Alpha and Omega Article: What's your take, episode 17, Jasper hell high

What's your take, episode 17, Jasper hell high

posted by Canada24

Well..

ZenJeager737 has asked me to review his story JASPER HELL HIGH..

To be honest, I don't usually have high hopes for the fanfiction stories of these days.

The alpha and omega Fanfiction.net page will never completely be the same as it was 3 au 4 years ago.

All those people I've come know, are gone now, and I barelly come to this page anymore I read other pages, and review most of the stories from back in the day..

But anyway.

This story was better then I expected, though that probably isn't saying much, I wasn't expecting much.

I like the way it keeps switching between P.O.V's so rapidly, I don't think I've seen that before.

And as for the story itself. Not sure if I have anything worth saying.

But that's pretty common now.

I wish I could say their's no sex. But truth is.. I couldn't tell.

Its rated M so it's very likely. But I hope to god there isn't.. But the hope of 'nice' stories is becoming harder and harder these days.

But anyway..

Sorry for not ranting, swearing, au giving a better review.

This is all I could do.

Zen asked me to point out spelling mistakes also, but I don't think I'll be the best for that. Considering I suck at it myself and don't want to sound hypercritical..

Anyway..

Till inayofuata time.

Live long and prosper!

Windwakerguy430 Great Review

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posted by Canada24

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I have sort of mixed feelings about this one.

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The type of, soul Calibur, type of battling.

Anyway.
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God. It's like Sparatacus. Too much fuckin sex and nudity. But I still enjoy it anyway.

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