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f I had to identify the most important step in uandishi an essay, I would probably say it was the organization. Coming up with a thesis is a big part of essay writing, but it doesn’t mean anything if wewe do not have the proper support for it. That is where organization comes into play. If wewe can put your thoughts in the right order, wewe can get people to feel a certain way as they read your work. It’s like taking them on a journey through your mind.

Here are some tips to help wewe effectively organize your essays in the future.

The Pyramid Method
This is my inayopendelewa way to write essays, and I feel it is the most effective. wewe start kwa barely introducing what wewe are going to talk about, and then wewe build a pyramid of support from there. In the conclusion, wewe make your big, powerful assertion that makes people go “Wait, what just happened? I just got bitch, kahaba slapped kwa brilliance!” This method is great for persuasive essays, but I use it for everything. It just makes sense.

The Inverted Pyramid Method
This is the exact opposite of the method above, where wewe start with a big idea and then support it afterward. I don’t like this because it lacks progression. It doesn’t keep people hooked. It may work well for a web makala au a news story, but not a college essay. Nevertheless, some professors upendo this method, so wewe just have to test it out and see what they think.

The sandwich, sandwichi Method
In this method, wewe start with something big, provide support, and end with something equally big. Basically wewe have a thesis at the beginning that poses a swali au a problem, and then wewe have a conclusion that majibu it. I have used this method a few times, and it has worked well. I would recommend using it at least once au two.

General Tips for Essay Organization
In the case of a compare and contrast essay, don’t do one paragraph for one story and then another paragraph for the other story. Try to mix the two together and compare them point kwa point. Each point would be an makala all its own.

Try to talk about events in chronological order so your readers can follow them. If wewe jump all through a book au resource, wewe may lose track of your focus and fluidity.

Don’t be afraid to use small paragraphs if wewe have different topics in each of them. It is better to do that than to have a long paragraph that no one wants to read through.

If wewe follow my tips above for your inayofuata essay in college, wewe should be able to wow the professor and get your point across at the same time. Good luck!
posted by Fangirl99
As i walk down the street,i wish i was still in bed.Dreaming about the siku that just ended.Summer vacation


"back to hell,"i said.When i say that,i mean school.
in my books,its basically the same thing.

"hey jamie!"my friend izzy calls from across.

i run down t otalk to her

"hey,"i said,putting my hair back form my face."
"wheres Ashlee?"

"umm,i gotta go,bye!" she ran out of site.

"at lunch,i treid to fine izzy and ask her what the hell happened earlier

"hey,izz"i said,sitting inayofuata to her.
"wheres ashlee?"

"um......"she looked like she was gonna vomit au something.i didnt understand why.

"ive been wondering...
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~Carmen~
I couldn't believe how real the dream felt: the ocean, washing over my skin; the sun pouring heat over my head; the seaweed tickling my feet. It felt zaidi of reality in the dream than in the actual description of life, which scared me like hell. The vividness was choking my senses alive, but I was able to hear the cry in the background; yes, very angelic and begging me to come closer, to ease the pain. I tried turning, but my body willingly ignored me, and I flailed about desperately.
And then I saw him.
The black kofia wrapped around him like a religious cloak, twirling farther down...
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hujambo this is the l;atest chapter to the story, it is set when Nessie isfive months pregnant...x Hope wewe enjoy and keep your eys peeled for the inayofuata chapter...x
Amber/Twilightsauce

I slipped mums wedding dress over my head, it fitted perfectly. Mum smiled and sighed as she wiped a joyous tear from my eye.
“Don’t cry baby, Alice will kill us if wewe ruin your makeup she has spent all morning getting wewe ready.” She laughed looking at me with a delighted expression on her face,
“Oh mum! I am so happy; Jake is waiting down there for me isn’t he?” I asked nervously. I had felt a little queasy...
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posted by I_love_Mikey
Sobriety is beyond a horizon for you,
One wewe won't be alive to even get to.
Your mind is set to be dead in 10
Years, my fears, my tears,
don't matter, your emotionless, here.

My bothersome phone calls,
"I'm just checking in"
"Yeah, I don't care"
I can't ever win.

My eyes are taped open,
horrific picha replay,
and even when I close them,
they're imprinted in my mind,
they're there to stay.

Blackness engulfs me,
like a whirlpool of nothing,
Your arch nemesis,
Your pal,
Your meaningless suffering.

Why do wewe do this,
to yourself, and to me?
I don't get why wewe mess around,
just let yourself be!
posted by TeanRose424
 this is just somthing that describes me :)
this is just somthing that describes me :)
I could feel everything i could feel my muscels ripple. I could feel the warmth flooding around me. I could feel my joints streghthen. I could feel myself becoming a god. It feltjust as he had said. i couldnt beleive the plesure.

He looked at me then. His face looked concern. I had been moaning from the pleasure. I had been calling out for more. The pleasure was leaving me though i could feel it. It had been many days i could feel it. I was relunctent to have it leave me, i was relunctent to have the feeling of my life leave. It was unbelievable.

Zach looked at me in wonder. i stared back...
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posted by Funnygirl77
 upendo bites
love bites
upendo sucks especially when the one wewe love, couldn't possible upendo wewe back. When Kisa and Zack Finley get together, all hell brakes lose. Kisa finds out a striking secret about Zack, and that secret, can be the end of everything good as she knows it. Will Zack and Kisa work threw it? au will it break them up as well.

"Kisa,kisa" jimmy, hunitumia was waving her hand back in forth in front of Kisa's face, Kisa, shook her head. "huh, what?" jimmy, hunitumia rolled her eyes, "I was trying to tell wewe that me and Blake are going to whacth a movie, and i was wondering if wewe wanted to go?" Kisa blanked "sure, what...
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posted by coolie
They all looked around. Just in the middle of nowhere,” alisema bill. Bill searched in his pockets. Hey! My mini meddle fan! He took it out of his pockets and attached it to… the ground. Teehee! I so got you!” alisema the mwandishi of this really weird book. “You should of seen the look on your face!” Back to the story. Bill turned the shabiki on. What are wewe doing?” asked Death. “I’m going to blow us out of here” Bill continued. If I add 3+4, from my calculations, that would equal… 9. Oh I get it. At 9-o-clock we can’t four-get to blow us 3 out of here,” answered Ted. Exactly!”...
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posted by rose12345
 I'm haunted kwa the memory's i hold
I'm haunted by the memory's i hold
"No, NO"! I was having that dream, the one were my best friend drowned last summer. I was eight years old when I went to summer camp I didn't want to go but my mom alisema that it would be a good experience for me. Mrs. Jackson signed Jamie up, Jamie Jackson was and forever will be my best friend. When it was time to go to camp, we sat on the bus together, A couple of the girls from our school went too. They started to pick on me, and Jamie defended me.Towards the last siku of summer camp the girls dared Me and Jamie to jump into the lake, I backed out, but Jamie took the dare.
"It's the only...
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posted by viju
 Impossible
Impossible
wewe just tear me down,
Throw me all around,
Treat me like a clown.
Hit me on the head,
Push me off the bed,
Keep the hamster (But not me), Well fed.
I know what wewe think,
And before wewe blink,
I'm asking wewe about it.....
You're not wanna answer,
You are such a disaster,
But wewe have to answer me

(Chorus)
Why do wewe do this to me?
What is the reason why?
What have I ever done to hurt you?
Why are wewe abusing,
When my anger, my upendo are fusing?
You abuse to me,
But wewe want me to stay with you.
I'm sick of the abuse,
Wanna turn wewe onto mute,
Before wewe blow up and shoot.
To be with u
its impossible

Taking deep breath...
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posted by kacimay72293
Chapter One

My name is Kitty Prince. I was borne on July 22, 1809. I was the young daughter of a lord. I was loved kwa all even though I was the third daughter.
My older sisters were Elizabeth at age twenty-one and Sarah Maine at age nineteen. they were both very beautiful. Elizabeth had golden brown eyes and deep brown hair that curled around her face. She loved muziki and art. Sarah was very plain with brown eyes and hair. She loved to read hated parties.
I had fair blonde hair like my late mother's and ocean blue eyes. I loved to dance, sing, and grow a garden in the back of our manor. I was...
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posted by HarryPLover
Here I phase
Here in my old age
Here I run with no place to go
Here I stand with no purpose
Here I am with no show,
No lights,no cameras,no grace
Here I am with this world having me in it's tight embrace.

But I won't give in.
For God Loved me so.

Here I am in this place,
Here I am just watching the world race.
Watching the world fall apart,
Here I am just waiting for a new start.
As this breaks my heart,
I know I will jiunge God's cart,his army,his people and I will live in heaven above.

Here I am asking you,
What will wewe do?
Here I am watching wewe phase,
Here I am watching wewe turn to old age.
With no place to go,
Here I am telling wewe don't want to low.

As we change and as we grow,
This world will face judgment,This I know.
Don't turn to old age,
Don't get Lost in the world's maze.
Save wewe self.
Don't let yourself phase.......
posted by amethyst44
I never knew. My whole life, no one had the courage au the right to tell me what happened. I had to find out the hard way, and that nearly cost me my life.
Last December was an important time for me. I never moved before, and it was all brand new to me. Moving boxes wasn't the challenge. The hardest part was coming into school during the middle of the mwaka and not having a clue what the people were like. So far, my only friend here was the next-door neighbor Joselynn, some seventy-year old lady that had her grandkids over as much as possible. My mom encouraged me to meet them and possibly play...
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posted by Kimi4312
Chapter Five:Past
Hayley's Journal, I decided to see what my friend's mom had been doing then I watched through the window then I saw Maddie's mom beat her and broke her nose, it is scary to watch someone get hurt like this but wewe know wewe wouldn't do anything about it, well unlike Hayden, I'm always a tough one and she's like always wanting a unusually life but our lives are changing since we met our mom, we didn't know she was our actual mom because she looked so young and well she was 15 but she is between 29 au 30 right now, I seen Maddie get burned kwa matches kwa her mom, it scares me to...
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posted by avatarluver990
GUYS, DO NOT READ THIS STORY, I WILL BE RE-WRITING A NEW ONE!!! IT WILL COME UP SOON!! DO NOT READ THIS ARTICE!!! Thank you.

Benedic hated the trip! It wasn't that bad though, it was at the beach, with rides and fast chakula restaurants and cool sights; except that where him and his family were going to stay for summer vacation was at an old ngome that it once belonged to a prince. It was old and delapadated, it needed some paint and it smelled like someone died at the front steps of the castle.
"Dad," he grumbled. "Do we have to stay here?"
"Well all of the hotels are booked." his father explained....
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posted by avatarluver990
GUYS, DO NOT READ THIS STORY!! I WILL BE RE-WRITING IT! IT'LL BE COMING UP SOON!!!!! DO NOT READ THIS ARTICLE!!!!! Thank you.

Not too long ago, probably this time period, deep below in the sea, where no human had ever crossed, was a kingdom; a kingdom strong and powerful which was ruled kwa a great sea king named Octlantus; he was a powerful ruler, along with his trident. The people respected the Sea King that named the kingdom Octlantia in his honor. Octlantus and his wife, Sea Queen Lynsca, had seven beautiful daughters: Jinsya, Kynlana, Otsyncia, Renya, Tsyniana, Isynlana, and Nynxa. The Sea...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 19
I followed the voices and saw aro and caius talking
-hi dear Bella
-hi caius
I alisema shyly
-dear Bella its great to see you!
He shook my hand.thank god he didn’t hug me I’m getting tired of that!
-oh Bella I heard your staying with us.
-for a while
I said
-well wewe know we will be happy if stay
-sure sure..
-oh Bella its so nice to see wewe upright!
Heidi alisema rushing towards me and …hugged me.
Ohhhh god I hate hugs …..eee but I didn’t want to offend her and hugged her back lightly
Me, jane ,alec and rennata were sitting on a black sofa talking about everything that happened in the 100...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 16
200 years later
Me and matt traveled the world and had a great time we even met some other covens like the irish coven,the romanian coven and the amazon coven we lived with them for 49 years and then took off cause it was getting kind of boring we went to paris and lived there for a cuppel off years then we went to new york,spain,egypt,germany,china,italy we even met the voltury they werent that nice! But kind of kreepy, specialy there hoods!but then we went back to london.
I got off the kitanda and got dressed matt was sitting on the kitanda kusoma a news paper and watching t.v
-what are...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter15
Tanya looked at me coldy,full of hate……like she wanted to rip my head off if she could.i couldn’t stand her looks so I just turned around and pulled matts hand to follow me I took off running I heard tanyas voice I think she alisema bitch, kahaba under her breath I heard her saying other stuff but I tuned her out and ran faster I ran faster and faster thinking about edward I hated him so much but some part of me still loved him and deep down I knew the amount of upendo my moyo held for him will never be the same with matt but I upendo matt so much and I want to spend my entire life with him...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
Chapter 14
Bella pov
Me and matt went nyumbani and changed I took out the left ravioly out of the fridge and warmed it up for charlie I went upstaires and fiond matt lying on my kitanda kusoma romeo and juliet
-that's one of my faves!
I sat down beside him and read a few pages with him when I heard Charlie's cruiser coming near the house I got up and went down stairs matt followed me he kissed my forehead and went and sat on the kitanda turnning on the TV watching baseball ugh! I I don’t get that game and it reminds me of old times.
I ran up stairs and took romeo and juliet and went back down stairs in...
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posted by joe-edwardfan
I WANT TO THANK leisha4 FOR HELPING ME!
Chapter 13
6 months later
Edwards pov (from what happens in the last chapter)
I was so dipresed its been 6 months scince bellas missing I am sitting on the coutch watching nothing. my family was dipresed too so jaspered went out a lot not wanting to be in the same room as us he tried to cheer us up but it didn’t work rose was less concerned and acted like nothing had happen Emmett and Alice were mostly like me they loved Bella as their sister Emmett alwas made fun of her and made her blus, Alice was so dipressed zaidi like me ,now she hated me less and tried...
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