statue, only zaidi perfect.
He smiled at me.
"Would wewe like to experience my kind of transportation?"
"Meaning,"I was confused, we already rode in his car.
"I like to run, so does the rest of my family."
His family? Oh. It was a vampire thing, maybe we were running somewhere.
"Like kuvuka, msalaba Country au Track and Field?"
"Something like that,"he alisema with a crooked grin. I couldn't keep my eyes off of him.
"Uh, that would be...
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posted by meeek
"Just in case, man...."

The siku was long and Emmett was bored. Nothing seemed to be interesting for him...not even a vampiric game of football seemed amazing. As he walked through the Cullen house, he decided to log into his computer. As he searced through the internet, a swali made him stop: "Who could win? Superman au Emmett Cullen?"

This was weird.

Emmett knew who Superman was, but never made much of an attempt to read them after he had barracaded and held secret explosives and traps through-out the entire Cullen household after watching the Saw Series...and because the rest of the Cullen...
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posted by CharmedVamp101
I remember dreaming about an Angel saving me, I remember how Max hurt me and I wanted to bite his head off. Max was going to pay for that. I slowly opened my eyes feeling the warmth of a light on my lids. As soon as I opened them I saw my angel. The one who saved me.
"Where am I?"
"General Hospital,"he asked in a velvet voice.
"Who are you,"I needed to know the name of my savior.
"My name isn't important, but I'll tell wewe that my first name is Edward."
Wow, what an old fashioned name, I loved it.
"Why am I here?"
"I found wewe nearly beaten to death in an alley. I brought wewe here. Your right...
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posted by twilight0girl
"bella!!!"what was she doing? "bella!!!!" "god! alice i'm coming!" why must she take so long when i have to find something for jazz? "were not going to make it!hurry!" sigh. "calm down honey," esme said. "you are going to make it." esme.so sweet and kind. "your right.what am i worrying about.we'll get there.thanks." i said. "your wellcome honey." esme hugged me smilled then walked into the kithcen to jiunge carlisele. "o.k alice," bella sighed. " i'm ready." "yay!" i sqweled. " let's go!" yes!now we can go to the mall! "were taking my yellow porshe." "o.k alice." she alisema "let's get something...
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posted by dinosteph
hujambo guys,

I really enjoy kusoma everyone's stories on here, there are some really good writers.

I was wondering if anyone would be interested in uandishi a multi-author story.
We would have to agree on certain aspects of the story line, rating, all human vs vampire/humans, if the Mbwa mwitu loups will be involved, which characters we plan on covering, and so forth, it's going to have to take some really dedicated people.

We will have to decide if we are going to keep it from one persons pov, IE: Bella, au each person has their own character, and takes on the inayofuata chapter from a different POV.

Serious inquiries only!

Thanks.
Stephanie
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