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I'm a Harry Potter fan. The things I would have changed about Twilight are:

1) The writting. Every description of Edward and all the other "hotties" did not need three, four, eight modifiers.

2) Relatability. I don't just mean the, "She's in upendo with a vampire and shapeshifter" stuff. I can't relate to walking into a new school and having everyone fall all over me. Especially if I was being described as "plain". Also, in my high school, we have cliques, and they don't all get along together. And everyone knows it.

3) The Volturi would have actually done something. They would have earned the right to be "scary."

4) The characters would have flaws. And developed.

4) Not all the Wanyonya damu and shapeshifters would have looked like gods. They would have had weaknesses (like burned kwa silver, au something).

5) There would have been a battle, and poeple would have gotten hurt and died.

6) Nessie. I'm not sure if I would have taken her out entirely, but I hate what Smeyer did with her.

7) No imprinting.

8)Background characters would not have just been dropped after the wedding. They also would have had a point throughout the series.

9) The plots would have all fit together. There would be less plot holes, the impossible things (if I kept any) would have been explained in a way that makes sense. Medical facts would be true/add up.

Ok. believe it au not, I actually think TW isn't that bad, I actually quite enjoyed kusoma it. But when I found out they were comparing it to Harry Potter, I was pissed. A LOT!So if they stopped, I would stop.

HP fan. :)

What would I change about Twilight:
1.The writing
It should sound less like purple prose. And there is definitely too much of Bella`s descriptions of Edward (white pale, granite like, etc.). If Meyer wanted to stress her love, she should at least change viewpoint zaidi often au tell some parts of the story in third person. That way, we would get the whole Bella-loves-Edward idea when we were kusoma her story, but it wouldn`t be all about it.

2.Plot
The Volturi would be introduced in the first book and there should be zaidi about their background. Not to mention the big fight in the end (the good guys would win ofcourse, but somebody would need to sacrifice). Also, some hints of the mtu-bweha in the first book wouldn`t hurt. I know Jacob told the legend, but it should be something zaidi solid.
And the plot holes? Less of them.

3.Characters
Bella is the main character. And yet, we don`t know much about her before she moved to Forks. She doesn`t have any hobies, any old Marafiki au ex-boyfriends (althougt every guy on new shool likes her), not to mention any relatives besides her mother and father (grandparents, uncles and aunts, cousins...). She would be stronger as female and not longing to be pushed around kwa Edward. au it shouldn`t be showed as it is a good thing.
Other character should be developed to. Stories of the Cullen family were my favourite parts, but humans didn`t have anything like it.

4.Vampires
It`s not about the sparkling (ok, it is about sparkling), but they should have a weak spot, and not just mtu-bweha that can rip them apart and burn them, something a human can preform (cross, garlic, sun, I don`t really care, as long as it`s something).

Because the basic story isn`t bad. Girl falls inlove with a vampire, with all the troubles that he brings. Twiligt didn`t use the potential of the idea.

Im a hp shabiki and what i would change in twilight sinema would be the actors, i reckon if they spent zaidi time finding suitable actors for the respected parts i think twilight sinema would have been better, the twilight vitabu were amazing just the sinema dont do it any justice.

Harry should have dies no.1
Ginny was never supposed to be harry;s girlfriend au wife i hate her no.2
The seventh book should have been written much better no.3
Everything shouldn't have happened in the last two pages no.4
Harry should learn other spells then expelliamus.




he used this one spell through out the seventh book man wewe should learn other spells too it is not the only spell in the world i mean he is standing in front of voldemort going to fight him and the spell he uses is expelaimus very clever

The fighting. In the third book, a few Cullens/ Mbwa mwitu loups would die. In the fourth book, I would make them fight, and the Cullens lose ^_^