wewe may ask who and what is Mary Sue and a Gary Stu?
Well my follow shabiki popper a Mary Sue and Gary Stu is a written au drawn mistake, lie au fake.
Why are they supposedly a lie au a fraud?
Silly you! They're a lie and,or a fraud because they're perfect, no flaws, no issues, and no worries. Basically everything a human isn't au can't naturally have.
Mary Sue- Is a female who is beautifully, smart, sexy, strong, independent, sentimental, generous, slim but curvy at the same time,and yada yada. She's basically the perfect woman with no flaws and a sex symbol that tops over all other sex symbols. Her talents, her beauty, her smarts, her body, her everything is better than yours and everyone agrees and loves her. Anything she does 'wrong' is a misunderstanding and in the end she's still the lovely and good Mary!
Gary Stu-Is a male who's sexy, handsome, smooth,smart, sentimental, tough, bad boy,edgy,romantic, muscular, strong,has lots of money, and smooth with the ladies again because this is kinda a huge point to them. Basically he's everything a Mary Sue is but is a male. He makes your man like a dumb ugly dog. ( mbwa are cute kwa the way. Not cuter than Cats though) He has no real flaws. Bad boy, no because every girl au guy ( there's no discrimination in this makala except against Mary Sues and Gary Stus) has a bit of a soft side for the dark side. ;)
These 'people' aren't real because of these facts they have no flaws au problems. Especially no challenging problems that has to take a whole series au book.
Harry Potter,however, is faced with challenge after challenge that the main challenge, Voldemort brings upon him with his followers to help him. Also Harry deals with personally problems and feelings that we all had, can relate too, and are very much human. Harry's challenges last each book and the main challenge lasts through the whole series and with these challenges he grows, develops, understand things, and find ways to stop the badies and all that good stuff.
Anyway, how do they become to exist?!
That's what everyone asks! Why? Because Mary Sues and Gary Stus are common in literature, television,plays, and movies. Even in popular,well written and applauded works of art.
They exist because some authors,artists, directors, writers and all them wanted to have a character who resembles themselves but are the better versions. au they are what everyone should strive to be but are impossible to reach kwa all humans because the standards are impossible to reach.But remember not every character standard can be considered impossible especially if they are a real character not a Sue au Stu.
In My Little Pony Twilight Sparkle became a princess in "Magical Mystery Cure" because she understood and knew the power of friendship. She of course was then bashed for becoming a Sue. But can wewe call her that? No because she had fears and problems. But she overcame them through out the series with the help of Marafiki and her own courage and bravery. This also gives her character development but we will go over that later. Her standards weren't too high and impossible. wewe have to overcome something life changing au different than anything wewe ever experienced. No wewe won't become a princess au a prince, wewe will however feel some accomplishment and arise up from your old way(s) and become a better you.
Are all characters we look up to and want to be like Mary Sues and Gary Stus?
Hell No!Well defined characters are zaidi human like. They have flaws and strengths that sometimes out weigh the other au are equal.You can relate to them because of this.
Flaws if wewe most know are faults,weakness, and imperfections within au outside a person,idea,thought, au thing. They can be small au big depending on the way it is used and looked at. Strength however, are good au beneficial qualities au attributes of a person,idea,thought, au thing.
How do I avoid making this character!?
Wise one!! wewe don't what a lifeless, boring drone. So here are some steps:
First the basics:
The character name, looks, and personality.
These can change depending on the setting the character is in. It's been proven kwa many other people that Mary Sues and Gary Stus usually have names that have a super specially meaning. But there are acceptations if wewe ask me. For example, a baby is born during a war and the parents decide to call the baby Victory au Hope, Victory to remind them of what they strive for. Hope is as basic as it can get.
Appearance can change variously depending on age,era, style and person. Now here is some limitations, she au he can't possible look better than everyone in the whole room unless the story is told kwa the person who loves our heroine au hero. Why because they're opinion is going to be bias because they are in love. au it could be bias if the narrator is our main heroine and she/he believes she/he's zaidi gorgeous/handsome than everyone else but this could be written as either a flaw au a strength because she/he is either arrogant au confident.
Here are some body limitations if she is bone thin don't say she has curves in all the right ways, if she's chubby don't say she's fitter than every girl in school because it's kinda unrealistic for both lines. If he is bone thin don't say he's the best football player because of his natural physical strength alone. Natural strength as in no powers, no magic, no drugs, no bribes, no video games, and no dreams. But again if it's from a bias persons point of view it can be put off as an acceptation. It could be written off as being a Mary au Gary when the story is told basically kwa an unbiased au outside character.
First off the character can be attractive,friendly and smart. Why? Because both woman and men can be this way without being perfect.The reason why a person could have these strengths without being a Mary au a Gary is because the strengths most likely will be balanced with flaws au occasionally topping over each other.There are zaidi strengths too kwa the way. Such as talented, generous, open minded,creative,exciting, lovely, elegant, popular,independent,strong,healthy,athletic, brave,witty,cunning,etc.There are many flaws that are out there and could be a trait for a human as well as a character ,such as being ignorant, close minded, lazy, boring, dependent, weak, coward, arrogant, naive, bossy,ugly,mean, etc. As wewe can see some au most of the flaws is the opposite of the some au most of the strengths.
Second: Back story and Goals
This is where we know the history of the character and can direct us to the character's possibly future. This is where we learn who's their family and Marafiki are, possibly their enemy, were there some lovers, were there some moyo break, au were there some terrible things that happened to our character. Was it death, rape, molestation, traumatizing experiences, au something? The back story can example many things about the character whether why the appear this way, why do they live here, why do they upendo this au hate that, why are this/that way? Back story is basically what were character history,present and future is.Make them at least have one personally fear because everyone has one. Give reasons why they are nervous au afraid of this au this happening.
Goals are basically what the character has accomplished au hasn't accomplished yet and what they want to accomplish. This also help us with the back story of the character au the whole story itself, This can also tell us why the character act this way, like this and dislike this, and are a certain way. Goals, back story, development and personality in my opinion is what makes a deep character. Deep characters have complicated feelings, thoughts, goals, development and personality.
Development is of course how much the character progress, learn, and better themselves and others. wewe also will learn the rawness of the character, what they are and who? Why they do this au do that? wewe understand them and relate to them. They are slowly fixing their flaws and inspiring wewe to do so too.
A Mary Sue and a Gary Stu does none of these things au have these things. They aren't complex, they weren't hard to figure out. wewe what is happening before it is happening and there's no real problem au suspense around them. Why? Because Mary and Gary aren't meant for serious novels and televisheni shows. They're little characters the mwandishi au whatever put there just because.
Don't make Mary Sues and Gary Stus. Just telling it how it is!
Well my follow shabiki popper a Mary Sue and Gary Stu is a written au drawn mistake, lie au fake.
Why are they supposedly a lie au a fraud?
Silly you! They're a lie and,or a fraud because they're perfect, no flaws, no issues, and no worries. Basically everything a human isn't au can't naturally have.
Mary Sue- Is a female who is beautifully, smart, sexy, strong, independent, sentimental, generous, slim but curvy at the same time,and yada yada. She's basically the perfect woman with no flaws and a sex symbol that tops over all other sex symbols. Her talents, her beauty, her smarts, her body, her everything is better than yours and everyone agrees and loves her. Anything she does 'wrong' is a misunderstanding and in the end she's still the lovely and good Mary!
Gary Stu-Is a male who's sexy, handsome, smooth,smart, sentimental, tough, bad boy,edgy,romantic, muscular, strong,has lots of money, and smooth with the ladies again because this is kinda a huge point to them. Basically he's everything a Mary Sue is but is a male. He makes your man like a dumb ugly dog. ( mbwa are cute kwa the way. Not cuter than Cats though) He has no real flaws. Bad boy, no because every girl au guy ( there's no discrimination in this makala except against Mary Sues and Gary Stus) has a bit of a soft side for the dark side. ;)
These 'people' aren't real because of these facts they have no flaws au problems. Especially no challenging problems that has to take a whole series au book.
Harry Potter,however, is faced with challenge after challenge that the main challenge, Voldemort brings upon him with his followers to help him. Also Harry deals with personally problems and feelings that we all had, can relate too, and are very much human. Harry's challenges last each book and the main challenge lasts through the whole series and with these challenges he grows, develops, understand things, and find ways to stop the badies and all that good stuff.
Anyway, how do they become to exist?!
That's what everyone asks! Why? Because Mary Sues and Gary Stus are common in literature, television,plays, and movies. Even in popular,well written and applauded works of art.
They exist because some authors,artists, directors, writers and all them wanted to have a character who resembles themselves but are the better versions. au they are what everyone should strive to be but are impossible to reach kwa all humans because the standards are impossible to reach.But remember not every character standard can be considered impossible especially if they are a real character not a Sue au Stu.
In My Little Pony Twilight Sparkle became a princess in "Magical Mystery Cure" because she understood and knew the power of friendship. She of course was then bashed for becoming a Sue. But can wewe call her that? No because she had fears and problems. But she overcame them through out the series with the help of Marafiki and her own courage and bravery. This also gives her character development but we will go over that later. Her standards weren't too high and impossible. wewe have to overcome something life changing au different than anything wewe ever experienced. No wewe won't become a princess au a prince, wewe will however feel some accomplishment and arise up from your old way(s) and become a better you.
Are all characters we look up to and want to be like Mary Sues and Gary Stus?
Hell No!Well defined characters are zaidi human like. They have flaws and strengths that sometimes out weigh the other au are equal.You can relate to them because of this.
Flaws if wewe most know are faults,weakness, and imperfections within au outside a person,idea,thought, au thing. They can be small au big depending on the way it is used and looked at. Strength however, are good au beneficial qualities au attributes of a person,idea,thought, au thing.
How do I avoid making this character!?
Wise one!! wewe don't what a lifeless, boring drone. So here are some steps:
First the basics:
The character name, looks, and personality.
These can change depending on the setting the character is in. It's been proven kwa many other people that Mary Sues and Gary Stus usually have names that have a super specially meaning. But there are acceptations if wewe ask me. For example, a baby is born during a war and the parents decide to call the baby Victory au Hope, Victory to remind them of what they strive for. Hope is as basic as it can get.
Appearance can change variously depending on age,era, style and person. Now here is some limitations, she au he can't possible look better than everyone in the whole room unless the story is told kwa the person who loves our heroine au hero. Why because they're opinion is going to be bias because they are in love. au it could be bias if the narrator is our main heroine and she/he believes she/he's zaidi gorgeous/handsome than everyone else but this could be written as either a flaw au a strength because she/he is either arrogant au confident.
Here are some body limitations if she is bone thin don't say she has curves in all the right ways, if she's chubby don't say she's fitter than every girl in school because it's kinda unrealistic for both lines. If he is bone thin don't say he's the best football player because of his natural physical strength alone. Natural strength as in no powers, no magic, no drugs, no bribes, no video games, and no dreams. But again if it's from a bias persons point of view it can be put off as an acceptation. It could be written off as being a Mary au Gary when the story is told basically kwa an unbiased au outside character.
First off the character can be attractive,friendly and smart. Why? Because both woman and men can be this way without being perfect.The reason why a person could have these strengths without being a Mary au a Gary is because the strengths most likely will be balanced with flaws au occasionally topping over each other.There are zaidi strengths too kwa the way. Such as talented, generous, open minded,creative,exciting, lovely, elegant, popular,independent,strong,healthy,athletic, brave,witty,cunning,etc.There are many flaws that are out there and could be a trait for a human as well as a character ,such as being ignorant, close minded, lazy, boring, dependent, weak, coward, arrogant, naive, bossy,ugly,mean, etc. As wewe can see some au most of the flaws is the opposite of the some au most of the strengths.
Second: Back story and Goals
This is where we know the history of the character and can direct us to the character's possibly future. This is where we learn who's their family and Marafiki are, possibly their enemy, were there some lovers, were there some moyo break, au were there some terrible things that happened to our character. Was it death, rape, molestation, traumatizing experiences, au something? The back story can example many things about the character whether why the appear this way, why do they live here, why do they upendo this au hate that, why are this/that way? Back story is basically what were character history,present and future is.Make them at least have one personally fear because everyone has one. Give reasons why they are nervous au afraid of this au this happening.
Goals are basically what the character has accomplished au hasn't accomplished yet and what they want to accomplish. This also help us with the back story of the character au the whole story itself, This can also tell us why the character act this way, like this and dislike this, and are a certain way. Goals, back story, development and personality in my opinion is what makes a deep character. Deep characters have complicated feelings, thoughts, goals, development and personality.
Development is of course how much the character progress, learn, and better themselves and others. wewe also will learn the rawness of the character, what they are and who? Why they do this au do that? wewe understand them and relate to them. They are slowly fixing their flaws and inspiring wewe to do so too.
A Mary Sue and a Gary Stu does none of these things au have these things. They aren't complex, they weren't hard to figure out. wewe what is happening before it is happening and there's no real problem au suspense around them. Why? Because Mary and Gary aren't meant for serious novels and televisheni shows. They're little characters the mwandishi au whatever put there just because.
Don't make Mary Sues and Gary Stus. Just telling it how it is!
Hey, so this is a poem Ive been thinking of for a long time,please read and comment!
The Spirit
The spirit rushes on,
Swifter than the wind,
To find answers,
To seek the way.
The spirit flows on,
Like the river.
Flowing on to find the ocean,
A nyumbani for all its dreams.
The spirit shines on,
Brighter than a thousand suns.
Shining on to clear the darkness,
To find the path.
The spirit lives on,
zaidi eternal than the sea,
Living on to find its home,
Where all the ends shall meet.
The Spirit
The spirit rushes on,
Swifter than the wind,
To find answers,
To seek the way.
The spirit flows on,
Like the river.
Flowing on to find the ocean,
A nyumbani for all its dreams.
The spirit shines on,
Brighter than a thousand suns.
Shining on to clear the darkness,
To find the path.
The spirit lives on,
zaidi eternal than the sea,
Living on to find its home,
Where all the ends shall meet.
Forever
Forever wewe are mine
Forever I’ll be here
Forever is what wewe promised
Your moyo is worth nothing
But the your soul is priceless
Forever can be a long time
Forever can be a long time cut short
It’s worth the suffering
It’s worth the sacrifice
To forever be yours
Forever protected kwa your eagle like wings
Forever loved kwa your ocean wide heart
Forever salama in your warm embrace
Forever is worth the wait
To be sliced thin
To stuffed thick
Forever is Forever
Forever is Eternity
Forever is a risk
Forever is a chance
Forever is worth the wait
Forever wewe are mine
Forever I’ll be here
Forever is what wewe promised
Your moyo is worth nothing
But the your soul is priceless
Forever can be a long time
Forever can be a long time cut short
It’s worth the suffering
It’s worth the sacrifice
To forever be yours
Forever protected kwa your eagle like wings
Forever loved kwa your ocean wide heart
Forever salama in your warm embrace
Forever is worth the wait
To be sliced thin
To stuffed thick
Forever is Forever
Forever is Eternity
Forever is a risk
Forever is a chance
Forever is worth the wait
preface
if the one person wewe told the truth to all the time was now the one person wewe have to keep it away from, would you?
would wewe be able to lie through your teeth and pray that he believes you? what if he was the one person wewe told everything to, he was the one who keeps wewe from falling apart, but if wewe told him anything he might be the one to bring wewe tummbling down.
if wewe had to chose between lieing to him, hurting him, and keeping him away from you, what would wewe chose? because if wewe dont chose right, he may very well die.
if the one person wewe told the truth to all the time was now the one person wewe have to keep it away from, would you?
would wewe be able to lie through your teeth and pray that he believes you? what if he was the one person wewe told everything to, he was the one who keeps wewe from falling apart, but if wewe told him anything he might be the one to bring wewe tummbling down.
if wewe had to chose between lieing to him, hurting him, and keeping him away from you, what would wewe chose? because if wewe dont chose right, he may very well die.
I am bored with love
and it's passionless limbs
that drape over my bed
in a lethargic state of impotence
while wearing the same red heart
my soul picked up hitchhiking
off highway serendipity
Now here we are
alone in togetherness
trying to build dreams
with two kwa fours and glue,
but even a home
won't tie us together
when our hearts live alone
Poetic vows cliched
into nothingness
like all words do, eventually
and we allowed our bodies to become another pair of hollow shadows that make upendo to a wall
instead of each other
and we wonder why
the roses are dying
and it's passionless limbs
that drape over my bed
in a lethargic state of impotence
while wearing the same red heart
my soul picked up hitchhiking
off highway serendipity
Now here we are
alone in togetherness
trying to build dreams
with two kwa fours and glue,
but even a home
won't tie us together
when our hearts live alone
Poetic vows cliched
into nothingness
like all words do, eventually
and we allowed our bodies to become another pair of hollow shadows that make upendo to a wall
instead of each other
and we wonder why
the roses are dying
A mwaka zamani in my calculation,
A mwaka ago, there were situations.
The same song played now and then,
In my memory, it had begun.
Tears from my eyes were shed this morning,
It was the most tears I was shedding.
My world isn’t complete without you,
My world and I don’t know what to do.
upendo isn’t a toy and never was.
upendo is what wewe cherish and keep as treasure.
My mind is at many topics at random,
It goes normal when you’re in my kingdom.
What ends my bad situations with people
Is my focus on you, my angel.
You’ll always be a part of me,
You’ll always be in my memory.
A mwaka ago, there were situations.
The same song played now and then,
In my memory, it had begun.
Tears from my eyes were shed this morning,
It was the most tears I was shedding.
My world isn’t complete without you,
My world and I don’t know what to do.
upendo isn’t a toy and never was.
upendo is what wewe cherish and keep as treasure.
My mind is at many topics at random,
It goes normal when you’re in my kingdom.
What ends my bad situations with people
Is my focus on you, my angel.
You’ll always be a part of me,
You’ll always be in my memory.