hujambo guys can wewe help me with somthing???

I have the first chapter of a new possible story but I want to see if anybody is going to read it...
And I was wondering can wewe guys read it and tell me what wewe think in a maoni au email?
And I don't no the name yet so can wewe guys help out with that to? Its not very long au hard to read.Oh and I can give wewe a link to it.

And there my other story mysterious upendo wewe can check out on the spot articles.