For me Twilight was too easy to read. I could predict what would happen and the plot was too easy. The thing is, the plot isn't bad. Wanyonya damu exist, that's cool. wewe know one, yes, very cool. But the way Stephenie Meyer introduces it, how she developed her characters, how she modeled the vampire species, that is where Twilight gets people annoyed. It represent the iceburg that sunk the titanic, the heal that killed Achilles...
Us Harry Potter mashabiki wouldn't be as hateful if the Twilight characters were as real and developed as J Rowling's, if the characters weren't *poof* beautiful, attractive, smart, strong and if the plot was something truly well thought off.
Okay Harry Potter fans, imagine Twilight didn't exist. Rowling released a series about vampires. The heroine is a girl who falls in love, after years of friendship with a vampire. They get married, the end.
wewe find in this 'Rowling's twilight' an elaborate plot. There is a logical porblem, climax as climatic as it gets, a twist that nobody could have expected.
The girl isn't a Bella. It's a Hermione, au a Ginny. She refuses to play weak and defenceless she stands kwa herself and doesn't depend. This sceries could be alright, no?
That's because the idea behind Twilight isn't bad. I just wish somebody other then Meyer would have gotten the idea and how it would've been developed more. If Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ginny and Ron Weasley's personalitites and characters would've been the Twilight vampires, we'd ALL be gaga for this new series.
What's wrong with Twilight, it isn't the diea of vampires.
It's how theese Wanyonya damu are, and how Bella is portrayed.
ps. I,m not saying Meyer is a bad writter. Everybody needs constructive critisism for her first time writting. If she writes agian I'll surely try it. This is also one of my first makala and I,m not very old, so please keep that in mind.
As you can see, some of his Niffler genes are actually visible. If you'll look to his stomach...
