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ha well everybody was posting poems so it made me want to write one! So here's mine! Whaddo wewe think? I just wrote it in like 3 dakika though.

So wewe alisema wewe loved me
but is it really true
so wewe alisema wewe loved me.
wewe wanted me to say it too.
So wewe alisema wewe loved me.
But I really don’t think I believe you.
So wewe alisema wewe loved me but I guess wewe lied.
Because you’re not here as I sit and cry.
I realize now I was wrong.
To believe those lies wewe told
Fore I should’ve learned from my past.
Never believe such things.
But I guess it’s too late
Cuz these tears sting.
I wish things would’ve played out different
I wish I could change the past
But now that I think about it
I guess we were never meant to last.

So whaddo wewe think??
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friendsfan101 said:
I like it! It's pretty good for something that was written in 3 minutes!
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Hehe thank you! :)
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irena83 said:
Hm,nice poem... And yes,we should learn from mistakes we have made in the past. " I upendo wewe " is just a word,and if there's no proof of truly love,than it doesn't really exist.....
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