i wrote a poem about music..plz tell me what u think :)

The Reverie of Music

It Takes wewe to a place nobody has ever seen, but you.
It can make wewe feel a way that nothing else can make wewe feel.
It can make wewe weep au giggle.
This is a place where no one will understand it but me.
It’s a place free of sorrow and pain.
A blanket of joy and nothing but upendo wrapped around you.
This feeling can’t be described.
It’s like medicine to cure an illness au a bandage to heal a womb.
As I lay with my headphones in my ears, it’s like im drifting somewhere above the sky and the stars that no one has control over but me.
I sink into a pool full of fantasies and dreams full of no ones thoughts but mine.
I’m in a place where there’s no such thing as impossible and cant.
I’m in a place where reality doesn’t live and life is forever.
And when that track ends, anything that was something falls,
But who alisema it had to end.