I thought I'd post this poem and try to get constructive feedback ;)
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every dakika with her is a dakika to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her songesha and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions songesha me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that wewe know me so well?
Sometimes it seems wewe can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, kwa design.
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To Know Her
She is who I see and all that I see.
Every dakika with her is a dakika to know her.
What does she like? What makes her angry?
What makes her laugh like no other?
I watch her songesha and learn her moods.
Her needs, I read like a book unbound.
I study her eyes as they speak to me
When words aren’t enough, when they can’t be found.
Her joy is mine, her emotions songesha me.
To be what she wants is no arduous task.
To protect her and know her – that’s what I do
So I find it amusing when she would ask:
“How is it that wewe know me so well?
Sometimes it seems wewe can read my mind.”
“Nah,” I smile. “I just pay attention.”
I become what she wants and needs, kwa design.
!!!!!!ATTENTION ALL TWILIGHT FANS!!!!!!
If wewe are a MAJOR au just a shabiki of Stephanie Meyer's most maarufu Twilight Saga then pay attention.
On youtube.com there is a video of Stephanie being interviewed.She is going to publish Midnight Sun.If wewe have read her draft of Midnight Sun au even if wewe haven't then wewe can right how wewe think it should be.She wants to see what her mashabiki (aka- Us)think.And she also beleives that if we have a story in us then we should write it out and onyesha evryone what we're capable of.
-twilight_unite-(MAJOR shabiki OF TWILIGHT SAGA)
If wewe are a MAJOR au just a shabiki of Stephanie Meyer's most maarufu Twilight Saga then pay attention.
On youtube.com there is a video of Stephanie being interviewed.She is going to publish Midnight Sun.If wewe have read her draft of Midnight Sun au even if wewe haven't then wewe can right how wewe think it should be.She wants to see what her mashabiki (aka- Us)think.And she also beleives that if we have a story in us then we should write it out and onyesha evryone what we're capable of.
-twilight_unite-(MAJOR shabiki OF TWILIGHT SAGA)