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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Hello. I wrote this makala for people on this club that like uandishi fanfictions, but have the feeling that they don't do good. This makala should help wewe out, and it might also encourage others to start uandishi fanfictions, if they haven't done so.

Again, this is for people on this club that feel like they want to do better, au just don't like reading/writing fanfictions in general. If wewe think you're good at writing, au do like reading/writing in general, give me some feedback.

There are many important things to have in a fanfiction.

1. A setting.

This is very important. If wewe don't have a setting in your story, the audience will be confused, and wonder where it takes place. wewe must include where the story takes place, and/or when it takes place.

Often, when I write a fanfiction that takes place today, I don't add when it takes place, but I always write down when it takes place, if it's in the past, such as my Ponies On The Rails articles. wewe can see the month, day, and mwaka that each episode takes place in.

As I alisema earlier, it's important to write down where your story takes place. Since this is a My Little gppony, pony club, wewe can have it take place in any of the towns for this show, such as Ponyville, Canterlot, Manehattan, Fillydelphia, au Vanhoover. wewe can also create your own towns like I have. Here's a orodha of towns I created for my fanfictions

St. Foalis - St. Louis
San Francisco - San Franciscolt
Norfoal - Norfolk
Chicagoat - Chicago

Other times, I use real city names for my fanfictions, like Cheyenne, Denver, Portland, and the town that I currently live in, Frenchtown.

2. Characters

wewe can't have a story without characters. Well... wewe could, but it would be boring. If wewe can't think of a creative gppony, pony name for your OC, try and use real names. That's what I've done with most of my OC's. Also, it's important to have a picture of your OC in the fanfiction so that the readers can understand what he/she looks like.

3. The type of story

There are many ways wewe can write a fanfiction. wewe can make a..

Comedy
Drama
Action
Adventure
Creepy pasta, tambi
Clop fic
Crossover

Comedy is the best type of fanfiction to write if wewe know a lot of good jokes. Keep your readers laughing as they enjoy all of the good humor in what you've written.

Drama is not a good type of fanfiction. From what I've heard, Drama is when wewe have a ordinary activity, filled with anger, shouting, and sometimes, punching someone in the face. au in this case, punching somepony in the face.

Action fanfictions can be very good, as long as wewe don't make it too violent. Entertain everyone kusoma your fanfiction kwa adding...

Gunfights
Car chases
Huge explosions behind a gppony, pony walking away with sunglasses
A fistfight on juu of a moving train
A fistfight on juu of a moving plane

This isn't all wewe need to fill your fanfiction with loads of action, but once wewe get started, you'll find zaidi ways to add action into your fanfictions.

Adventure fanfictions can be about many things, such as treasure hunts, searches for Lost artifacts, au huge ripoffs of the Daring Do vitabu that upinde wa mvua Dash loves to read. I haven't written an adventure fanfiction yet, but I plan to start, kwa creating an OC who turns out to be Daring Do's son.

Creepypasta is for bronies/pegasisters that like uandishi things about ponies being turned into cupcakes, au about Big Macintosh raping the CMC while killing them at the same time. If you're going to write a fanfiction like that, don't do it on this website. That's the last thing we need!

Clopfics are loathed kwa most people on this website. Basically, clop fics are about porn/rule 34. It may be perfect for Rarity, but not for us!

Crossover fanfictions are where wewe make a crossover of My Little Pony, with anything your moyo desires. Most of my fanfictions are crossovers, mostly of sinema I like to watch.

4. The way to write a fanfiction

There are two ways of uandishi a fanfiction. The correct way, au the wrong way.

The wrong way is this.

"Hello." alisema Vinyl Scratch

This is like watching a movie in black & white. wewe get your readers bored, just before they finish the first paragraph.

The correct way is this.

Pinkie Pie soon saw Maud.

Pinkie Pie: Guten tag!
Maud: *Looks at Pinkie* Oh... Hey.

It's quicker to write like this, and it's zaidi popular. However, wewe can't write like this in real life, unless it's for a play. However, this is the internet. Feel free to write like this, no one will stop you.

5. A plot

wewe must think about what's going to happen in your story. What's the goal? What's the conflict? How does it end? Here's an example from one of my fanfictions I wrote last year

Hedgehog In Ponyville Episode 8

On my deviantart, it's caleed Hedgehog In Ponyville: The Nazis Strike Back

The plot: Twilight Sparkle turns evil, and helps a scientist named Doctor Robotnik capture Princess Celestia. What they don't know is that somepony is disguised as Celestia. Spike, and Luna tell Sean, and Shredder about this, and have them try to rescue Celestia, while destroying the ngome she is being held in.

Conflicts: Diamond Tiara, and Silverspoon jiunge them, but are double agents, working for Nazi Forces. upinde wa mvua Dash joins Sean, and Shredder, but loses to Twilight in a sword fight.
Diamond Tiara, and Silverspoon knock out Shredder, and attempt to escape from Sean. He needs to fight the two fillies on juu of a cable car.

Ending: A very close friend of Twilight is on the plane that Sean, Shredder, and their team gets on board. He attempts to kill Sean, but realizes that his plan fails, then jumps out of the plane without a parachute.

Now that wewe have seen the example, it shoudn't be difficult to make the plot, conflicts, and ending of your fanfiction.

That's all there is to it when it comes to uandishi a fanfiction. I wish wewe the best of luck on your future fanfictions. Everyone has their own talent, but anyone can write.

The end.
 Shredder, singer, and guitarist of Green Hay.
Shredder, singer, and guitarist of Green Hay.
Dash made it up to me kwa making out with me, then we went to a Green nyasi, nyasi kavu concert. Shredder just joined as the lead guitarist, and singer.

Rainbow Dash: This is the best band ever.
Sean: No kidding.
Green Hay: *playing instruments*
Shredder: Shut your mouth 'cause wewe talk too much and I don't give a damn anyway
You always seem to be steppin in shit and all wewe do is complain
Hitch a ride tell 'em all wewe like. Small minds tend to think a like
Shut your mouth cause your talking too much and I don't give a fuck anyway
Let yourself go, let yourself go, let yourself go X4
Rainbow Dash: What'd I say?
Sean:...
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 upinde wa mvua Dash in corner
Rainbow Dash in corner
"Well I think I am going to enjoy going to sleep" upinde wa mvua Dash says to Scootaloo. "Ha, yeah" the machungwa, chungwa filly says to her sister. "And! .....if wewe get out of kitanda I'll know!" The Cyan Pegasus alisema with a stern look on her face.

"Me?? ...no Dash, I won't" Scoots replied. As both of them went to sleep in seperate rooms, Scootaloo still had one eye open. As she listened to make sure her upinde wa mvua sis. Was asleep. She carefully pulled off the blankets and made an effort to be as quiet as possible.

The little Pegasus filly was walking down the hall silently passed her sister's bedroom. She came...
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When the troops saw that there was one loss. their leader, General Sky Night, wanted a remedy in the air since most Pegasi were having conflicts at the time. The General thought that if air balloons have been used for travel, the Ponyville military should find new air machines that could be used for battles. Pin tail and Green Flame were excited when they heard about the general's idea. Both the scout and infantry gppony, pony had joy inaonyesha on their faces and wanted to begin immediately on the inventions....
We got to the train, and saw some griffons wiith zaidi unicorns.

Vinyl Scratch: Where are wewe taking us?
Griffon 3894: None of your business! Uh Gilda where are we taking them again?
Gilda: Across this bridge into San Francisco. Don't kill all of the ponies we need one unicorn to get back into Equestria.
Griffon 3894: Allright.
Griffon 3987: What about the bomb?
Gilda: Detonate it once wewe get the train across the bridge.
Rainbow Dash: A bomb?
Sean: This can't be good. We have to prevent that train from crossing the bridge.
Twilight: How?
Sean: kwa derailing it.
Celestia: But what about our horns?...
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"I can't believe it is krisimasi Eve,YAY! I can't wait to decorate your house,Cotton Swirls!"said Azura Alor. "We can go decorate right now,let's go!"said Cotton Swirls. When they all arrive at a her house,they started taking out all of the krisimasi decorations. "We should decorate tommorrow,you know. Because...it is krisimasi tommorrow."says applejack as she looks around the room. "I do not think that is a very good idea,since krisimasi Eve today."said Score Heights.

Meari Otenbasan saw a video game console so she ran to it as fast as she can. "Hey,Score Heights! I found some Video Games!"she...
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 Toothy
Toothy
Chapter 5: talk about eye candy

it was to weeks after Pop and Cub got to Ponyville, Cub came back, none of the ponies understood the system but they were glad it existed. “i wonder who's coming today.” Flippy thought. “hmm......judging kwa who has come already............either Cuddles, Giggles au Toothy are next, too many killers have come.”

“hey Flippy, could wewe help me with something?” Twilight asked.

“what is it, I was thinking of who's coming today.”

“well, someone is coming today and they want a party but Pinkie is sick.” Twilight explained.

“oh my god, with what?”...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
"About time." Dash alisema very angry. "I wanted to make it look like they killed us." I explained, "but they'll probably find out were alive soon." As we drove to the apartment where Dash's Marafiki were the car ran out of gas. "I've got zaidi gas in the trunk." I alisema going to get the car refueled. When I started refueling the car, snow fell. "How did Robotnik get his army?" upinde wa mvua Dash asked. I knew she would ask me about Robotnik, but not about his army. I started telling her, "Robotnik came up with a bunch of badniks in his factory. Then there is his nephew, he doesn't do much, but he is smart....
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
The inayofuata morning, I woke up to see upinde wa mvua Dash smiling at me. "Hey," I say to upinde wa mvua dash. "Good morning," she replies, I guess she got over losing to me in a race, which i don't think would be a good idea to remind her. I leave upinde wa mvua Dash's house to go have breakfast then that's when i end up at Sweet apple Acres. I notice Applebloom with her Marafiki Sweetie Belle, and Scootaloo. They seem impressed with the car i was in, thinking i built it myself. I get out of the car, and thats when they start asking me maswali about the car. When did I build it? How did i build it? The answer is...
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So, I think it's pretty clear what this is going to be about kwa kusoma the title, but I have to get it out. Have to tell wewe guys.
So, when I first watched the onyesha my life was great! I loved it anyway. But soon as I got less into it, my life started to get plain and dull. I got trapped into the hopelessness that wewe feel when you're depressed. I wrote about how I felt, I thought about telling people, but I couldn't I was afraid everyone would see me as some freak.
I started becoming really quiet everywhere. I went to school and did my work. Not getting into anyone's business and not even bothering...
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posted by Mylittlecute12
Discord: hujambo pinkie pie
Pinkie: discord oh no u won't fool me this time!
Discord: Remember how u were when u were a filly sad and no smiling!
Pinkie: yeah and why do u ask!!
Discord: well maybe u will like to be a filly again au maybe forever!!! (makes pinkie pie a filly)
filly pinkie: hey!!!!
Discord: ur time is running out!!!!! (evil laughing)
............................................................................... discord; hujambo applejack take this (makes applejack a filly)

to be continued..........
posted by Grimms-Dragon
This is my first attempt so please kubeba with me. Please read, review, and enjoy.

GRIDLOCKED
BY THE YOUNG AND FREE DRAGON

I watched wewe walk away
Hopeless, with nothing left to say
I strain my eyes
Hoping to see wewe again

-My Curse kwa Killswitch Engage

CHAPTER ONE: MUSINGS ON A GEMSTONE

Spike gnawed at the gemstone that he had been sent as an anonymous present. He had been suspicious of the present when he received it but he was overjoyed to see a stone inside. With his sharp little teeth at work now, trying to break piece off. It taste extremely sweet but it was extremely hard. He had of course wondered...
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Theme song: link

Seanthehedgehog Presents

The Adventures Of upinde wa mvua Dash

Based off the TV Show, Adventures Of Sonic The Hedgehog

Starring the fastest pegasus in all of Equestria, upinde wa mvua Dash

Her German sidekick, Pinkie Pie

The main villian, Discord

Discord's sidekicks: Screwball, Karl, and Kyle

Episode 5

Discord's Dream Machine

We begin at Discord's base of operations, where he rebuilt Celestia's old ngome in the everfree forest, for himself.

Screwball: I got something important to tell you.
Discord: Well spit it out! I can't wait all day.
Screwball: upinde wa mvua Dash has a friend making this...
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posted by SkyheartPegasus
Ahem.
Before wewe say "Bats is an awesome episode," yes, I know it is. It's beautifully animated and has a decent plot, plus a really good song. I don't hate it, but there's a few little things. I also loved Fluttershy being a vampire/bat. But it's only how the Mane 6,minus Fluttershy, acted that pissed me off. And this is only for the first part of the episode. (I didn't really care after the song) Now, without further ado, let's hear my thoughts.

3. Twilight Sparkle. Seriously, "Princess" Twilight, you're being a total jerk. Why not settle the argument kwa just simply TALKING it out? Why not...
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Meanwhile on some isolated island in Japan.

Japanese gppony, pony 87: This isrand is three mires away from Japan's nearest civirization.
Japanese gppony, pony 35: And we have rots of ponies in our mafia, that are wirring to kirr you. So terr us what we need to know.
Sean: *Tied up in chair* That all depends. What do wewe want to know?
Japanese gppony, pony 35: We want to know arr about why wewe have been pranning to attack Discord. Japa the Nese is very crose Marafiki with Discord, and he doesn't arrow anyone to kirr them.
Sean: He has been threatining average ponies, like wewe guys, with death, slavery, and violence....
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added by karinabrony
Source: Equestria Daily
added by NocturnalMirage
Source: EQD, joyreactor
added by NocturnalMirage
Source: original owners, EQD, tumblr, Google
I was riding the bike down the road. I was thinking about where I wanted to go, but...

Sean: *stops bike, and sees swiss alps* Switzerland. *checks gas tank*

I had enough gas, and I went as fast as I could on that bike.

On another bike...

Sigmund: *Arrives at trainstation*
Engineer: *Reading orders*
Sigmund: *Goes on platform*

* * *

Nazis: *Hanging around*
Sean: *Riding past*
Nazi: Hey. Holen Sie sich hier.
Sean: *Stops bike, then turns around*
Nazi: Was ist mit dem grauen Gesicht? Und Ihre Uniform sieht schrecklich aus.
Sean: *Kicks Nazi*
Nazi: Hey!
Sean: *Rides away*
Nazis: *Grab rifles, and shoot*
Sean:...
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While me, and applejack were in the cooler, the other prisoners met kwa one of the huts.

Sigmund: These guys mean business.
Volk: They really showed us who's boss.
Pablo: It's only the first siku Volk, relax.

Suddenly, two cars showed up kwa the entrance to the camp. In one car, was three Nazis, and the other one had two changelings, and a pony.

Shredder: *Looking at cars*
Jade: Don't pay too much attention, they'll notice us.
Sacred Symphony: I'll go tell the princess. *Walks into hut*

Inside Gilda's office

Gilda: *Signing papers*
Changelings, and Nazis: *walk in*
Queen Chrysalis: *Puts suitcase on...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Theme song for this fanfic: link

HEDGEHOG IN PONYVILLE

Episode VIII

The Nazis Strike Back

Things are not going well for the gppony, pony Alliance. Despite defeating Dr. Robotnik who has teamed up with Discord, Twilight Sparkle has decided to abandon the mane 6, and help the Nazis take over Canterlot.

After their success, Twilight has made plans to get the griffons, and changelings to jiunge their army. Once that is done, they will make their attempt to rule all of Equestria

Our hero, Sean The Hedgehog is with his girlfriend upinde wa mvua Dash. They were sleeping when this all happened.

Nazi pilots: *flying...
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