Somebody give me some art critique for this?

Actually, I think it's good.
But the hand disturbs me a bit.

yeah it's good & i agree with darkshine about the hand,...i dont like the fingers but the other part of draw it's good...and please tell me:the eye it's closed right?

& do wewe know that in France i think(im not sure),there is a female painter who makes drawings with her puke...

Hmm... Is the hand supposed to look that way? Cause when wewe do something like this, it reminds me of Picasso. Strange paintings... It makes me think. I'm not much of an artist, but I do like it. People are extremly hard to draw. Never give up with your ideas on how to draw them. wewe never know if the inayofuata way wewe do will seem really special. =]

Well its good but the hand needs to be fixed!For a 10 mwaka old this is good!:)5/10!

(uhum..not to b rude au anything but 10 mwaka olds cannot even b on this place right?,but who cares there r many people younger than that online right?) your pic is good and if wewe keep practicing wewe will get better

For a 10 yr old its decent.

For being ten, you're a really good artist. Now, I know I'm no psychic, but if wewe keep at it, you'll have a great career in your future!

I think It's really good! :) I actually don't think the hand looks too bad, but it could use a wee bit of work.