I thought I'd post this poem and try to get constructive feedback ;)
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every dakika with her is a dakika to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her songesha and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions songesha me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that wewe know me so well?
Sometimes it seems wewe can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, kwa design.
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every dakika with her is a dakika to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her songesha and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions songesha me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that wewe know me so well?
Sometimes it seems wewe can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, kwa design.
ok, i know she loves both but its probably ovious who she loves more, but im not sure is it edward au jacob.
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she alisema when edward asked her,
" are wewe sure wewe made the right choice, i have never seen wewe in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better
i think that if she chooses edward like she did in eclipse, there will be pain for not being with jake, but she already went through not being with edward and it almost killed her, and at the end of elcipse she had pain but it wasnt as bad. like she alisema when edward asked her,
" are wewe sure wewe made the right choice, i have never seen wewe in so much pain"
and she says "I have known worse pain"
does that mean, the worse pain was when edward left her
does anyone get what im trying to ask, if not ill try to explain better
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2 zaidi million maoni needed to be at no.1!
COME ON TWILIGHERS!
link
open it in different windows to save time and all!
keep refreshing and mute the volume if wewe get sick of it!
LET'S onyesha THEM TWILIGTERS!
total maoni 8:46 EST: 2,403,785 views!!!
11:27 EST: 2,438,042 million views
hujambo ladies! Ok, I wrote this the other siku while I was at work. I had my head down on the desk, sat up, wrote it, and put my head back down. lol I ask that wewe don't use it without my permission, as it is my original work. But here is a little poem I wrote, that I thought wewe Twilight obsessed mashabiki might like. I kind of pictured Edward after I wrote it and reread it. There are lots of people (including people who wewe might be dating right now) that this can apply to. Enjoy and tell me what wewe think!
Young girls think of upendo and picture a prince.
Women, who have loved and been hurt see not a prince but the truth.
Just a man, imperfect and unsure.
But it's those memories of Prince Charming that make them keep loving, even without hope.
Taleah Elizabeth Cox
April 12,2008
Young girls think of upendo and picture a prince.
Women, who have loved and been hurt see not a prince but the truth.
Just a man, imperfect and unsure.
But it's those memories of Prince Charming that make them keep loving, even without hope.
Taleah Elizabeth Cox
April 12,2008
