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wewe may ask who and what is Mary Sue and a Gary Stu?

Well my follow shabiki popper a Mary Sue and Gary Stu is a written au drawn mistake, lie au fake.

Why are they supposedly a lie au a fraud?

Silly you! They're a lie and,or a fraud because they're perfect, no flaws, no issues, and no worries. Basically everything a human isn't au can't naturally have.

Mary Sue- Is a female who is beautifully, smart, sexy, strong, independent, sentimental, generous, slim but curvy at the same time,and yada yada. She's basically the perfect woman with no flaws and a sex symbol that tops over all other sex symbols. Her talents, her beauty, her smarts, her body, her everything is better than yours and everyone agrees and loves her. Anything she does 'wrong' is a misunderstanding and in the end she's still the lovely and good Mary!

Gary Stu-Is a male who's sexy, handsome, smooth,smart, sentimental, tough, bad boy,edgy,romantic, muscular, strong,has lots of money, and smooth with the ladies again because this is kinda a huge point to them. Basically he's everything a Mary Sue is but is a male. He makes your man like a dumb ugly dog. ( mbwa are cute kwa the way. Not cuter than Cats though) He has no real flaws. Bad boy, no because every girl au guy ( there's no discrimination in this makala except against Mary Sues and Gary Stus) has a bit of a soft side for the dark side. ;)

These 'people' aren't real because of these facts they have no flaws au problems. Especially no challenging problems that has to take a whole series au book.

Harry Potter,however, is faced with challenge after challenge that the main challenge, Voldemort brings upon him with his followers to help him. Also Harry deals with personally problems and feelings that we all had, can relate too, and are very much human. Harry's challenges last each book and the main challenge lasts through the whole series and with these challenges he grows, develops, understand things, and find ways to stop the badies and all that good stuff.

Anyway, how do they become to exist?!

That's what everyone asks! Why? Because Mary Sues and Gary Stus are common in literature, television,plays, and movies. Even in popular,well written and applauded works of art.
They exist because some authors,artists, directors, writers and all them wanted to have a character who resembles themselves but are the better versions. au they are what everyone should strive to be but are impossible to reach kwa all humans because the standards are impossible to reach.But remember not every character standard can be considered impossible especially if they are a real character not a Sue au Stu.

In My Little Pony Twilight Sparkle became a princess in "Magical Mystery Cure" because she understood and knew the power of friendship. She of course was then bashed for becoming a Sue. But can wewe call her that? No because she had fears and problems. But she overcame them through out the series with the help of Marafiki and her own courage and bravery. This also gives her character development but we will go over that later. Her standards weren't too high and impossible. wewe have to overcome something life changing au different than anything wewe ever experienced. No wewe won't become a princess au a prince, wewe will however feel some accomplishment and arise up from your old way(s) and become a better you.

Are all characters we look up to and want to be like Mary Sues and Gary Stus?

Hell No!Well defined characters are zaidi human like. They have flaws and strengths that sometimes out weigh the other au are equal.You can relate to them because of this.
Flaws if wewe most know are faults,weakness, and imperfections within au outside a person,idea,thought, au thing. They can be small au big depending on the way it is used and looked at. Strength however, are good au beneficial qualities au attributes of a person,idea,thought, au thing.

How do I avoid making this character!?

Wise one!! wewe don't what a lifeless, boring drone. So here are some steps:

First the basics:
The character name, looks, and personality.
These can change depending on the setting the character is in. It's been proven kwa many other people that Mary Sues and Gary Stus usually have names that have a super specially meaning. But there are acceptations if wewe ask me. For example, a baby is born during a war and the parents decide to call the baby Victory au Hope, Victory to remind them of what they strive for. Hope is as basic as it can get.

Appearance can change variously depending on age,era, style and person. Now here is some limitations, she au he can't possible look better than everyone in the whole room unless the story is told kwa the person who loves our heroine au hero. Why because they're opinion is going to be bias because they are in love. au it could be bias if the narrator is our main heroine and she/he believes she/he's zaidi gorgeous/handsome than everyone else but this could be written as either a flaw au a strength because she/he is either arrogant au confident.

Here are some body limitations if she is bone thin don't say she has curves in all the right ways, if she's chubby don't say she's fitter than every girl in school because it's kinda unrealistic for both lines. If he is bone thin don't say he's the best football player because of his natural physical strength alone. Natural strength as in no powers, no magic, no drugs, no bribes, no video games, and no dreams. But again if it's from a bias persons point of view it can be put off as an acceptation. It could be written off as being a Mary au Gary when the story is told basically kwa an unbiased au outside character.

First off the character can be attractive,friendly and smart. Why? Because both woman and men can be this way without being perfect.The reason why a person could have these strengths without being a Mary au a Gary is because the strengths most likely will be balanced with flaws au occasionally topping over each other.There are zaidi strengths too kwa the way. Such as talented, generous, open minded,creative,exciting, lovely, elegant, popular,independent,strong,healthy,athletic, brave,witty,cunning,etc.There are many flaws that are out there and could be a trait for a human as well as a character ,such as being ignorant, close minded, lazy, boring, dependent, weak, coward, arrogant, naive, bossy,ugly,mean, etc. As wewe can see some au most of the flaws is the opposite of the some au most of the strengths.

Second: Back story and Goals
This is where we know the history of the character and can direct us to the character's possibly future. This is where we learn who's their family and Marafiki are, possibly their enemy, were there some lovers, were there some moyo break, au were there some terrible things that happened to our character. Was it death, rape, molestation, traumatizing experiences, au something? The back story can example many things about the character whether why the appear this way, why do they live here, why do they upendo this au hate that, why are this/that way? Back story is basically what were character history,present and future is.Make them at least have one personally fear because everyone has one. Give reasons why they are nervous au afraid of this au this happening.

Goals are basically what the character has accomplished au hasn't accomplished yet and what they want to accomplish. This also help us with the back story of the character au the whole story itself, This can also tell us why the character act this way, like this and dislike this, and are a certain way. Goals, back story, development and personality in my opinion is what makes a deep character. Deep characters have complicated feelings, thoughts, goals, development and personality.

Development is of course how much the character progress, learn, and better themselves and others. wewe also will learn the rawness of the character, what they are and who? Why they do this au do that? wewe understand them and relate to them. They are slowly fixing their flaws and inspiring wewe to do so too.

A Mary Sue and a Gary Stu does none of these things au have these things. They aren't complex, they weren't hard to figure out. wewe what is happening before it is happening and there's no real problem au suspense around them. Why? Because Mary and Gary aren't meant for serious novels and televisheni shows. They're little characters the mwandishi au whatever put there just because.

Don't make Mary Sues and Gary Stus. Just telling it how it is!
posted by Insight357
I went back nyumbani for a few hours. I smelt of old paper and cologne. I decided to get a shower; maybe it would calm my anxieties about tonight. As I scrubbed myself, I decided the only thing the kuoga was doing was ridding me of my office scent.
    I got out of the kuoga and put on some clothes. I wore a black, v-neck shirt, with a pair of tight black pants. I towel dried my hair, and messed it with some gel. I put on cologne, just in case anyone got close enough to smell me. I put the cologne down, and checked to make sure it was in place. My arm muscle twitched. I left...
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posted by dawnisbeauty
Hey, so this is a poem Ive been thinking of for a long time,please read and comment!



The Spirit

The spirit rushes on,
Swifter than the wind,
To find answers,
To seek the way.

The spirit flows on,
Like the river.
Flowing on to find the ocean,
A nyumbani for all its dreams.

The spirit shines on,
Brighter than a thousand suns.
Shining on to clear the darkness,
To find the path.

The spirit lives on,
zaidi eternal than the sea,
Living on to find its home,
Where all the ends shall meet.
posted by jesus_bale
 "It's something unpredictable, but in the end is right."
"It's something unpredictable, but in the end is right."

I can still remember the disappointment in those hazel eyes the moment I told him I was leaving. I couldn't stay - I had no choice. I still can't decide whether it hurt zaidi to leave him, au to know I had been the one who caused the pain. What was I supposed to do? This child needed guidance and protection now zaidi than ever, and I couldn't help him. For so long I had been the one to console him - make him feel salama - and it was coming to an end. It was... the rule.

"I need to go away, Alex. It's what imaginary Marafiki do....
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posted by sawfan13
My stuff has already been moved down here to the jungle. I still can't shake off what happened yesterday, but Howl's been very sweet to me, assuring me everything's okay. Debbie has been helping me unpack my stuff and everything. Some people are still thinking that I'm crazy for moving down here, but I wanted to. Howl couldn't really adjust very well to my world, but with a little bit zaidi time, I'll get used to his world more. Debbie ran up to me and hugged me and asked," Lil, I know this may sound ridiculous and silly, but is it okay if I may stay with wewe guys?" "Deb-" "I know it sounds...
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posted by sawfan13
I woke up after my nap, to find Howl is gone again. I looked out of the cave, seeing the waterfall running, but then I look down to see Howl. Howl is in the waterfall, washing himself, as if he were taking a kuoga au whatever. I left him alone, and went back to my nap. I had this very freaky dream while napping: I had a nightmare that I was back nyumbani in New York with Howl. Everyone back nyumbani looked demonic and scary. Mom and Dad didn't look like themselves. They looked non-human like and cannibalistic in a way that even scared me. Howl was no where to be found, as Adam was trying to kiss me...
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posted by HarryPLover
Forever
Forever wewe are mine
Forever I’ll be here
Forever is what wewe promised
Your moyo is worth nothing
But the your soul is priceless
Forever can be a long time
Forever can be a long time cut short
It’s worth the suffering
It’s worth the sacrifice
To forever be yours
Forever protected kwa your eagle like wings
Forever loved kwa your ocean wide heart
Forever salama in your warm embrace
Forever is worth the wait
To be sliced thin
To stuffed thick
Forever is Forever
Forever is Eternity
Forever is a risk
Forever is a chance
Forever is worth the wait
posted by rebaj2010
preface

if the one person wewe told the truth to all the time was now the one person wewe have to keep it away from, would you?
would wewe be able to lie through your teeth and pray that he believes you? what if he was the one person wewe told everything to, he was the one who keeps wewe from falling apart, but if wewe told him anything he might be the one to bring wewe tummbling down.
if wewe had to chose between lieing to him, hurting him, and keeping him away from you, what would wewe chose? because if wewe dont chose right, he may very well die.
I kept on laughing at his idiocy. I turned my head away when he caught me looking at him. I heard a slight chuckle behind me while Looi continued to make his way to the front of the long line while I followed him.
    “Hey, girlie!” I heard a voice shout. I turned to find the man looking at me and motioning me to come over there. Looi turned around and asked me, “What does he want?”
    “I don’t know.” I replied. I started to go over to where the man sat, but Looi stopped me with his hand around my upper arm. “No, he, he might be a child...
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posted by EmoKidSteven
I am bored with love
and it's passionless limbs
that drape over my bed
in a lethargic state of impotence
while wearing the same red heart
my soul picked up hitchhiking
off highway serendipity
Now here we are
alone in togetherness
trying to build dreams
with two kwa fours and glue,
but even a home
won't tie us together
when our hearts live alone
Poetic vows cliched
into nothingness
like all words do, eventually
and we allowed our bodies to become another pair of hollow shadows that make upendo to a wall
instead of each other
and we wonder why
the roses are dying
posted by Funnygirl77
 upendo bites
love bites
previously: He sighed, Zack thought his chances with Kisa was slim. He knew kwa doing what he was doing, he was going to put Kisa in danger, but he couldn't stay away, he loves Kisa and he would do anything to keep her near him even if that meant putting her in danger. "Man", he thought, "I am so selfish".



Zack walked in to the lunch room and sat down, the people who were at the meza, jedwali got up and walked away. Kisa walked in after him, there eyes met, and kisa looked away. She wished that Zack would ask her out,Zack looked down. He was going to ask her to the dance which is in two weeks, "Kisa?"...
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posted by June4
A mwaka zamani in my calculation,
A mwaka ago, there were situations.
The same song played now and then,
In my memory, it had begun.


Tears from my eyes were shed this morning,
It was the most tears I was shedding.
My world isn’t complete without you,
My world and I don’t know what to do.


upendo isn’t a toy and never was.
upendo is what wewe cherish and keep as treasure.
My mind is at many topics at random,
It goes normal when you’re in my kingdom.
What ends my bad situations with people
Is my focus on you, my angel.
You’ll always be a part of me,
You’ll always be in my memory.
mysterious upendo

- chapter 13-





"Ok wewe can open them now."
When I opened my eyes my mouth droped.
"Go carts! How did...when did...THATS AWESOME!"
He laughed "I thought wewe would like them."
"Well wewe were right! " Then I realized I was uigizaji like a 6 mwaka old in front of the hottest guy I had ever seen.
"I mean umm... there...great?"
"Dont worry your not uigizaji like a six mwaka old." Mathew smiled at me.

How did he no that?


Then of course me being me.i
I alisema the stupied possible thing any body could EVER say.

"You look so cute when wewe smile like that." I could just imagin the big hearts in my eyes....
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PG-13

Chapter 2

"Hey babe. Where are wewe going?" asked Megan. She was already obsessed with me... Like practically all the other girls who have come to the school. Why couldn't one time, just one time, a single girl didn't crush on me. Even the girls who are in a relationship. Is it that hard? I mean there were plenty of other guys at this school and it wasn't only just me. I wasn't ever interested in girls! Man I sound like a six mwaka old rather than a eighteen mwaka old. That's pretty sad.

"Away from you." I mumbled under my breath. I looked at her beautiful lustful eyes and alisema a little loud....
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posted by joe-edwardfan
A CURSED STORY!
Once apon a time there was a powerful king ruling London.
The legend says a witch cursed the kings only daughter because he killed all the witches in London except for his own.
As its told the curse forbids the princess to ever feels au falls in love(but she can just feel upendo for the witche’s son Damien who is in upendo with the princess) unless the witch that's has casted the spell on her shall die drowning in her own blood at an eclipse.
    Witch: a witch is a person that has special abilities and is immortal they look like a human and blood runs in their...
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“Opal... Who is this man” Marley Asked. Opal just noticed the two boys standing there herself, but soon understood, for their vampiric powers were far beyond hers. “I’m guessing this is that pure-blood bastard releasing all that power before” alisema Alec. Marley grabbed Opal kwa the juu and pulled her to her feet. “Damn you! wewe bit her didn’t you?” Shouted Marley. The man put his hand back to his side. “Sigh”. “This is so much trouble” alisema the Man. Before Alec could say a word, the man elbowed him straight in the face. Alec slid for about three metres and then rolled...
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A/N: Yeah, I know, I come up with some weird stuff. Fractions of a whole story. Well, attatch whatever story wewe want. This is about a mourning teen. And suicide.

Please rate. (And please comment)
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Getting cold in the sun’s shadow

Drowning in this black pin’s ink

Gone is the lovely light, night’s here despite

Twilight’s eternal fights and weep

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She breathed in and out slowly, each breath appearing in front of her, a wisp of cold smoke disappearing. Around her was a silent vibration she had never...
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posted by RATHBONE07
Tap!Tap! There was that sound again. It was so annoyingly loud, but it did drown out the screams in the inayofuata room. Tap!! Who the hell would bother to disturb me on a Monday morning? Bang!!
"What the hell!" I yell rolling of my kitanda and dragging myself towards the door. When i finally open it theres Michael starring at me with his blood red eyes.
"Damn Lilly!! Ive been banging at your door since freakin' six in the morning! Are wewe freakin' deaf au something?God!"
"Let's just say that i did hear wewe but ignored it. Dude, do wewe know how early six in the morning is? wewe interrupted my beauty sleep....
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posted by A_Sirens_Call
A sirens call

CHAPTER ONE::: Shyness

It is the first siku back, I really did not think of anything interesting happening, it was all new and strange after the holidays nothing would surprise me. Our little group of six did not have any specific relations towards outsiders we tried to keep contact with the human race to a minimum considering we are no longer human. After that experiment from the mad scientist - Doctor John Hallwain – trying to clone us making marginal errors then tried a different experiment but that is all I know and that was gathered kwa Annabelle who could read minds and was...
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posted by Cuddles
A/N: My first poem I post here...I hope it is any good.

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Memories

Far distant seem to be
the things I now call memory.
The good and bad, the right and wrong
share a thing, cause they are gone.

Long forgotten feelings rise
each of them in their disguise.
They are not dead, so it only seems
waiting patiently to haunt me in my dreams.

Will it ever cease to be?
Even if it's called memory
Does that mean I always have to remember
to give up, to hide from them, to surrender?

Whenever I fight them I will lose.
I have nothing between I could choose.
No matter...
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Me: okay i actually found this story in my local newspaer from 20 years back. And i'll put a symbol for town names. I don't want rapists au pheaodifiles coming to my town... okay lets begin. And i shall have to give some background history. Well at there was a renovation going on at $ which was between # and &, for an old mental asylum to be converted into a power house musuem. Anyway so this story takes place then. I think i'm not sure of dates.
$ was a small town, very small as in like only three -5 thousande people


okay so in Australia out in the country there was a young couple travelling...
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