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Note; This is an opinion, do not take this as anything offensive au insulting. This is to help wewe avoid having an overpowered au overangsty character.

It is very fun to make your own character, au shabiki character, yes? ^^ I agree. But, sometimes, people don't go through character development the correct way, having their character au shabiki character result in being overpowered and/or undefeatable.

Sometimes, they do follow the right steps, but instead create a much zaidi angsty, annoying, depressed character.

I will start off with the much zaidi common character; Mary-Sues and Gary-Stus.

They are characters who have many abilities, skills, au powers. They may be loved kwa everybody, they may be undefeatable, they may be immortal and/or unstoppable, au anything else overpowering. If these characters might be in trouble, their true upendo will rescue them. Ay yi yi.

These characters are the types of characters that ruin the fun in character developing. Gary-Stus are like Mary-Sues, but in which 'girls crawl all over them for their hotness'.

To avoid making one, every character has a flaw and/or weakness. Nobody's perfect. If wewe want your character to stand out, be zaidi imaginative and original.

Marty-Sams are characters who whine about how horrible they are. They are angsty and are quite annoying. If they upendo someone, they would whine about how amazing they are and how they themselves aren't.

To avoid making one, it is very easy~ Don't make a character that is as angsty and/or annoying as a Marty-Sam.

Tragic Backstories are overrated and have been done the most. Most of the time, they involve;
"Doctor Eggman destroying their village, killing their family, etc. and them getting revenge on him."

Not every character needs a sad backstory. Make it original and make it something that others don't do.

Recolors are the most common problems. It is when somebody takes an art template of Sonic, Shadow (Mostly Shadow), etc. and color over it, claiming it as their own. Recoloring is bad, but if wewe ask permission from the original artist of the picture and/or give them credit for making the original image, then that's good. If wewe don't, you're going to have to, au futa the image, since art theft is horrible and the art is copyrighted.

Bases are excellent to use if wewe can't draw from scratch. But, always remember to give credit.

Powers, Abilities and Skills for your character is optional. :D They vary in many awesome things, from morphing into wanyama to causing acid rain! What makes giving these powers, abilities, and skills to your character fun, is when wewe are original with it. Don't go with the common propaganda that Shadow uses like 'Chaos Beam', 'Chaos Blast', 'Chaos Control'...Be zaidi imaginative and creative with these things. Elements are awesome, too, but don't use the basic four elements all the time.

That's it for this guide. >:3
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added by Livi64
Noctuslynx and I are making a Fighting foramu for everyone to try. It will tie in with the kanuni, cannon universe of our stories, and yours as well unless asked otherwise. This means that wewe can be in the story if wewe survive long enough.

In the foramu there will be matches supervised kwa either Noctuslynx au myself to make sure there aren’t any signs of foul play. BUT there isn’t just fighting. In the foramu wewe can go explore and even go to your worlds and other people’s worlds depending on the events, but note that wewe may be pulled into a fight kwa a plot-character at some point.

If wewe want to...
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So the character “Rynk Hellborn” (For those not knowing about the last-name part, “Hellborn” has nothing to do with demonic anything. It’s simply a name which I can explain later if you’re wondering.) is probably my most maarufu Sonic shabiki Character, and probably only surpassed kwa Rin, au possibly Slender. (OYO)

The character has made her debut on the Mobius Academy series, being written kwa myself, and Gracethefox (To read the first part go here ~ link )
She’s appeared as a cameo character in The Rasoul Saga, written kwa Mephiles97 (To read go here~ link )
And she actually DID get...
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Zone: Black Garden Zone
Countdown: 295 Days Until Darkness
POV: Gamma the Hedgehog 3rd

Time: 7:59:99 AM (7:59 EST)
Day: 2/27/14

Not gonna look back...just gonna keep on running...not stopping...not turning back towards my past...only looking on towards my future...not allowing anything au anyone to slow me down, just moving on...

Dashing mbele through the area, Gamma needs to stop and take a breather, so he does so beside the Black Garden Statue. Why...why do I have to have these powers...WHY?! Gamma collapses to his knees and buries his face in his hands, as a memory of the past comes...
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posted by TakTheFox
So a lot of the time I find myself rping with more female characters than male character.
THERE ARE REASONS FOR THAT.
First off though I’d like to point out that I am not…
~ A brony
~ homo/bi-sexual
~ An anime/and/or/hentai fan (EW)
~ in need of a girlfr-… okay maybe, but that doesn’t count X{D

Aside from that the first reason why I rp with girl characters so often is…
1.    Popularity
Of my many characters the only popular guy characters I have (Note: Not using Mobius Academy: Evolution characters because that deals more with who is around than popularity) are...
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Ok, so don't take any of this the wrong way guys, it's what makes me mad and pissed of.


1: Continuesess Role-playing.
I know some people upendo to Role play, I do to. It's just...Isn't it annoying when your sitting there chatting, then someone contacts wewe over meebo. wewe click on it and they jump STRAIGHT into role playing without even saying "Hi". I certainly HATE it, no offense friends, I'm not naming them.

2: A busy/away sign means no contacting.
When I have a busy sign saying something like, "Busy right now, uandishi a essay" au "eating dinner", that doesn't mean 'I MUST CONTACT HER TO ANNOY...
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posted by FrizTHedgehog
Who is this masked man? The Golden Man?
If wewe listen to his theme, you'll get a good idea....
Other than that he has Space control similar to the the TomTom Gang in Blinx2, thus meaning he can open mini Black Holes, Worm Holes, and basically do anything that has to do with space. But where did he get that technology?
A few years back El Dorado broke into Friz's lab late at night and aliiba experimental equipment, this was before he was El Dorado.
He become El Dorado when he was traveling through Universes and Planets, he found A Planet with entire Cities, Towns, And Villages made of gold, Then...
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posted by RawrMonster123
This club is having serious problems. Do wewe know what that is? It's ORIGINALITY!!! So that BlazeCat girl made a Truth au Dare RP. inayofuata thing wewe know that Kittiez girl made one. 1st I thought that was fine, but then I thought about it, and that's plain copying. SilverAnime122 made a RP on her FC Dominique transforming into her Toxic form. Then before wewe know it that BlazeCat girl makes one that her FC "Sharmaine" transform into a monster from some damn brownies. Like, give me a Dorito and I'll turn into Barney. -.-" That girl that "owns" that FC Diane apparently doesn't. Like really? wewe know that's art theft, right? And it wouldn't of, I think, if wewe asked for permission and gave credit. Plus, wewe can't draw if wewe don't try. -.-" I know I suck but I keep trying. RECOLORS COUNT!! And I don't even need to add the other copiers. wewe guys know who I'm talking about. So people, please, BE. ORIGINAL!!!
posted by silveranime122
 Marth Stegtion
Marth Stegtion
This all the information about Marth.



Name:Marth Stegtion/Project-M
Age:16
Sex:Male
Species:Hedgehog
Birth Date:April 17,1995
Power:Speed and change of body hight
Abilties:Understand all lanagues,see at night clearly,far distance hearing,running as fast as Sonic,unlimited hight change
Bio:Was born in the middle of the forest kwa his parents.Raised until his parents were murderd one night when he was 12.Had to raise himself ever scence.
Job:Has to be a F.B.I. agent in order to be free.
Relationships:He is Dominique's boyfriend.
Likes:Being known as good,with his friends,knowing his Marafiki are honest to...
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posted by TakTheFox
Part Four

Rynk had arrived in a different city now. It was less populated then her own, but it was not the population that she interested. She walked across the city’s outskirts, until she had found a still-occupied military base.

“This had better be it.” She alisema to herself. The lynx-girl then walked up to the gates of the base, and asked if she could meet with someone who she could swali about certain files.

“Are wewe serious?” The man at the gate asked in his booth.

“Well… I was… now I’m slightly less serious, but-“

“You can’t just be handed files like that, Miss…”...
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posted by TakTheFox
Geon

The scenario: Creation, and containment of a new stable species.

“Is he controlled?”

“Yes.”

The Location: Base-X. X for unknown. In the Metro-city of Mobotropolis Mark 21. On the planet Mobius Zone 12, au as called kwa the natives “Iblicis.”

“Is he complete?”

“Yes”

The date: The fourth after-apocalypse-world, au zaidi commonly called “Fourth From-Ashes”. mwaka 5500. January 1st, Saturday.

“Is he… contained???”

“… Completely.”


Chapter one: Happy New Year

Five hours prior…

A almost glowing-red male cat lay unconscious on the floor of what appeared to be a hotel living-room....
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[Warning: minor spoilers sort of...]

I remember how we were born. A stern father who hated us. A beautiful mother who found us disgusting. A pair of parents who abandoned us. Left us out on the mitaani, mtaa in a unstable town. To die. We were punished for something we did not ask for. For our supposed digesting deform we have.

Conjoined twins. That is what me and my brother, Amore were. Connected at the skull and shared a brain. We didn't ask for this. I upendo to be close with my brother, but not this close.

For years, we lived in alley ways and on the streets. Making money for inaonyesha people our gross...
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Rynk’s profile

Character's Full Name: Relmiss Nyra Avi
Reason au meaning of name: Unknown.
Nickname: Rynk
Reason for nickname: It’s the only name she knows, and the one she made up for herself for no reason.

Birthdate: She’s fifteen, but no one knows her exact tarehe of birth. Somewhere in April possibly
Astrological Sign: uh… the moon?

PHYSICAL APPEARANCE
Age: 15
How old does s/he appear?: 16 au 17
Eye Color: Mint, with faded blue pupils
Glasses au contacts? No
Hair color: Black
Distinguishable hair feature: Sometimes it looks as if it has stripes on it, but no one knows why
Type of hair (coarse,...
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posted by TakTheFox
Rynk story

Note: This is not planned to be a permanent series, but basically guide-lines to Rynk’s past.


Part one

I had the same dream again. The dream of a giant black tower, with spikes all around it. It used to scare me so much when I saw that, but now it just confuses me. Unfortunately it’s not the dream that becomes the least of my problems. I don’t know why but for some reason every time I have that dream, I wake up as a captive of someone. Here we go again.

In a large darkened room, a female lynx is tied to a chair, with a large black bag over her head, and armed mobians surrounding...
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Sorry that this is a few days late, I was a slacker. Anyways, enjoy! 8D
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Today was Christmas. I had been waiting for this siku for a long time now. I was inside my home, waiting for Chris to come with a gift, I got him one too. I had invited him the awali day.
When he came we were supposed to exchange gifts, play some games, and whatever we could think of. He was to come at 5:00 P.M.
At 7:30, he wasn't there yet. I was worried, so I went outside and started looking.
"Chris? Chris?!" I repeatedly shouted. About a halk saa later a heard a series of growls...
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posted by zougethebat1
"Why?"Zouge asked." Because u have to."Her mom told her." But I hate Mysee she evil. "O just like you."She giggle. "Well yeah...but she zaidi evil than me!" Look I don't care your going and thats thats." "Fine but I'm not going to like it."She yelled. Her mother sighed then walked away. Zouge and Mysee hated each other. They always did for many resons but one of the main resons was because that Zouge was a princess and well Mysee wasn't. "Why why do I have to go?"That all Zouge trought as her and her famliy fue to Mysee house...or to her death.
There, Bluebell was waiting, for her current boyfriend, Yang the rabbit. They were both in high school, in the same class. And when Yang first saw Bluebell as a new girl, he knew it was upendo at first sight. A few days after Bluebell was getting use to the school . . . That was when he asked her to go the the school dance with her. She was happy, but nervous at the same time. Now here she is, in her lovely bright blue dress, with a few bells down the side, waiting for Yang. She was always the earliest at anything . . . Now she was 15 dakika early for the prom to begin.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥...
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Quesiton ONE!!!!!!!
Hello, what is your name?

Tak:... Tak. au do wewe want the longer version...?
Midnight: HI! I'M MIDNIGHT! DO wewe WANT TO BE MY FRIEND!?!?
Mist: I'm going to try to ignore the strange voice that came from either my head au the air...
Tear:...who alisema that?
Luner: Luner... wait... WHERE ARE YOU!?!?
Trix: Why do wewe want to know?
Starcher: Starcher Nova. What's yours?
Dark: *Walks away*
Virus: *answers through creepy poem*

QUESTION TWO!!!!!!
Would wewe like a cookie?

Tak: Uh... no
Midnight: SURE! *eats cookie quickly*
Mist: where has it been?
Tear:... no
Luner: Uh... sure. *pretends to eat cookie...
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The inayofuata day, I felt myself passing out again.
"Fight it!" I told myself. I splashed water on my face. "Ahh... Much better," I said.
Suddenly, I heard a completely different, yet familiar voice shout "ACK!! IT BUUURRRRNNNSS!!!"... Through my mouth.
My eyes bulged. I slapped my hand over my mouth. "It's... you." I said. It was Madjin, that Honey badger guy.
"No really, dumb fu**. Thanks, Captain Obvious," Madjin alisema through my mouth. "Shut UP!" I shouted.
"I'm trapped in you, and there's nothing wewe can do about it," I said.
"...Well, it's Sunday. CHURCH day," I said.

Later that day, I was at church....
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