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Can wewe guys read my story and tell me if wewe like it, what to change and all that stuff, please?

Chapter 1
Boredom

Thantos was sitting on his bed, continuously throwing and catching his blue foam ball, with his headphones in his ears and muziki playing too loud and combing his medium length black hair out of his bright abnormally coloured eyes.
“This is so pointless. I need something better to do,” he said, scratching his extremely pale skin.
Thantos paused his IPod to hear a scream and girls laughing.
“What the- what was that about?” He asked himself, getting up from his kitanda and walking to his door.
“I’ll never know if I don’t go check it out,” he smiled.
Thantos walked down his stairs and toward his door and covered his ears as the girls screamed again.
He opened his front door to see a beautiful girl in a solid black bikini and another girl in a purple and pink strapless one piece.
“What’s all the screaming about?” Thantos yelled at them, laughing.
The girls screamed, looked at Thantos, then started laughing at there foolishness.
“First tell us who wewe are, then we’ll tell wewe why we were screaming,” laughed the girl in the one-piece.
“I’ll tell wewe who I am after wewe tell me who wewe are,” Thantos smirked at them.
The two girls looked at each other and smiled.
Both girls held out there left arm, palms flat facing him. Out of nowhere, water came shooting at Thantos, hitting him painfully hard.
“What was that for?” Thantos yelled, clenching his fists, angrily. “And how the hell did wewe do that?”
“Because we could. Isn’t that a total ‘duh’ factor?” The girl in the bikini asked.
“And how we did it is none of your damn business.” The other girl scolded.
“Just tell me who wewe are,” Thantos said, attempting to breathe calmly and not onyesha his anger, but failing, miserably.
“My name is of no concern right now but… I might be willing to tell wewe if wewe tell me yours. We’ll tell wewe why we were screaming and both of our na
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XxKeithHarkinxX said:
nice! now read mine!


He ran his fingers through her long golden hair while staring into her hazel eyes
“You have beautiful eyes,” he alisema softly, his accent still managed to slip through his softly spoken words.
“Thank you,” Taylor alisema with a smile of pure delight.
“But I really should get going,” She alisema gently pulling Keith’s hand out of her hair.
This was not because she didn’t upendo Keith; in fact Taylor loved him with all her heart. It was just everything happened so suddenly. It all started last week in New York City, Keith being a musician had booked a gig at Red Stallion Pub, and Taylor being a shabiki of his, bought a ticket for the show. Everything was going normally, Keith Played a few tunes, how it managed to last 3 hours is beyond me. After the onyesha everyone left talking among themselves about the performance. There was only one person that didn’t leave with the crowd, besides the bartenders of course, Taylor stayed to tell Keith that he was an amazing musician and that she had never heard such beautiful noise in her life. Keith was all done packing his guitar, gitaa up and about ready to leave when he noticed someone still standing there.
“ And why might wewe still be here?” his accent wasn’t as thick she thought it would be,
“I-I just wanted to tell wewe something,” Taylor alisema shyly.
“What might that be? Is it that you’re my biggest shabiki and wewe want me to marry you?” Keith alisema with a slight chuckle.
“Oh, nothing like that sir!”
“Please, call me Keith,” he alisema as he carefully put his guitar, gitaa case down
“I’m too young to be a sir!” he alisema with a laugh
“So what did wewe want to want to tell me?”
“That wewe are the most amazing guitarist and singer I’ve ever heard!” She alisema slowly letting go of her shyness.
“Why thank you! I must say it’s a lot nicer to hear that then it is to hear all that sappy, lovie, shabiki stuff. wewe kind of get sick of it after 4 years!”

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i like it but, what's with your obsession with Keith?
Castalinia posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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.... ARE wewe QUESTIONING ME!?
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Shadowmarioking said:
Eh. I don't understand why the girls have to be in bikinis...and the story isn't one that's THAT attention grabbing.
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it will be when there's zaidi up. it get's a lot zaidi interesting as it goes on.
Castalinia posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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thanks for your opinion though. it is much appreaciated. i will try to improve it.
Castalinia posted zaidi ya mwaka mmoja uliopita
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okay. i'll try to do that.
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