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f I had to identify the most important step in uandishi an essay, I would probably say it was the organization. Coming up with a thesis is a big part of essay writing, but it doesn’t mean anything if wewe do not have the proper support for it. That is where organization comes into play. If wewe can put your thoughts in the right order, wewe can get people to feel a certain way as they read your work. It’s like taking them on a journey through your mind.

Here are some tips to help wewe effectively organize your essays in the future.

The Pyramid Method
This is my inayopendelewa way to write essays, and I feel it is the most effective. wewe start kwa barely introducing what wewe are going to talk about, and then wewe build a pyramid of support from there. In the conclusion, wewe make your big, powerful assertion that makes people go “Wait, what just happened? I just got bitch, kahaba slapped kwa brilliance!” This method is great for persuasive essays, but I use it for everything. It just makes sense.

The Inverted Pyramid Method
This is the exact opposite of the method above, where wewe start with a big idea and then support it afterward. I don’t like this because it lacks progression. It doesn’t keep people hooked. It may work well for a web makala au a news story, but not a college essay. Nevertheless, some professors upendo this method, so wewe just have to test it out and see what they think.

The sandwich, sandwichi Method
In this method, wewe start with something big, provide support, and end with something equally big. Basically wewe have a thesis at the beginning that poses a swali au a problem, and then wewe have a conclusion that majibu it. I have used this method a few times, and it has worked well. I would recommend using it at least once au two.

General Tips for Essay Organization
In the case of a compare and contrast essay, don’t do one paragraph for one story and then another paragraph for the other story. Try to mix the two together and compare them point kwa point. Each point would be an makala all its own.

Try to talk about events in chronological order so your readers can follow them. If wewe jump all through a book au resource, wewe may lose track of your focus and fluidity.

Don’t be afraid to use small paragraphs if wewe have different topics in each of them. It is better to do that than to have a long paragraph that no one wants to read through.

If wewe follow my tips above for your inayofuata essay in college, wewe should be able to wow the professor and get your point across at the same time. Good luck!
Keep in mind I have no idea what chapter this will be but I got this idea yesterday so I wrote it last night. Actually I had two ideas of how my two main characters would kiss. I'll write and put up a different version of their first kiss some time soon. I actually had tears in my eyes when I wrote this

I storm outside of the house and plop myself down on the sofa outside. I feel my eyes tear. It's so unfair. My tears overflow my eyes.
"Hey Starr what's wrong?" A voice asks behind me. I look behind me and see Elliot
"Oh hujambo Elliot. Nothing is wrong," I say wiping my eyes
Elliot sits down next...
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posted by jasperwhlover
Chapter 2

The priest was reciting a prayer, stuttering heavily, Serenity realized that he was scared and replied, “Fear not for I am Serenity the Angel of peace, I know not why my wings resemble the midnight blue that dawns when the sun goes to rest, I know not my purpose on this earth for my father the Lord, God did not verse me of this strange happening”. The priest believed Serenity and taught Serenity human activities, the priest, father Bartholomew, raised Serenity as his own. Now, father Bartholomew, being an exorcist sent many demons and evil artifices of the devil back to hell,...
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posted by jasperwhlover
Wishful Thinking

Introduction: I thought it was a sweet beginning, a chance to start anew, no looking back, nor turning. What I’ve found here, has me in its grasp, it’s captured me in its spell. But like every sweet beginning we never know how the story ends.


Hi, I’m Alicia Alice Davidson, but wewe can call me Alice. I’m from a family of five, and I go to the best High School in the country, I’m confident and I follow my instincts I’m a fighter mentally and physically. It started off as the same boring, disappointing siku I was used to, at my school, it’s an all girl school wewe see....
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posted by jasperwhlover
Wishful Thinking

Introduction: I thought it was a sweet beginning, a chance to start anew, no looking back, nor turning. What I’ve found here, has me in its grasp, it’s captured me in its spell. But like every sweet beginning we never know how the story ends.


Hi, I’m Alicia Alice Davidson, but wewe can call me Alice. I’m from a family of five, and I go to the best High School in the country, I’m confident and I follow my instincts I’m a fighter mentally and physically. It started off as the same boring, disappointing siku I was used to, at my school, it’s an all girl school wewe see....
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Chapter One

Expecting Michael to inayofuata to her, Jamie moved around to her husband’s side of the kitanda and wanting to see him sleeping inayofuata to her the first thing she sees in the morning, Jamie opened up her eyes and founded no one there.

Jamie sighed when she saw that, knowing where her husband of seven years was sleeping right now. Since he returned from Iraq a few months ago, Michael Thomas had become a different man. A man who never saw the bright side of things and never wanted to look at people in the eyes.

For the past four months, their three children, Mackenzie, Isabella, and Jake had been...
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posted by TDIlover226
~one of them, how could I be one of them! I'm completly human, they're, they're just ugly freaks!.

Eddie just sat there in the dark room, alone. He wasn't sure if he should try to escape, au stay to see exsactly what "one of them" ment. "I can't stay here, with those freaks, they'll probably kill me, they're ugly mutated freaks and I'm getting out of here!" alisema Eddie. "Ugly freaks huh" alisema Annie stepping out of the darkness of the room, "yeah, wwe get that alot from people like you". "Well, mabey if wewe would just tell people what's going on, mabey-". "You don't get it, do you, wewe are one...
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Okay it's now au never Rachel. wewe need money for food. Yeah and uh clothes. wewe are doing it to survive not because wewe are greedy
I sigh. I never liked stealing jewels but what are wewe gonna do on your own? I turn invisible and walk through the door of the store. It's very dark in here. Huh they must be closed au something.
I look around the room. The glasses cases are begging to be smashed open.
I walk up to one of them and pound my fist into it. The glass breaks and a ringing fills my ears. The stupid alarm does bull.
A red gas fills the room. Crap Gas! I suck in my last breath and grab...
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posted by gossipgirlxoxo
I glared at the blond with evil eyes. She was pretty, but evil. My family loved her, laughing at every joke she made. They hung off her every word even Liz, the only one that stood kwa me was Callum and he just doesn’t talk much so he wasn’t really doing it for me. He only smiled at one of her jokes. Ethan was holding her hand and laughing at one stage he even kissed her on the cheek! What the hell? Was he going out with her when he kissed me? When he yelled at me before? “So Sadie, how do wewe like Palm Springs?” The blond one asked me. I smiled. “It’s just fine” I said. She nodded....
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posted by TDIlover226
It was Halloween eve and we had nothing to do.
My sister, Lee was on the computer searching for haunted places, it was a saturday night and her and her buddies we're bored and needed something to do, we were at our grandma's and she lived around alot of creepy places. She searched this cemetary that had alot of spiritual sightings. She of corse no longer believed in all that crap, she was 19. Me and my friend Vanita dared her to go there. "well" she alisema "you have ta go with me too!". Me and Vanita agreed, Vanita had been to alot of haunted places before, and he thought that he wasn't gonna...
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posted by summerfrog
OK so i was walking down the street...all alone...in the rain...not happy but not sad ether...when suddenly I ran into a magnolia tree!I don't know how I didn't see it...or why it was in the middle of the road-but it was there and when I looked at it I saw it was the biggest magnolia I had ever seen;it was absolutely GINORMOUS!it to be at least as tall as a skyscraper. I couldn't even see the top.Now what is the easiest way to get past a tree? Go around it of course! but when i looked there was a wall!Two walls!on ether side of the mti that prevented me from passing(again,how didn't I see this before?)It was not an ordinary
ukuta ether,and must have taken allot of work to build because it was as tall,or taller than the tree!so I was stuck with a magnolia and two walls
what was I to do?turn back?I had come too far!so knowing this,what do wewe think I did?What would wewe have done?
Dear Diary,
Yeah It's me again. I made one mistake and it's eating me inside.
Before wewe ask me "Lily did wewe at least try to escape?" I'm going to tell wewe that I did. On the first day. It's like he knew I would. I had just gotten shot kwa that ray and I was feeling Sulky and then Jerald alisema something that really ticked me off.
"So yeah your room is down the hall from where we are now"
I glared at him His stupid red hair and eyes were just pulsing out at me like I'm his prize
"You planned this didn't you? How? Well I'll never know but just know this I hate you. wewe killed the only living family...
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posted by XhuddyobsessedX
I look at the old photographs. It kills me to see him smile. I've only heard about him. I hear he would have loved me. I hear he was nice. I hear that he was a good dad. I hear he was an okay husband. I hear that he would have made a good grandfather. It's not fair. It kills me when my dad talks about him. My dad alisema one of his last words to him were "Dont miss me when I'm gone." Those words run through my head. siku and night and keep me up thinking of him. Why did he have to go? I pray he's okay and fine in heaven. I pretend he's still here. If only he were ... I miss him....

I guess he's just....
Hard to Let Go


Dedicated to my grandfather I miss wewe ... even if I never met wewe =,[


inayofuata journal entry coming up in few please
R&R
Thanks!!
posted by blackpanther666
Part One: Tales of Kern Age 04 Yer 00-155

Chapter One: A rather expected journey to Counquan

A young magician stomped down the shadowy path, accentuated greatly kwa the bright, luminescent full moon. The young man wore a vicious look on his light face; his bushy eyebrows swallowing much of the malice contained in his dark, blue-flecked eyes.
The young man’s name was Skye. He was travelling the stone-tiled road of Koren, the capital city of Argate, empire of the Blessed Ones.
Skye had been sent from the city, since the elder magicians had decided that he was too much trouble to train. Skye had...
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posted by Xennoxxx
(trigger warning: talks about mental health and sh ideation)

Dear Society,
This is a plea
From a broken girl
In this damaged world
A girl who never had the chance
To be herself in fear of being rejected
Cast aside for not following the public norms
This is a plea
For God's sake society,
A girl's body is not a toy
A piece of material to be passed around and thrown to the ground
To be torn and beaten
Bruised black and blue- bleeding through
Her very being

A person's dreams
Are not shared to be downgraded for being
Too childish, unachievable, and unrealistic
And yet, the sky is the limit?
For God's sake society,...
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posted by AnxiousSoul
Asperger's Syndrome is a mild form of autism with a bit of learning disability. It is the same as social anxiety. People with this kind have difficulty learning academics, socializing with other people, and forming friendships.

What does it feel like to have this? You'll be sensitive to loud sounds, lack of interest in to many things, difficulty understanding sarcasm and jokes, you'll feel lonely and alone, wewe see the world differently to other people, and the most overwhelming is wewe feel different in the world. It is also a lifelong condition and can't be cured. But help is a guide of their life. wewe will realize that those people have zaidi intelligence and will grow up successfully in their life. And also they have a great moyo of understanding on people's problems. They will also be kind and patient from what we are.

See the outside, and know deep the inside. There's no nothing than a reason behind.

It's better to be UNIQUE!
First off,harry potter has actual struggle and creative and developed villains while twilight centers around a girl who is completely dependent on a 2 hot guys who go to war for her and constantly abuse her.Second,harry potter has compelling storyline and fun unique characters while twilight is ALL STEREOTYPES, with the new hot shallow girl who runs a upendo pembetatu and the the two guys and their Marafiki who fight over her.And lastly, for all wewe people who say that edward is hotter than harry, cedric is hotter than edward.look at all characters,not just the main ones.peace y'all
posted by egyptprincess7
So this is my first story that I made in quite a while. So enjoy! Feel free to give me any hints on how to make it better.

    “Come on Alice! Wake up, you’re going to be late for school!” Mary, my older sister, yelled. She’s in charge of having to wake me up for school. I feel really sorry for her half the time but then again she gets to wake up earlier than me. I looked over to the door and there she still stood, her face red like a tomato. “I’m up! I’m up! Man, why do wewe always have to be so loud in the morning?” I whined, annoyed that she woke me up from...
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Most Important Event In Every Movie Is 'The Point Of No Return' - Jill Chamberlain via FilmCourage.com.
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What Screenwriters Should Know About Packaging Their Scripts - Steve Douglas-Craig via FilmCourage.com.
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Everything Screenwriters Need To Know About A High Concept Story - Kaia Alexander via FilmCourage.com.
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