uandishi Article: moyo of the soilder

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posted by delta117

i awoke pain everywhere it felt like my skin was melting but yet i did not scream traing kicked in and i found my black armoar to any normal sentient bieng it would be like an anchor but i am not normal am i after that i grabbed my weapons the first was a set of 2 curved assian knifes curved and made for my hands sekunde standard ar bunduki it had no scope only sights all i needed to kill at 100 yards third a shotgun normal used in swat teams tactical 12 guage shot gun pampu action forth 44mm glock i holousterd it and my knifes my knifes at arm length pistol on my hip then an explosion rocked my cell and soilders poured in i dispathed them with my a.r 5 dead hundreds to go i stepped outr my cell through the hole my enemy s made my radio head set in my kofia, chapeo crackled to life " mac come in mack this is alpha team we are in poisition" i paused looked for any zaidi targets and replied " copy that alpha team this is mac i am on my way any word frombeta au omega?" " beta's in poistion no word from alpha but stats says they're alive alpha team out" good know i could get my three teams out of this base and get back to the HQ. down a carfully polished corridor i searched for the enemy no sighn it was eerily quiet the only noises were the sound of my boots hitting thewaxed floor and my silent controled breathing that was bad.after three floors up i found some action i had switched to my shotgun for close combat. two teams of well trained soilders 2 sets of guns aimed at my head 2 easy. each team consitsted of five soilders so there wetre tenguns pointed at me i had a small windo w of 3 dakika to kill them au they would have help so i targetetd the first team i shot two of them dead an injured one there i shot the injurd one and got knocked on my back kwa a smg i lifted my pistol up as i fell and shot my shooter in his face he crumpled to the ground then the other was stuned a how i had killed his theam in four sekunde i keep time on this stuff then i knocked him in the neck with the handel of my gun and he fell to the groungd he had a broken thacea and larenix instant death i reholstered my pistol and and picked up an anti-personal fragmentatin grenade from a dead soilderpulled the pin and threw it at team 2 it landed in the center and blosumed into a firey maua, ua of shrapnel i pulled my pisol back out and checked the bodies one injure d1 shot in the head changed that all others dead in 7 sekunde i was good

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Cullen-fan That was really good do you write alot?

harold This was a little hard to read at first, since there was hardly any punctuation at all, but by the end I was getting into it more. You might play with verb tense a bit more if you are going for the stream-of-consciousness writing; present tense and 1st person perspective work well together, particularly if you intend to spell words phonetically because the character wouldn't know any better. A good example of this (in my opinion) is the novel [u]Feersum Endjin[/u] - large parts are written in first person, present tense, from the perspective of a warrior who spells everything phonetically. I think moving into present tense would make the other stuff seem more intentional. I'm interested to see more, and particularly curious about the cause of the pain he feels in the beginning. I also like the humorous bits, like the aside "i keep time on this stuff" in the middle of the fight. Some suggestions: proofread after taking a break from writing the piece, so that you can view it with fresh eyes. The spelling may be intentional, and it works, but the words blending together "soilderpulled", "tenguns", "thewaxed" don't work as well for me. Also, you should check which team is talking to which team: "no word from alpha but stats says they're alive alpha team out" Whether or not you decide to switch it to present tense, it's got a lot of energy and it flows quickly. I'm interested to see where you go with it.

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Dear Diary... My name is Cassandra Thorp

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January 1st 2010
Dear Diary, my name is Cassandra (Cassie) Thorp and...
My new years resolutions are...
1. GET A BOYFRIEND!
2. Tell Gwen how much she owes me from last year.
3. Try not to spend hours staring at pictures of Henrie Green (my future husband).
4. Use zaidi Clean and Clear.
5. Try to gain some weight.(I look anorexic)
6. Feed Pepsi.
7. Stop killing all the goldfish.
8. Shrink.
9. Don't smoke.
10. Earn zaidi money.

Well, a new year, and I want this one to be better than the last, which is probably a pipe dream but... wewe never know. I just wish Cerys and Tareesa and Amelia would except me into...

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Words Can Change Things

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wewe want to be there. wewe know wewe do. Don't lie, dahling. It's okay. I know what you're thinking when wewe look up at that splendorous place atop the mountain. I
know what fills you, spurs wewe on, fuels your dreams. You're obsessed with being chosen. Everyone is.
The Land wewe thirst for has loomed at the juu of the mountain in Metopia for as long as wewe can remember. But for most of the year, it's covered in fog, it's color changing with each passing siku as if it's a gargantuan mood ring. wewe begin your mornings staring at the fog, longing for the fateful evening when...

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wewe laugh at something just not funny and the only thing wewe do is apologise, even if wewe don't mean it, wewe do because the people hearing wewe laugh do not appreciate it. How could they?

You hear something sad about another and wewe apologise, because wewe may feel bad for them but wewe don't know what to say and wewe think saying anything else au not saying anything at all is inconsiderate, but it's not fair on wewe because wewe don't know what to do with that information.

You did wewe best to save something au someone for someone else but wewe fail and wewe know that wewe haven't Lost anything but...

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Hello my name is Leila Claudette Xavier the daughter of Max Oscar Xavier. The CEO of Xavier Arms Of War au X.A.W. it is the number one provider of weapons for the arm forces. X.A.W. has been around since world war one we are a family of geniuses mean the Xavier are know for that. I graduated from college when I was ten years old and was valedictorian of my high school class at the age of eight. I’m now fifteen. I woke to the sun pouring thought my bay window here in Virginia beach, pwani near Camp Pendleton so named after General William Nelson Pendleton an Episcopalian minister at Grace Church...

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Terrence moved slowly, watching where he placed his feet. He didn’t want to step on those certain floorboards that squeaked and risk scaring the small girl. He quietly picked his way across the floor, and stopped at the edge of the child’s bed. Gently, he placed a hand on her shoulder, and for a moment, his eyes became locked on the stark contrast of their skin tones. She was very light in color, almost a peachy shade. He was dark in tone, close to the color of chocolate. He smiled at this.

“Rosie,” He said, voice barely above a whisper. “It’s almost daylight. Time to get up, kiddo.”...

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I sat on the bed. Doing nothing. Nothing. Nothing. I looked at the clock. Friday, five-fifty-eight PM. Five-fifty-nine. Waiting. Waiting. moyo pounding. Counting seconds. Every week. Every week, SHE came. SHE would try to kill me. Then I would scream for help and they would come. Then I would get a lecture that nothing was there, possibly some treatment au whatever. Then inayofuata Friday at six, it would happen again.
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kwa Myself

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Well wewe see
I'm not myself anymore
Well wewe can see
What I've done
Blinded myself
Lost my direction
In this times
That are getting cold
In this moment
To behold
And shine

Here's a poem
For all the loved ones
Here's a grave
For all the dead
Here's the oxygen
For all the living
Here's a tissue
For tears that are shed
I'm Lost now
I'm here now
I'm Lost here
kwa Myself
I'm gone now
I'm Lost again
I'm lost
kwa myself

Well take your houses
Take your money
Take the things wewe don't need
Live the life
You've always wanted
And then burn the memories
Take the good times and the bad
Take the happy maybe the sad
And turn, turn yourself around
I'm Lost in my own fairytale
Where I'm the winner
All over again
in my daydreams I've Lost all hope
All ambition
Looking and losing an only friend

I'm Lost now
I'm here now
I'm Lost here
kwa Myself
I'm gone now
I'm Lost again
I'm lost
kwa myself

I'm lost
I'm here
I'm Lost here
kwa myself

I'm Lost now
I'm here now
I'm Lost here
kwa myself

kwa myself

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love+friends=HELP!

posted by twilight-rocks9

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And his hair I upendo it!” my best friend Selene said. I make a gagging sound. “Oh shut up Gabs you’re going to be like this your boyfriend and I’m going to suffer.” she said. “You want to suffer then let me replay what wewe sound like.” I did a horrible impression of her. “Oh no I have to go bye gabby.” she said. When she got up she kicked sand on my arm. “Bye Lena” I alisema a little too late. I looked at the suns refection on the clear blue ocean. I got up to go swimming when someone put their hands over my eyes and said...

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CHAPTER ONE: "CARTER"

There’s one silent sensation of falling really fast and really hard. Then it’s over. Just like that. Somewhere off in the distance, a girl screams. Maybe she’s inayofuata to me and my damaged ears are playing tricks on me. au maybe she really is far away from here, wherever that is.
A flame billowing over a folded up car flicks its vile tongue. The moto reflects in the pools of blood and the bodies. Five bodies, and myself, still alive. Sirens wail and rescue teams and news vans swarm the scene. I moan and grip my chest, waiting for someone to notice...

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True upendo Revealed

posted by Triscia95

“Caroline I’ve tried everything to prove my self time after time that I upendo you, that I would do anything for you, I’d never let anyone hurt you.” Klaus paused as Caroline stood in the door looking down at the hardwood floor tears rolling down her eyes. “That I would die for you.” He finished. Klaus took one step towards Caroline but as he did she took two steps away.

Klaus’s grieved face turned sour, wamekula and full of anger. Nothing he did au alisema made her realize that if she asked anything he would do it with out a sekunde thought. She shook her head and raced out the door.

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A boy who loves spots

posted by Nesrino

Once upon a time, there was a 15 mwaka old boy named Will who loved sports as if they were his whole life. From the beginning of his first siku at school, Will tried out for the soccer team and they were amazed how talented this boy was at sports at such a young age. When Will became 12 years of age, he had won the scool over 20 awards for each soccer, mpira wa kikapu and tennis competition they entered. He has also become very fit and well-built from all his exercising and sports, and seems to think that being fit was one of the most important things a person should accomplish in life. Will has always...