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That's one of the biggest issue shabiki fiction communities faces: Incorrect spelling, grammar and punctuation. wewe can have the best and most creative plot around, but if your story has too much spelling and grammar mistakes, most readers will hit the back button. These things matter a lot, and the problem is, many writers don't realize that. A story needs to look appealing in order for a reader to like it. Readers should be able to get sucked into the story, but when there is wrong spellings and punctuation everywhere, they can't get pulled into the story, because every mistake is reminding them that it's just a fanfiction.

There are reasons why a person can't have good grammar. Maybe English isn't their first language. au maybe they're just bad in spelling and grammar. There's nothing wrong with that. No one is going to make fun of wewe for that. However, If wewe don't have confidence in your spelling and grammar strength while uandishi a story, don't just think that "Oh, there's nothing to do about it" and just publish the fic like that. If wewe think that your story needs editing and proofreading of any kind, here's what I think is the best and easiest solution to that problem:

Get a beta. It's free, it's easy, and doesn't require any grammar skills in your part. The beta will do it all for you. There are hundreds and hundreds betas out there at ff.net, each with different strengths. Choose a beta that suits your need; wewe want someone to fix your tenses and punctuation, choose a beta who is good at that. wewe want a beta who can make character dialogues sound realistic, you'll find one if wewe look carefully. A beta will do anything and everything on the process of making your story better. That's what their job is.

Don't laze off. If you've taken your time and put some effort into uandishi your story, don't ruin it for yourself. Don't think, "It's too much work to get a beta. I'll just post it like this." wewe want to make your story seem readable and likable to readers. Readers wants to see stories that are good and not filled with errors. I know a few people that have some very brilliant and creative plots, but when wewe try to read the story, wewe don't enjoy it very much because of all the mistakes popping up in every single sentence.

There's nothing wrong with getting help. Like I alisema in my awali article, getting a beta can be fun and a very good experience. They give wewe suggestions and tips, things in your story that wewe can replace to make it flow better, and generally are there to help wewe out. wewe don't even have to be bad at grammar and spelling au anything else to get a beta. I have a friend over at ff.net who herself is a beta yet gets an editor for her own stories. Why? Simply because she thinks another person's outlook and view on the story will do her fanfics good. And I agree.

So the inayofuata time wewe think that your fanfic needs editing of some sort, whether it be with the flow of the story, the grammar and punctuation, the dialogues, the tenses, anything, consider getting a beta.
Caroline was inaonyesha the new moves to the cheerleaders, when she saw Tyler heading her way from the corner of her eye. “Okay, practice is over. Nelly, you’re going to have to practice that spin” she said, before quickly walking away.
“Caroline!” Tyler shouted. He knew she was walking away because of him. “Caroline!” he shouted a bit harder, but Caroline just continued ignoring him. “I didn’t see wewe last night at Homecoming”
Caroline stopped, but didn’t bother turning around. “That’s because your eyes were glued onto Virginia” she alisema snarky.
“Veronica” Tyler...
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Elena gazed upon Damon’s face. She gave him a soft kiss on his lips and stood up then. She walked to the doorway and leaned against the open door.
Damon opened his eyes and sat up when he saw Elena lurking at him. “What are wewe looking at?” he smirked.
“I’m looking at my boyfriend” Elena smiled mischievous. “The one I had great makeup sex with last night. Though I did most of it”
Damon raised his eyebrows. “Are wewe kidding?” Elena shook her head. “No. I mean wewe were just lying there” She opened her satin dressing kanzu, gown and revealed a blue bra and matching panties. “Want...
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Elena and Derek were both in the Boarding House. Elena was wearing matching trousers and shati and her hair was in a ponytail. There was a determined expression on her face and she aimed a stake at Derek. He grabbed her arm and turned it around.
“Oww, oww, oww” Elena moaned and Derek let go of her.
“You’re going to have to be a lot faster” Derek reproached.
Elena drove the stake in his stomach and he gasped. “Is that fast enough?” Derek nodded and he pulled the stake out. He gave it back to Elena. “Do wewe need blood?” Elena asked.
“I’m good” Derek said. He lifted his...
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“Bonnie?” Damon shouted. “Bonnie, where are you? Get back here!” But when nothing happened he understood he had to do this himself. He looked up at the chains and started pulling with all his strength. It hurt immensely, but he couldn’t stop. If this pain was necessary to be with Elena, he would go through it.
After a few minutes, that felt like hours, his right hand was liberated. Without hesitating he pulled his left arm and this time it took less time to free himself.
Then everything went black.
Damon opened his eyes and found himself outside on the spot where Bonnies house used to be. He looked at his arms. They had healed. He scribbled up and looked around. He felt different, like he’d been born again. Elena. He had to see Elena. And so he started walking in the direction of the Boarding House. He could sense she was there.
The inayofuata morning.
A buzzing sound, coming from Caroline’s pedestal cupboard woke her up and she opened her eyes. She took her phone and opened it. She had received a message from an unknown person.
“I know what wewe are and we will destroy you” she read aloud. She swung her legs off the kitanda and searched for her ring. When she had found it she put it on and walked to the window. She shoved the curtain and stared outside.
The sky was grey. It seemed like it was going to rain.
Caroline opened the window and climbed over the edge.
“Game on, bitch” she mumbled, before she jumped and landed gracefully on the pavers.
Someone banged the door and Rachel jumped up. She ran to the door and opened it. Ronnie was standing in front of her, covered in blood and crying.
“Can I please come in?” she asked careful.
“Yeah, of course” Rachel alisema and she stepped aside. She closed the door. “What happened? Who did this to you?”
Ronnie wiped her eyes. “Stefan Salvatore and a vampire named Rebekah. They held me in their basement and tortured me. They couldn’t eat me, because there’s vervain in my blood, but they sliced and cut in me”
“I’ll take wewe to the hospital” Rachel alisema and she grabbed her...
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Bonnie was sitting with Keith in the cafeteria, having lunch, when a nurse came her way. “You have a visitor”
“I’m eating” Bonnie replied.
“He alisema it was urgent” the nurse said.
“Fine then” Bonnie alisema and she stood up and followed the nurse. When she got back at her room she had to pinch herself to make sure she was not hallucinating.
“What are wewe doing here?” Bonnie asked very surprised.
“You thought I wouldn’t figure it out?” Damon asked arrogant.
“You didn’t” Bonnie shook her head. “Katherine did”
Damon made a step forward. “How do wewe know that?...
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“What the hell are wewe doing here?” he asked shaking.
“I’m just paying Elena a visit” Katherine alisema casual. “That’s all”
“How dare wewe come around here?” Damon said. “After what wewe did? wewe attacked Elena, wewe almost got me killed”
“I tried to convince wewe to drink blood, but Rebekah compelled you” Katherine tried to explain. “Which is why I told wewe wewe have to drink vervain again”
“I want wewe gone” Damon alisema threatening. “I want wewe out of our lives, for good”
Katherine shook her head. “You need me, Damon”
“No, I don’t” Damon disagreed. “I...
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The inayofuata morning.
It was still very early and the sun hadn’t gone up completely yet. Nevertheless, there seemed to be quite some activity down in the woods. The night before sheriff Liz Forbes had received an anonymous phone call, giving her the exact location of where to find the body of Gabe Lindy. Liz had heard the voice before. It had been the same person who told her where the bodies of the Lindy sisters were. So it was pretty obvious that whoever the caller was, they were the murderer au at least they knew who did it.
“What do wewe got here?”
Liz would never get used to her daughter...
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Damon got back fast enough to see Caroline close the door behind her. He entered and almost hit the door against Caroline’s head.
“Hey, watch it” she alisema a little jumpy.
“Sorry” Damon growled. “I’m a little tensed” He walked to the bed, where Matt was sitting on a chair.
“Where’s Jeremy?” Elena asked sharp-looking at Damon.
“I left him with that female doctor. She knows him” Damon answered.
Elena smirked. “Well, are wewe the caring type” she alisema sarcastic.
“Right now I care zaidi for wewe than for your little bro, that’s true” Damon commented, getting mad,...
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Matt parked the car on the parking lot of the clinic and looked at Caroline. “What are we doing here?”
“Visiting a friend who can help Elena” Caroline alisema avoiding.
“What friend are wewe talking about?” Matt asked careful, though he had a suspicion. And since Caroline consciously looked away, he knew his suspicion was true. “Wow. She’s been here all this time? No wonder we haven’t seen her anywhere”
Caroline turned to Matt. “You can’t tell anyone” she alisema sharp. “If Elena finds out, she won’t be happy”
Matt raised his hands. “She won’t hear it from me”
They...
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When Caroline walked behind the corner, where she had parked her car, she collided to someone. She sighed deeply. “Can’t wewe watch were you’re going?” she alisema annoyed, not noticing who she had bumped into.
“I’m sorry” Matt mumbled a little offended. Caroline looked up. “Oh, it’s you” she alisema in some kind of apologizing way.
“Are wewe going somewhere?” Matt asked, nodding at Caroline’s car. Caroline frowned her eyebrows; that was so none of his business. “Because I was actually heading to the hospital to see Elena” Matt explained himself. “I was wondering if...
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Bonnie stared upset at Caroline, when a shadow came over them.
“Can I jiunge you, girls?” Keith asked. Caroline looked up and recognized him. “This is kind of private” she alisema sharp.
Keith raised his hands. “Hey, if this is about bloodsuckers and moonwalkers and wicked witches, I know all about it” he alisema with a wink.
Caroline quickly turned to Bonnie. “You told him?”
“He already knew” Bonnie sighed.
Caroline looked back at Keith. “Well, it’s not about that, but it’s still private”
“No, Caroline, it’s okay. Keith’s the only friend I have in here” Bonnie said....
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Katherine was lying on juu of the sheets. She was sweating all over her body and was having flashbacks from when she first met Stefan. She got out of kitanda and raised her hand. Smiling at an imaginary Stefan she slowly spun around.
A hard knock on the door and she came back to reality. The door opened and the doctor came in, holding a piece of paper in his hand.
“Miss Gilbert, why are wewe out of bed?” he asked frowning.
Katherine stared at him, which kind of creeped him out. He looked at the paper and inhaled deeply. “I’m afraid I have bad news” he started. Then he looked up again. “Eh,...
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“I’m lying if I say I never wanted to hurt him, because I did. That was all I could think of” Bonnie started. “I wanted to punish him for all the things he’d done. I wanted to make him suffer like he made others suffer”
“What did he do? And why couldn’t wewe hand him over to the police?” Keith asked curious.
Bonnie pulled the sheets. These were the maswali she wasn’t sure how to answer. If she answered the first one, she’d put Damon in a bad daylight and that wasn’t the way to forgiveness. If she answered the second, she’d expose him.
“He did some bad things” she...
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These doors need to be oiled, Keith thought as he opened the door of Bonnies room. He walked to the kitanda and sank down.
Bonnie turned on her back in her kitanda and opened her eyes a bit. When she saw Keith her eyes widened and she sat straight.
“What the hell are wewe doing here? Go away! I’m going to call security! Get out!” she hissed.
“Ssshh” Keith said. “I’m just here to watch wewe sleep. Isn’t that romantic?”
“No!” Bonnie whispered loud. “Not if you’re the one watching”
“So, you’re not going to sleep, because I am here?” Keith asked. “Well, in that case, we might...
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Elena was lying on a hospital, surrounded kwa her friends. She was awake and a little annoyed.
“I’m fine, I want to go home” she said.
“You fainted, Elena. wewe need to slow down a bit” Caroline alisema bossy.
“I just have a low blood pressure, which is no surprise” Elena alisema pointing at her neck.
“Well, the doctor wants wewe to stay here for the night” Stefan said. “And I agree with him”
“This is a conspiracy” Elena alisema grumpy.
“We can stay if wewe want” Jeremy suggested.
“And stop me from leaving, right” Elena said, figuring her brother out. “No, wewe can all leave,...
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Elena, Jeremy and Ric were sitting at the jikoni meza, jedwali having dinner. Well, Jeremy was eating. Elena was stirring in her chakula and Alaric was looking at her.
“If wewe wanted mashed potatoes wewe could’ve asked” he said. Elena looked up distracted. “What? No, it’s good. It’s really nice” she said.
“How would wewe know?” Alaric asked. “You didn’t eat yet”
“It looks really nice” Elena alisema shrugging.
“If you’re not hungry, that’s fine” Alaric said. “You don’t have to eat. But if there’s something else, I want wewe to tell me”
Elena looked down at her plate,...
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Katherine looked at Klaus trying not to look too guilty. If Klaus knew she was trying to boycott him, she’d be dead.
“You’re here, finally” Klaus said.
“You summoned me” Katherine said. “Why?”
“I wanted wewe to see it with your own eyes” Klaus said. He conjured a flask filled with blood. “This is Jason” Klaus said, throwing his arm over an unfamiliar man. “Jason is a werewolf”
“And you’re about to change that?” Katherine guessed.
“Yeah, but there’s a little problem” Klaus alisema sinister. He bit his arm and forced the blood on Jason. Then he snapped his neck....
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Damon was still lying on the kitanda when a shadow came over him and he opened his eyes difficult. “Elena?” he alisema weak. Katherine shook her head. “It’s me” she said. She took his shoulder and helped him sit up. She took the glass of bourbon from the table. “You should drink something”
“Shouldn’t wewe tell me to drink blood?” Damon asked sarcastic.
“If wewe don’t want to it’s your business” Katherine alisema and she held the glass in front of Damon. He wanted to take it out her hands, but she refused to gave it to him. “I’ll do it” she said. “Katherine? I’m not...
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