Hi! I'm Cedarstorm, au Cedar. I'm an artist and writer, and this makala is for people who are just beginning writing- and have no idea what to do. Let's talk cats.

First, the Cats in the Warriors series aren't spelled like "FireStar", "Fire Star", au "Fire star". They're spelt as though it is one word; "Firestar". Many people don't study the vitabu enough to write the names like that.
Second, the cat's don't just walk. They limp, stumble, pad, dash, and bound through the forest, tails streamed out behind them.
"Cedarstorm dashed through the dense wood, dodging branches and leaping over rocks."

Now, uandishi grammar. I see a lot of stories that don't indent when a new character speaks. For example;
"Don't leave," Cedarstorm begged, taking a few steps toward the light gray tabby.
"You know I have to," Cloudstripe meowed back, his voice cracking with greif.
So, please use this! If wewe think this makala is junk, just ask anyone who writes stories. They'll tell wewe the same.

Thanks for reading!
~Cedar♥