I was fourteen when it happend.My parents and I just finished dinner. I was sent upstairs to finish my homework. I could hear my mom laughing as my dad told a joke that prombly wasn't even funny.I put my ipod on for I could focas on my homework. Twenty mintues later I took the earphones off for I could go to the restroom. Before I even got the bed, I heard glass shatter. I ran downstairs to see what had happened. I saw a larger man in the doorway. His eyes were a red color. I never seen eyes like that before. I hid in pantry trying to see what they were doing here. "Luke come in. Do wewe smell that." The big man yelled. The other man I was guessing that was Luke came in. " They smell good. Which one do wewe want Lucas" he asked. They were talking like my parents were some kind of food. I looked aroung for my parents, but couldn's see. " I will take the man. wewe can have the woman" Lucas alisema crouchind down like he was about to attack something.Then I relized he was going to kill my mom and dad. I held in the scream. After they finished they stood up and came closer to the pantry. I relized they were beatiful. Their skin was pale.The only thing that was scary was their eye's.I heard a cop's siren coming this way. The two men ran outside through the back. They ran faster then I could imagined." Call the moto department. The house is on fire" I heard the Policeman yell. I didn't even notice the smoke. I got out of the Pantry and ran to the door. Then everything went black. I woke up in the hospital. All I could see was my Aunt Jade standing in the corner talking to a lady I did'nt know. The doctor came in"Well Mrs. swan wewe are very lucky.You will be released tommorrow. And I'm very sorry for your loss" He said. I didn't talk to my aunt the inayofuata week. She made me attend therepy. The therpist told my aunt that there was this private school that deals with situion i was in. Tommorrow was my flight. I was headed off to a new school for crazy people.
"It shocked me.I was not sure if she meant to attack.That's the only interpretation of her behavior that my past had to offer.But she was smiling.And the emotions that were emanating from her were like nothing I'd ever felt before.
"'You've kept me waiting a long time,'she said."
I didn't realize Alice had come to stand behind me again.
"And wewe ducked your head like a good Southern gentleman,and said,'I'm sorry ma'am.'"Alice laughed at the memory.
Jasper smiled down at her."You held out your hand,and I took it without stopping to make sense of what I was doing.For the first time in almost a century,I felt hope."
Jasper took Alice's hand as he spoke.
Alice grinned."I was just relieved.I thought wewe were never going to onyesha up."
it is just MY opinion...
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie wewe know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... au with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e kinanda for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !
i think it was very well done thinking of it just as a movie wewe know it wont ever be exactly like the book ... au with such many detailz
things i loved:
*the humor they use (for example bella: if things end bad like i would become the meal) haha
*alice ! the character is very well portrayed
*the end ( victoria watching)
*the baseball game!
*men cast haha =P
*stephenie meyer appearing wooow!
things that dissapointed me:
* the clearing ! i dont liked the sparkling effect ...
*it was really fast everything
*alice's story was missing ...
things that were wrong: (i didnt noticed until the third time i saw it)
*billy was driving !
*when edward is playing th e kinanda for bella he didnt sparkle
*victoria appears in the prom in the crowd (edward would read her thoughtz)
but i like it anyway ! it ir TWILIGHT !