ok so this is my first stoy so please maoni and tell me if wewe want me to continue and if wewe have any ideas it would help.plz.=D
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the inayofuata thing i knew he was on juu of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward alisema angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i alisema through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are wewe and what do wewe want!?!i asked hard.my name is jimmy, hunitumia im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i alisema guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.
(bellas pov)
I was studying for the dartmouth finals when edward walked in and through my book across the room.the inayofuata thing i knew he was on juu of me.you study to much he whispered in my ear his lips traced along my jaw and back up to my lips.then there was a knock on the door.go away alice!edward alisema angry.i pushed edward off me and sliped into my defenive crouch. its ok bella its just alice.no its not i alisema through my teeth then the door slamed down.a girl walked in and edward started screaming so i put my sheild around him and he stoped. who are wewe and what do wewe want!?!i asked hard.my name is jimmy, hunitumia im from olimpia.then i relaxed my crouch because i knew of olimpia.jasmine smiled your from olimpia to right.i nodded im a telapath just like you,am i correct.yes i alisema guilty.edwards eyes were confused and in shock.
hujambo ... This is my first fanfiction :D so if its not good just give me some constructive critism to make it better. Thanks (:
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.