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“Ella you’re amazing.” Renesmee shouted as me and my horse Faith crossed our final jump and stopped in front of her. I dismounted patting Faith’s nose and Nessie hugged her. “You’re going to thrash everyone in your competition in two weeks time.” “Thanks.” I murmured thinking about the trip up I made on the first jump. If I want to qualify I can’t be doing that anymore. Nessie’s phone started imba her favourite song startling Flo.
“Whoa easy.” I alisema taking firmer hold of the reins and sliding my hand down her silky neck.
“Sorry Ella.” Nessie apologised flipping open her phone, looking at the caller ID before holding it to her ear. “Yes dad?”
I heard voices and Renesmee kept nodding her head. Finally she smiled, almost laughing to herself. “Ok I’ll be nyumbani in twenty minutes.......ok ten.” She alisema hanging up. I raised an eyebrow at her removing my boots to let my feet have some fresh air.
“Do wewe want to come over tomorrow? Mum and Dad feel guilty because I’m always here and you’re rarely ever at ours.” Rarely was the wrong word to use. I had never been to Renesmee’s. She always made excuses about it but as long as we were together I didn’t mind. We have been best Marafiki for five years now. Everyone rejected Renesmee because they thought she was weird and prettier than them. I didn’t mind that. So she had stuck with me.
“Yeah sure, but I have to come back and feed Faith first I can’t let her starve.” Nessie laughed linking her arm through mine. “Do wewe have to leave now?” I asked as we started to make our way back to my house. I untacked and locked Faith in her paddock, before turning back to Renesmee, waiting for her answer. “Yeah. But you’ll come round after school tomorrow right?” I nodded and a smile spread across her abnormally pale face. Of course I was use to her paleness kwa now, I wondered if the rest of her family were like it. “Ok so I’ll see wewe tomorrow.” She alisema hugging me and turning away. “Bye.” I called after her.
“Oh yeah Ella?” Nessie asked.
“Yeah?”
“What do wewe want for your birthday inayofuata week?” I thought for a second.
“I don’t really know.” Even though she was quite far away from me I could see her rolling her eyes at me.
“WELL THAT’S NOT VERY HELPFUL.” She called laughing.
I sighed turning back around. Renesmee always went overboard on my birthday presents, especially last mwaka for my fifteenth. She had bought us both these really expensive tamasha tickets followed kwa hiring out the cinema on the release tarehe of our favourite movie. I can’t even begin to imagine how much it must of cost.
I trudged home, slipping into my dressing kanzu, gown and slippers and began to cook tea.
“Hey sweet heart.” Mum called out peeking her head around the door.
“Hey Mum.” I called back.
“What are wewe cooking?” She asked. I thought for a second.
“Is chicken ok?”
“That would be great.” Sometimes I felt like I bought up myself, and bought up my parents too.
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“Ella you’re amazing.” Renesmee shouted as me and my horse Faith crossed our final jump and stopped in front of her. I dismounted patting Faith’s nose and Nessie hugged her. “You’re going to thrash everyone in your competition in two weeks time.” “Thanks.” I murmured thinking about the trip up I made on the first jump. If I want to qualify I can’t be doing that anymore. Nessie’s phone started imba her favourite song startling Flo.
“Whoa easy.” I alisema taking firmer hold of the reins and sliding my hand down her silky neck.
“Sorry Ella.” Nessie apologised flipping open her phone, looking at the caller ID before holding it to her ear. “Yes dad?”
I heard voices and Renesmee kept nodding her head. Finally she smiled, almost laughing to herself. “Ok I’ll be nyumbani in twenty minutes.......ok ten.” She alisema hanging up. I raised an eyebrow at her removing my boots to let my feet have some fresh air.
“Do wewe want to come over tomorrow? Mum and Dad feel guilty because I’m always here and you’re rarely ever at ours.” Rarely was the wrong word to use. I had never been to Renesmee’s. She always made excuses about it but as long as we were together I didn’t mind. We have been best Marafiki for five years now. Everyone rejected Renesmee because they thought she was weird and prettier than them. I didn’t mind that. So she had stuck with me.
“Yeah sure, but I have to come back and feed Faith first I can’t let her starve.” Nessie laughed linking her arm through mine. “Do wewe have to leave now?” I asked as we started to make our way back to my house. I untacked and locked Faith in her paddock, before turning back to Renesmee, waiting for her answer. “Yeah. But you’ll come round after school tomorrow right?” I nodded and a smile spread across her abnormally pale face. Of course I was use to her paleness kwa now, I wondered if the rest of her family were like it. “Ok so I’ll see wewe tomorrow.” She alisema hugging me and turning away. “Bye.” I called after her.
“Oh yeah Ella?” Nessie asked.
“Yeah?”
“What do wewe want for your birthday inayofuata week?” I thought for a second.
“I don’t really know.” Even though she was quite far away from me I could see her rolling her eyes at me.
“WELL THAT’S NOT VERY HELPFUL.” She called laughing.
I sighed turning back around. Renesmee always went overboard on my birthday presents, especially last mwaka for my fifteenth. She had bought us both these really expensive tamasha tickets followed kwa hiring out the cinema on the release tarehe of our favourite movie. I can’t even begin to imagine how much it must of cost.
I trudged home, slipping into my dressing kanzu, gown and slippers and began to cook tea.
“Hey sweet heart.” Mum called out peeking her head around the door.
“Hey Mum.” I called back.
“What are wewe cooking?” She asked. I thought for a second.
“Is chicken ok?”
“That would be great.” Sometimes I felt like I bought up myself, and bought up my parents too.
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ok so i am going to come out with this as i think it i upendo twilight it is brill but i hate edward i think he is to controling over bella and he doesn't want her to go and see jacob because jacob is way better looking than he is and he is afrad that he will get better and another thing is why do people think that he is good looking i think he is really ugly i can't see why people really fancy him i luv taylor launter and i am 100% a team jacob because at the end of the siku jacob is just way better than edward and that is the end of it!