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Story/Main plot:So we start out with our villains. Finding out the defeat of Sunset the demon. Well, the upinde wa mvua magic. And somehow no one else notices it.....why?I guess demands it. Anyway back to the story. We seem to be in the CHS, Where we are seeing the students get ready for the "battle of the bands". First part of it at least. Since Celestia is a troll she reminds everyone of the dance. Everyone so how gets the urge to look at Sunset in a angry face. Huh, Nicely played Celestia. uigizaji innocent while giving one of our students a hard time. So after that scene we cut into the main 5 practicing their song. And like always it's bland, uninteresting and a song that really reminds wewe of the theme song. Anyway after we are done with that mess of a song. We see Flash doing nothing but reminding us of our horror days. upinde wa mvua Dash shows pride and vanity like always but is overplayed and it makes he seem like an antagonist. But I already talked about that so lets just songesha on. This scene is really painful to sit through. So, we see Sunset giving a tour to the Dazzlings. They of course aren't that settle with it and act like obvious villains. Sunset acts oblivious to it. And just act like she can't see right through the act. And kwa the way, "Jem and the Holograms" rip-off designs. Seriously that's the first thing that comes through anyone's mind once seeing the outfits. Strange isn't it? The inayofuata scene Sunset admits that she isn't an oblivious idiot. And tells the main six about what she thought about how strange they are acting. We get an awesome song along with some stellar animation. kwa the way the uhuishaji for this movie is one of the best works on mlp that they did so far. The Main six tells her about what they saw. And of course the plot needs Celestia not to believe that so yeah.....Fail. We get back to the gppony, pony world. Twilight is visited kwa the mail gppony, pony wanting to know where to put some books. Huh, I wonder if the mail gppony, pony got Lost while bring her the books. Anyway they find a glowing book. Read it and our main plot starts. We are told about the story of the sirens aka the rip-off of the windigos. After we hear the rip-off story we get treated to we see a part with a lot of problems in it.First problem, Twilight so happens to have the materials to build that.Problem number two, How did she get it right in one try that fast and not make a single mistake.problem number 3, when did Twilight get the skill of building all the sudden. This is just building up on how close she's to her stereo-type in this movie. And it is really making her look so bland and boring in my opinion. Problem number 4, Why didn't the others help surely it will make a lot sense if they did. Since it will explain why she got done so quick and flawless like. Pro-o-o-blem nuuuuuuuuummmmmm. *computer broke* Oh, Come on there's not that much problems with this scene. *fixes computer*. (sorry for another one of my horrid jokes that doesn't make much sense since my computer should have been already broken, But thanks for sitting kwa and listening.) Anyway another "the plot needs it". Wait, Spike joined with Twilight I didn't even notice him in the movie. Just to onyesha how too much attention is on the others. They meet up with Twilight. And they tell each other what is new. Some how no one is curious why some upinde wa mvua kid turns into a house like creature. I guess they just think it's just really good effects. We get to see a little bit of filler. Then we have Twilight attempting to use the magic of friendship.*laughs* I must admit there's a it of problems with this scene. But this moment is so funny I almost forgave it. for all the problems they have with this scene. But I'm still, questioning what Twilight's plan was exactly?Next scene we are treated to a moment when the Dazzlings go to the conclusion that they have the magic of friendship even through what the main six tried to do didn't work at all. If anything it proved the opposite. But, I guess wewe never know. We are now in my inayopendelewa part of the movie. The "Slumber party in pinkie's house" If I'm allowed to name this part. So when we are in the slumber party in a wither cute scene it does add variety and complexity to both Twilight and Sunset. So I see no reason to do anything but boast about it. In other words I am moving on since this part is flawless.We skip to the inayofuata siku where they are practicing. Twilight sounds off for some reason. And please don't give me that it was her first time trying the song thing. Cause there's many ways I can disagree with that number one it alisema that she could sing out of thin air and can stay in good melody out of the random. They also alisema that she tried many times and does know the melody. So yeah, It doesn't make any sense why she can't sing. We skip to another bland song. I think Moliminous points out the problem I have with this scene.
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We are now doing the rip-off of EG. kwa copying the hall way scene. The Dazzlings play their song that's extremely catchy. After that we get an awesome Trixie moment with her calling out the Rainbooms. Even through she's being antagonistic like always i still have a hard time not liking her. Well, It's her charm in her character so I shouldn't be surprised. Whoa, Where did this huge stage come from? It was never mentioned in EG. Another whoa, for Derpy to be in Trixie's band. I know it's a little hard to recognize her without her classic eyes. But, That's clearly her au I'm just losing my mind kwa all the Derpy stuff people has been daydreaming about. Anyway Trixie traps them under the stage. Where we see them be there for a lot of hours in a pretty good shape actually. None of them had need to use a bathroom au anything, au they needed some drinks au food, not freaking out, How are they so calm and collected?By the way Twilight why don't wewe know anything about friendship once wewe learned so much about it in the last 4 seasons and a movie? Shouldn't wewe know what is going on your Marafiki are obviously fighting? How can wewe be so Oblivious? wewe know Twilight wewe are almost as oblivious as Elsa and that's saying something.So they get out because of Vinyl. How did Spike get her attention if she can ignore a big fight against the school, new kids with jeweler that is spilling out green smog, everyone dancing around in the middle of lunch, and pretty much anything that should have been easy to notice is totally missed because she's way too into her headphones. So how did Spike get her attention?*checks how far the movie* So we are now almost at the end of the movie good. We have the final showdown and yeah I think the Rainbooms did a pretty good job this time around and like always Dazzlings were awesome.*Sees Sunset turn into one of the element of harmony*...Oh, That explains why Sunset wasn't under the spell see I was wondering the first time that I watched the movie. But, the problem with this is that it raises a lot zaidi problems then just one. First problem, Didn't it has to be shown that wewe are one of the elements like they did in the first two episodes of MLP:FIM. If it was already shown what element is she exactly. And Twilight how are wewe supposed to call the elements of harmony without the now seventh element? Does it only exist in the human world au something?If that's the case I guess that makes sense. A lot of the stuff this movie has makes zero sense in my opinion at least. And zaidi that I think about it. It doesn't really have much parts when there isn't a problem. The story is highly overrated kuvuka, msalaba that the movie itself is highly overrated. This has constant problems that is shown almost the whole movie. Oh, no not just one. We have different problems inaonyesha a new one each scene constantly. It was entertaining to watch. But that isn't near enough to redeem it.

Fluttershy's plot: This is a short plot and one that isn't all that interesting.It just there to make Fluttershy not seem like a background pony. I guess it does it job.If there was any focus on it at all. But, no there's zero focus on it She still seems like one of the background ponies. It also draws a little bit of sympathy/empathy. Which is exactly what we have way too much of on her character. And out of all the main 6 she's certainly the one we have most sympathy/empathy on. The only difference is that's the only thing is that the this plot does it in a almost invisible manner. And also has nothing that develops her character in anyway.So there's zero reason for this plot to even exist. I don't care if she couldn't get to play her song. Okay, I'm sounding a bit like a jerk now. Sorry, But this isn't that needed to add her own plot when the others don't have one and it doesn't really do anything unique. So there's no point in it. It just feels like they are giving her extra attention then the other group of the main six. It shouldn't be here. It's just inaonyesha how bad the characters are betrayed in this season. I guess I'm being too hard on it. It's cliched and does onyesha the characters at it worse. But, again it isn't that focus on and Fluttershy barely has any attention against the others in this movie. So, I might be over reacting to this. It isn't that bad and it does try to make her have zaidi focus. So I guess I should be fine about it. Sorry, about that rant.

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I really don't know why people don't notice any of the problems in this movie instead of the "Everything wrong with _____ in _ au less". But I guess the problems are really well hidden if that's the case. I don't know maybe it's because it's a musical au the fact that it's forcing on Sunset and Twilight's expectations being too low au high. But even through I know how much I sound like I hate the movie. I really don't hate it that much. Again I just strongly disliked it. Even through it's overrated and has a lot of problems when it comes to plots,logic and characters. It's easily something that can entertain any age group. The humor does have it weak points but most of the time it's spot on and actually unique. Okay not that unique. But, it's unique enough to at least find it funny. Most of the songs that weren't played kwa the rainbooms au should I alisema "rainbrooms". Yeah I know another horrible joke. But, there's nothing wewe can do about it. Magi(It's a fake creature I made up so don't expect to find it on the web) I need a protection use wewe secret powers to put an indivisible spell on me. *Nothing happens*.......Aw.......It didn't work. Oh well, I guess that's what wewe get if wewe let your imagination try to save you. Nothing happens, Well at least I'm not the one having to sit through this extra stuff that I'm posting until I actually get to my thoughts.*that gag that everyone uses to just to tell wewe to get on with it already*. um anyway I think this movie did have good things about it.First the obvious the uhuishaji was Disney worthy! Not kidding they really putted they best foot forward. This is the best they done since "magical mystery cure" ! Another highlight of the movie is Sunset she really shined in this movie. even through I think the movie forced on her too much. I guess I can forgive it since it was her movie after all.But,Still main character au not that's a lot of attention.Also we had some really sweet moments in this movie. Like when Twilight and Sunset is talking in the sleepover scene. ujumla, jumla I strongly disliked the movie. But I can easily see why people would like it in the first place. Even through I'm surprised that there isn't much criticism. In fact most of the reviews have the critics just praising it to death. Even through I don't like this movie it's still easy to see why the criticism is so low.
 Sean's new Canterlot Firebolt
Sean's new Canterlot Firebolt
It was a busy time on the highway from Ponyville to Fillydelphia. Another truck carrying drugs was in a hurry. It had to go to Filly as fast as possible, 100 miles an hour.

Sean: *driving Firebolt*
Nikki: *driving Wrestler*
Daredevil: *driving Supra*
Rainbow Dash: *driving Pegasus*

All four upgraded their cars, and Sean's Firebolt was new. Courtesy of the Canterlot car company.

Sean: Alright. Let's see what this baby can do! *goes 110*
Nikki: I can go faster then you! *Goes 120*
Daredevil: I'll go faster then both of you! *goes 130*
Rainbow Dash: wewe forgot about me *goes 140*
Sean: Ok. There's the...
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The Mafia may not be in Manehattan anymore, but it still lives on everywhere else. Especially in St. Foalis.

Dan: So wewe from where?
Sean: Mobius, it's another world.
Mike: Swag.
Rainbow Dash: Come on wewe guys.
Sean: I'll meet wewe there.
Pinkie Pie: I'm driving!
Sean: wewe always drive my car Pinkie.
Applejack: The rest of us will follow Sean.
Rainbow Dash: Ok.

All of the Ponyville Mafia eventually made it into St. Foalis. After defeating every other mafia in Manehattan there are three new ones to go against. Las Pegasus, Fillydelphia, and Baltimare.

Sean: This is a really great choice of a city...
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 "Are wewe bucking joking?!"
"Are you bucking joking?!"
upinde wa mvua Dash woke up in the morning and flew down to Sweet apple Acres. applejack was already knocking down apples into a bucket. "Morning Rainbow" AJ alisema to her mare friend. "You get started on that side as she pointed with her hoof. "Got it" the Pegasus alisema excitedly. It didn't take long before upinde wa mvua Dash got tired, "AJ..." She yelled over to the other side. "Yeah Rainbow?" The farmer gppony, pony asked. "I'm exhausted" Dash managed to shout. "Well...if wewe can holler, then get back to it" apple alisema to her. ," are wewe bucking joking?!" RD alisema as if surprised. "Yep, wewe alisema wewe wanted to help me". "Yeah but I didn't know this is how hard wewe worked every day" applejack stopped and walked over to her mare friend looking like she was coming over to hit her. "We'll Rainbow! I thought wewe wanted to help me?! If y'all don't, then get outta here!" Her country voice was starting to onyesha due to her anger. 
 "If y'all don't , then get outta here!"
"If y'all don't , then get outta here!"
After returning from St. Foalis we discovered that upinde wa mvua Dash was no where to be seen.

Sean: Where'd she go?
Pinkie Pie: She went to be with Scootaloo.

The two pegasi were at Cloudsdale celebrating for Scootaloo. She just passed flight school, and the two were having lunch together.

Scootaloo: Everypony thought I was amazing.
Rainbow Dash: They sure did. What kind of pizza do wewe want?
Scootaloo: One with sausage, and onions.
Rainbow Dash: Good choices. And to drink?
Scootaloo: I guess I'll have a Dr. Whoover.

Rainbow Dash went to order the pizza, and drinks when she noticed a alicorn fly by....
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Several dakika after beating up Diamond Tiara, applejack went back to her family's place.

granny smith: A.J. I just got a call from the cops saying that wewe beat up a filly.
Applejack: She made fun of Applebloom, and beat up a police officer.
granny smith: Well that doesn't mean wewe can beat the crap out of them.
Applejack: Yeah it does.

A few dakika after talking with granny smith, things got out of hand.

Rarity: Why am I here?
Applejack: Just keep an eye on them *floors it*
Applebloom: Applejack?! Where ya goin?
Applejack: *drives toward toll booth*
toll pony: 2 bits.
Applejack: *pays toll*...
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posted by Seanthehedgehog
Twilight helped Derpy & Octavia escape, then they were making their way off the boat.

Twilight: wewe two wait here. We need Pinkie since she has the map.
Octavia: Oh perfect. wewe better get her quickly.
Twilight: Pinkie? Come here.
Pinkie Pie: *hops toward Twilight* Guten Tag Twilight. *laughs*
Twilight: Stop speaking german, and come with me.
Pinkie Pie: Nein, ich bin Deutsch, damit ich sie sprechen kann, wenn ich will.
Twilight: What? *kidnaps Pinkie* Row!
Octavia: Can't wewe use magic to teleport us?
Twilight: I can, but I'm not teleporting wewe guys.
Derpy: Aaawww.
Tourist gppony, pony 4: *drives...
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 Lightning Dust spriniting though woods
Lightning Dust spriniting though woods
When Pin Tail shot the insane gppony, pony in the sekunde story, the troops left the house. Once General Sky Night thought he heard something, Sky alisema ,"I think we should songesha towards the back of the house". Scootaloo asked worried ,"was there someone up there with them?"

"Probably.." Green interrupted "I thought I saw another shadow near the jikoni on the first floor" he finished. "So then we are going to have to go into the Dungeon woods then" The general told them. 

After their conversation the Ponyville military went into the woods and searched for the enemy gppony, pony that escaped the battle. It only...
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I am about to parachute out of an airplane with Rarity, Pinkie Pie, and upinde wa mvua Dash. This could be interesting.

Sean: *looks out window*
Rarity: We're going to jump soon.
Sean: Why don't wewe three go first?
Rarity: That's nice of you.
Pinkie Pie: Green light go!

Soon the four of us jump out of the plane deploying our parachutes, getting ready to defend Manehattan from the griffons. Back at Canterlot

Twilight: Griffons!
Fluttershy: Oh my *trembling in fear*
Celestia: Theres over a dozen of them! ATTACK!
ponies: *fire guns at griffons*
griffons: *fire back* FOR GILDA!!
soldier: *shoots machine gun*
Two...
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The once lived a young filly named Alice. She was a strange little filly, always curious about everything, especially what her cutie mark was going to be. One siku she decided to go and find it. As she was exploring around the edge of the everfree forest, she saw a mwana-, mwana-punda hopping around like a rabbit. "Where are wewe going?" She called, "My name is Alice and why are wewe jumping up and down?"
"No time to talk," He sounded nervous. "I am very late and if that bird doesn't get here soon-" He gulped "it's off with my head." His cutie mark was a dhahabu pocket watch and if wewe looked closely, wewe could...
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Hello everypony! Since wewe people are so nice to me,I wanted to tell wewe some things wewe don't know about me!

1.)I upendo going to school. I like school because I get to learn new things everyday. I also like seeing my friends. I don't like recess because it is crazy. I wish our recess can either be kusoma au drawing.

2.)I want to be a brain surgeon when I grow up. I even have a book that I am studying and it is called Anotonomy 300°. I study it when I have time.

3.)I upendo the 60's music! Here is a orodha to prove it! They are my inayopendelewa songs.

I Get Around The beach, pwani Boys***
I'm A Believer The Monkees*...
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As we fly away the alarm sounds off, and it seems fine for us so far. Then five airplanes start to chase me, all of them are the same type that I'm flying. They try to shoot me, but I dodge their bullets, turn around, and shoot back at them. I nearly shot one of the pilots, breaking the glass of the cockpit. As I pass them, they turn around behind me once again. Soon I spot a mashua in a river under me. I fly towards it, and two of them follow me, the other three get above me. I get closer to the boat, as Joe tries to teleport us. "Not yet!" I tell him. Right when it looks like we're about to...
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posted by applejackrocks
The inayofuata morning In Canterlot at the hotel......

AJ: *wakes up* *yawn* good morning AJ!!
Pinkie: *wakes up* AHHHHHH!!!!
AJ: Whats wrong?
Pinkie: AJ!!
AJ: Yea?
Pinkie: *giggles* nothing....
AJ: please! tell me!
Pinkie: I just had the funniest dream
AJ: what happened?
Pinkie: wewe promise not to tell?
AJ: kuvuka, msalaba my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye!!!
Pinkie: okay then...I dreamed that Applebloom was the element of kindness, that Sweetie kengele was the element of genorasity, Scoot was the element of loyalty, and Princess Luna represented the element of magic. Hehe pretty funny eh?

AJ: No.....it aint...
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posted by epicskyrimfan56
i walk over to the mirror in the room. i stare at it. i see a light gray gppony, pony with brown hair in the mirror. i slowly songesha my hand and discover that pony.....is me. i scream at the juu of my lounges. then a yellow gppony, pony with pink hair enters the room. she asks in a frantic but suprisingly soft tone " oh goodness are wewe allright?" i respond as would anyone would and scream more. eventually she calms me down and explains who she is and everything. " so let me get this straight. wewe found me in the middle of a forest passed out and im in a world of talking ponies?" she says " uhm yes..." i think to myself that im in my show. and that i should find twilight sparkle. the gppony, pony introduces herself as fluttershy. shes a verry kind pony. she then brings me to town and introduces me to everypony. we all sit down and discuss what happened. we form a plan....
In Canterlot.....

AJ: we really appreciate wewe guard us here
Pinkie: Yeah!
Soldier: no problem
AJ: But how exacly did Princess Celestia died?
Soldier: wewe see, Princess Celestia, as always, was drinking chai with the Wonderbolts, but suddenly, Discord came...he had 4 other ponies in his hand...I just reconized a gppony, pony there, her name is Twilight Sparkle, a faithful student of the Princess. The Wonderbolts tried to stop Discord...but it was to late...He grabbed the Princess and flew off....before he left I saw Twilight's horn glow then she screamed out "Elements of Harmony! Princess Luna!!! The Cutie...
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It slithered out of the shadows and up to Dawn Bright's bed. It's eyes narrowed as it perpared to strike at its unsuspecting victim. That's when unicorn intution took over.

Dawn Bright didn't know why but suddenly she woke up. Staring her in the face was a snake, black as night. Dawn Bright screamed as she backed up against the wall. Even though she wasn't afraid of snakes, She was terrified of this one. It didn't look solid and had two front claws. It hissed, probably annoyed cause she woke up.

Dawn Bright had to think fast, the snake was already fast approaching. She concentrated on the snake....
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posted by xFluttershyx
"Okay, everypony", alisema Bluehooves. All we have to do is take the way out like we did last time."

"Follow me, everypony!" As soon as Constance alisema that, tje maze grew hedges that seperated everypony from each other.

Terra screamed.

"Calm down, Terra", Vanilla Twilight said. "Everything's okay."

Terra screamed, "No it's not! I'm seperated from everypony and I'm scared!"

"Stop being such a scaredy pony", alisema Constance.

"Arguing won't get us out of here", alisema Bluehooves. "Let's all just try and find the exit!"

"I agree", alisema Nashgear.

Everypony began looking for a way out.

-With Bluehooves-
Bluehooves...
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"W-Where did he go",asked Fluttershy.

"I don't know", alisema the princess.

"I'll find him", alisema upinde wa mvua Dash.

"No, Rainbow, we must locate the Elements of Harmony", alisema Twilight.

"Fine", alisema upinde wa mvua as she crossed her arms.

As Twilight and the Mane 5 ran out, Princess Celestia called, "Good luck, my little ponies!"

Outside, Discord had already started his chaos. The siku and night kept switching, the ground turned into soap, and buildings were flying in midair.

Discord was sitting in a kiti cha enzi in the air, laughing evilly.

"Where are the Elements", asked Twilight.

"I have them."

"Give them to us."

"Now...
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Lightning was striking below. Thank Celestia all the ponies were salama inside. I was flying close enough to feel the heat of the lightning. To hear the loudness of the thunder. I loved it. Just then I got a brilliant idea. I remember AJ alisema that it was too dangerous to stay at apple Acres because of the trees; so I decided to run through the Everfree Forest! It's, like I alisema before, brilliant! I landed at the the entrance of it. "Bring it on", I alisema to myself. I started running through the forest as fast as I could, lightning bolts striking a few trees that were in front of me.

Not dangerous...
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posted by P-Lightning
"This part of the story is all about Axel and his past."


(Right here Axel is having Ice Cream with his best and only friend in the Organization, Roxas while they whatched the sun set)
(Axel's Past)
"Axel wait up I need to catch up," alisema a mysterious stallion as he ran to Axel, "Hey come on Roxas wewe got to catch up if wewe want to see the sunset." alisema Axel,"OK I'm want to see the suset man just wait I got to buy the ice cream. As Axel and Roxas sat on the old clock tower eating ice cream and Axel asked,"Hey Roxas why does the sun set red?","Huh I don't know i just want to watch the sunset ha...
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