Mafuatano ya Twilight Article: Perfect Piece Of Forever (Summary)

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posted by ybet_cullen18

i forgot to post this. sorry!:))

Set after New Moon. When Edward left, Bella found out that she was pregnant. Charlie sent her to Florida and asked her to come back after 3 years. With the help of her mom, she gave birth to her baby girl, Colleen Elizabeth. They, then, came back to Forks as promised after a few years. Seeing Bella living her life happily, Victoria decided to avenge her mate and make Bella's life miserable. Alice saw this and asked Edward to came back for Bella. The two spent time together again while waiting for the vampire's revenge. Along with Laurent and Irina, Victoria successfully got Bella when Edward was away for hunting. They changed and took her to the Volturi.

The Cullen family took care of Colleen. Believing that Bella died, Esme, then, convinced Edward to songesha on and give Tanya a chance. On Colleen's 5th birthday, Edward announced the wedding between him and Tanya (unwillingly). Colleen got angry and promised not to talk to him again. When she was about to go out and leave because of hatred, Bella appeared.

Shocked as he was, the Happy Edward did not tell Bella about his decision. The two spent time with their daughter and found themselves falling in upendo with each other again.

But what will happen when Bella find out the truth? Will Edward change his mind about marrying Tanya? au will he start a new fight between the two covens?

ANY SUGGESTIONS?

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ybet_cullen18 i need suggestions, please. thanks.

bella_awesome i dont have any suggestions really but i reckon u should go with wat u think u should writ btw that was great i love the story setting and everything

delighted Just wondering here - why is Tanya unwilling? It's not as though he can't find anyone who is willing enough.. And the part that says that Edward believes Bella was dead - just doesn't sound believable. After all, his instincts would be well attuned to know that much, especially is their link was one of true love. Sorry if i sound like a sharp critic, but that's the way i see it.

ybet_cullen18 delighted - it says, 'Edward announced the wedding between him and Tanya (unwillingly). ' that means, edward doesnt really want to marry her. its okay if you sound like a sharp critic, thanks anyway for reading. :)) be safe.

decullen I think its amazing. You should do what you feel. cant wait to read it x

shingkai is it possible that alice did not foresee this? i mean bella becoming a vampire and if edward believe she was dead alice should have known better, right? unless she was with the werewolves or another half-breed. that was just my opinion

ybet_cullen18 shingkai: alice is with bella's daughter, right? in stephenie Meyer's breaking dawn, Alice cant see when nessie's near.:)) be safe.

ybet_cullen18 decullen: thank you and more power. besafe.:))

shingkai alice had foreseen that the volturi's coming eventhough nessie's around, right? correct me if i'm wrong but what i know is that alice's vision will only be blocked if the person she's trying to envision is with the half breed or shapeshifters. i know that nessie has some effect on her power but cannot totally blocked her vision, right? sorry if i'm being a critic... i just love the first 2 chapter more.

ybet_cullen18 shingkai: yes, you are right. but victoria once blocked alice's vision in eclipse. and in my fan fiction, victoria is with the volturi.:))

shingkai wow thanks for answering back i'm learning and i love your ideas. [i]'victoria once blocked alice's vision in eclipse'[/i] i'm not sure of that. i know that victoria tried to trick alice in order to mislead the cullens not block her vision. victoria's special ability is self-preservation, which was the instinctive need to do what is necessary to stay alive. :D