I need some serious help!

Ok so I am going to try and answer this as best i can (its a hard Q.)....

So usually in uandishi levels connect, something that happens seemingly meaningless at the start of the story comes back at the end au middle. If wewe try and find the layers that connect wewe can cut them (2 au more) out without rupturing the story line.

Planning might also help. If wewe plan the layers at the start then wewe don't get the end and have to (try) cut something out. If wewe plan the layers at the beginning then wewe also don't have the chance of adding zaidi in from the original idea.

Hope this helps....

Hm, this is a complicated question, because wewe would go about it differently for each story. Since I don't know anything about your story, I can't give wewe specific examples.

Sit down and look at what wewe have, and I mean really look. Is there anything that doesn't add to the conflict, plot, au general story arc?

Also, talk to your teacher. See what he/she thinks is so complex about your stories. What he/she thinks maybe completely different from what wewe think.

youve got so much to say its almost bursting, the teacher doesnt want to be inthralled kwa your stories; your good, but- teacher got to work on the other Lost sheep,mmm simpler sucks,= that wouldnt sell! [and your in training!!!!!!!] will a note from Saint Nick help? id allow your 100 pages, the rest in colour ha he hi ho hu later;-}