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f I had to identify the most important step in uandishi an essay, I would probably say it was the organization. Coming up with a thesis is a big part of essay writing, but it doesn’t mean anything if wewe do not have the proper support for it. That is where organization comes into play. If wewe can put your thoughts in the right order, wewe can get people to feel a certain way as they read your work. It’s like taking them on a journey through your mind.

Here are some tips to help wewe effectively organize your essays in the future.

The Pyramid Method
This is my inayopendelewa way to write essays, and I feel it is the most effective. wewe start kwa barely introducing what wewe are going to talk about, and then wewe build a pyramid of support from there. In the conclusion, wewe make your big, powerful assertion that makes people go “Wait, what just happened? I just got bitch, kahaba slapped kwa brilliance!” This method is great for persuasive essays, but I use it for everything. It just makes sense.

The Inverted Pyramid Method
This is the exact opposite of the method above, where wewe start with a big idea and then support it afterward. I don’t like this because it lacks progression. It doesn’t keep people hooked. It may work well for a web makala au a news story, but not a college essay. Nevertheless, some professors upendo this method, so wewe just have to test it out and see what they think.

The sandwich, sandwichi Method
In this method, wewe start with something big, provide support, and end with something equally big. Basically wewe have a thesis at the beginning that poses a swali au a problem, and then wewe have a conclusion that majibu it. I have used this method a few times, and it has worked well. I would recommend using it at least once au two.

General Tips for Essay Organization
In the case of a compare and contrast essay, don’t do one paragraph for one story and then another paragraph for the other story. Try to mix the two together and compare them point kwa point. Each point would be an makala all its own.

Try to talk about events in chronological order so your readers can follow them. If wewe jump all through a book au resource, wewe may lose track of your focus and fluidity.

Don’t be afraid to use small paragraphs if wewe have different topics in each of them. It is better to do that than to have a long paragraph that no one wants to read through.

If wewe follow my tips above for your inayofuata essay in college, wewe should be able to wow the professor and get your point across at the same time. Good luck!
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posted by fangs286
Jacob part 1

have wewe ever had a secret? the answer is probably yes. but have wewe ever had a secret that wewe could never tell anyone?that if wewe did, it would effect thousands,billions of people? no. wewe haven't. that is the weight i carry on my shoulders. it is the weight carried kwa people. Many people. across the world. i am one of many that are different then other people but yet the same.i wish to be what is around me. only a few are like me. i want to have a friend in this world that is like me. Someone who understands the pain and constant despair, even when i feel happy. wewe are probably...
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Chapter 1
I was sitting in a prison. A prison where everyone here hates me, well almost anyone. I’m staring out the window when I should be focusing on the boring math page on my desk. Mother has been worried recently about my grades, like she cares anyways; it burned my moyo when the thought settled. Leaving an empty feeling in its place. Ever since Dave, (my mother’s boyfriend) moved in things have gotten a lot worse. He still beats her, She still swears he loves her, and I still sneak out at night alone. Just to get away from the screaming and crying that they do. I began to forget what...
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posted by ZekiYuro
A British couple went to France for the day-and they got nyumbani seven days later.
Everything began well for Mr and Mrs.Long on their siku trip to France.They went kwa train from London to Dover and got the ferry to Boulogne in France.
They went for a short walk around the town but they got completely lost.'We walked and walked,'said Mrs Long,'but we couldn't find our way back to the ferry port.'They walked all night and finally a motorist picked them up and drove them to a small village.Here they caught a train to Paris.Their plan was to travel from Paris to London.But they caught the wrong train...
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I come nyumbani and their fighting.
I hate it! I want to tell them to stop.
But I cant, because Im stuck in the middle.
They tug me, playing with me.
I cant handle the pain!

When I go to school no one can see my pain.
I fake my happiness.
I want to go hide in a corner and cry.
But I cant.
Because no one lends a shoulder to cry on.
My Marafiki dont understand!

I come nyumbani again, and my parents pull me.
Ripping my moyo like a angry raven.
My siblings, they... they... leave me there. Alone.

I feel alone.
Deserted.
No where I feel happy.
Because Im alone.
Why cant anyone see?
Why cant my parents stop fighting?
Why cant my Marafiki lend a hand?
Why cant my siblings pull me to my feet?
Why am I alone?
posted by sonicfanAG
Sometimes wewe may have Marafiki that talk about being Lesbian au gay au bisexual is just nasty and plain gross,but It's not nasy at all.It's your personality and wewe control it no one else.There's no problem for being that.If wewe are then well i hope wewe have Marafiki who apprecite who wewe are and how your like. My best friend is a guy and yes I have a crush on him but Just today I found out that he was bisexual.At first I was shocked but the truth is that I don't really care.I upendo him just they way he is and he will always be the best's friend i could I have ever had.He's special to me and...
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posted by unknownK5
Far far away is a big beautiful forest with all kinds of trees and small, but sparkly cool water. There is a big white house with red flowers on the window shelf’s and a big garden and playfield on witch are two blue swings, kwa them there is also a yellow slide and kwa the garden there is a big pool. In that house lives a girl, her parents (Margaret and Bob) and her three years older brother Ben. The girl's name is Julia.
When Julia was young she was a normal girl. When she was 1 mwaka old she learned how to talk. kwa two years she learned how to walk and after that she learned how to ride a...
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posted by fanfangirlfan
Clean- 20 years later-ish

Kelly

You probably would never guess that I was in a rehab centre at 17. But I was and I’ll never forget it. I’ll always remember the stupid things they thought would fix us like art therapy and addiction themed movie nights. I remember Shirley. I remember Jason, Olivia, Christopher and Eva. They were my cure. Even though they were as fucked up as I was, maybe more, they taught me everything I needed to know to change into this woman I am now. I am a business woman. I work long hours and the only stress I have now is from work. Not from needing a drink au a line...
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posted by Pixalfirebolt
My name is Max. I'm 14. Right now, you're probably thinking, "Okay.. What type of opening is that?" Well, it's mine. Deal with it. I've been through a lot, so cut me some slack. Let's get to the point. I'm different. Not like, I have a purple Mohawk and over 50 piercings different, zaidi like I have 14' of bird wings stuck to my upper back, different. I know, no need to think it, IT ISN'T MY FAULT, OKAY? There is 5 zaidi like me, Fang, Iggy, Nudge, Gazzy (The Gasman), and Angel. We are all... Well, unique like that. We each have our own, original, personality. Me, I'll get to that later. Let's...
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posted by HouseMindFreak
Chapter 19






Sitting on the porch in the late evening for BJ was her only time to get fresh air and some decent time away from Cayden. In the mid-summer it was warm and pleasant outside at night but tonight it was unusually chilly. BJ wrapped her arms around herself feeling a chill run through her body. The air felt thick but it wasn’t humid it was…tense. The sky was preparing for a storm. A rumble of thunder rattled around her making her jump. She couldn’t understand why she was so jumpy, storms never bothered her but there was just something she was sensing that wasn’t right. Another...
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posted by Insight357
    I was lying in my bed. Waiting for my being discharged. I was finally going nyumbani today, after four long years.
    The room I had been staying in was white. The walls, kitanda sheets, equipment; everything. Except the big, brown door that lead into the hallway. I had mostly stayed in my room the past years. I’m a bit antisocial. I never was really interested in interacting with the other patients.
    I stood from the bed, and walked around the room. Looking at all the things I’d come to know here. I wouldn’t miss it.
    I...
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posted by nomblahnom
January 1, 2040

Jordan was nervous. He was about to make the biggest announcement of his career – to him anyway. He sighed deeply, waiting for his latest understudy, Samantha White, to begin the report.
“Today, on his 70th birthday, world-renowned author, Forrest Reed, has announced in a statement from his agent, Philip Conrad, that he is releasing his final novel,” Ms. White read from the teleprompter with an appropriately despondent tone, which actually appeared to be fairly genuine. She was situated in front of a ‘breaking news’ logo which rotated slowly, while dozens of books...
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posted by HecateA
-You coming? He asked. I starred at the maua, ua he'd just tucked behind my ear and that I'd just pulled out. The petals were soft and lucious red, overlapping each other perfectly. Perfect they are. Roses. Gracious, colorful, romantic...
-Sure Dan. I said. I took his hand and let him lead me to his car. He oppened the door of the Ford's shotgun kiti, kiti cha for me and closed it behind me; the perfect gentleman. He turned the old engine on.
-Where do wewe want to go eat? He asked me.
-Doesn't matter. I said, stroking the petals.
-What about Chinese? He asked.
-Chinese works.
-The place with the good eggrolls...
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posted by Funnygirl77
 Leting go of the ones wewe upendo is like falling out of an airplane with no para shoot
Leting go of the ones you love is like falling out of an airplane with no para shoot
Nothing is harder then losing the one wewe love. The One person who understands wewe the most, The one who give anything to keep wewe salama and happy even if that means losing their own life to save yours. I learned this the hard way, When a mwaka zamani today, I Lost my parents, my brother and my sister, in a house fire.

May 19 2010 Monday 12:01 am
It's been a mwaka since I Lost my family, and it hasn't been any easier. I have nightmares about what happen, ever nightmare is the same. It starts off with me being with my family, Everyone is laughing and having a good time, then out of no where, there faces...
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posted by hannah_vampire
I woke up and felt the cold hit me, it was a weird sensation and I felt light headed something was happening but I couldn’t work out what. It was around midday when I had decided to go and visit Blair, When I got out of my car I felt weird once again, there was a darkness around me au at least some where around here. When I got near the door, I had seen that someone had forced it
Open. I pushed the door open and run inside, ‘No no Blair’ I thought as I saw him on the ground not breathing.

I got to the nyumbani phone but it was hard to dial the number in, I was shaking violently. Oni answered...
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"Hello." I alisema to a boy sitting inayofuata to me in English. I was hoping that they would be like Brett. This boy had purple eyes with gray flakes inside. His blonde hair was shoulder length and his bangs were covering his face.

He smiled at me. "Hey..." He alisema and leaned over to me. "What's your name?" He seemed pretty nice right now.

"I'm Leighton. What's yours?" I asked.

"Chase. I like your shirt." I looked down. It did look pretty nice. But I noticed that his eyes stared at my chest area for a little too long. I used my hand to cover it up. I think inayofuata time I'll wear my shati that alisema 'My face...
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“Alec, what the hell is a Rokurokubi?” alisema Marley. “I don’t bloody know, maybe some sort of ancient demon” alisema Alec. “We Rokurokubi are creatures like wewe from the other realm; we are also seen in Japanese history” alisema Mia who seemed very happy to talk about her race. “So are wewe some sort of badass, moto breathing, soul sucking, body eating, shapeshifting, winged beast from the depths of the great abyss?” alisema Marley taking a few steps back. “Umm... my race aren’t like that, there are stories of us eating bodies and drinking blood but that is a false accusation, the...
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Some Wanyonya damu have a certain side effect to when they bite a human. This mostly happens with pure bloods au half bloods that gained their power from their vampire history. Wanyonya damu who were bitten and had their blood changed will rarely get this trait because their blood was once human so the DNA does not release this effect in their blood. Marley, Alec and Opal each have a side effect when bitting someone. The People Alec bites start to concentrate a lot on their upendo life, this is because Alec cares a lot about his upendo life (One of the many reasons he does not bite men) The Side effect People...
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posted by kayleebabee
"Carlisle we're home!" I called out as I raced through the house dragging Edward along with me.
"Carlisle? Esme? Rosalie? Emmet? Jazz? Alice?" I called my voice getting higher and higher out of panic.
"They aren't here Bella come on we'll go and find them." Edward alisema hoarsely taking my hand and tugging me toward the garage.
I flung my ferrari into reverse and screamed out of the garage. I hissed a stream of profanities as I raced toward Denali our first place to search.
"CRAP!" i screamed stomping on the brakes and screeching to a stop in the middle of the highway.
"I think we have been looking...
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